DARK TEMPTATION 2 Updated NEW THREAD & PT 22 on 30-8-2015/ PG 139

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Sheetalvasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

I am so sorry par mujhe pw chahiye!

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

Nice parts

Loved both of them

So maan and geet came face to face and both were fighting like cat and dog

They can't go for divorce for one year as for their marriage clause

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fariya20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

kya hassen mulakat hai

husband wife ki 😉

toh dono ek dosrey ka murder karney ko bekarar hai

dono ek hotel mein but alag alag partner k sath 🤢

maan think k geet act kar rahi hai

but poor he dont know what she is 😆

Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago

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sz01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

hey.. srry for the late comments ... but was kind of busy... i loved ur update of part 8 and the double update part 9 nd 10... it was awesome and full of fun... u did a magnificent work..the meeting of geet and maan was tooo awesome as they kissed .and feelin sry for maan as he seriously got injured butit was good... maan is too much and totally naughty... but loved him in it...geet is also very modern type...waiting for the story to unfold and thank u... srry for late comment ... u r awesome writer... waiting for the next part eagerly...😊

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gill123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

nice update dono buri tarah phass gaye

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flowing_river

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

both are same and thus creating friction between both of them..

and they are trapped for 1 year in marriage where they can't leave...

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..neelanjana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Both parts were fabulous ! As expected their face off was superb ! I liked a lot.
Gosh !! Both are fighting like enemies ready to kill each other...don't know how they would fall for each other.
Both goes out to spend their night but end up in same hotel 😆 like " tu jahan jahan chalega mera saya sath hoga '' 😆 and think the same that other one is spying him/her ! Inka kuchh nhi ho sakta ..
both are shameless kind of jodi made in heaven ."jahan 2 ghar bigadne the wahan ek hi bigdega" ...
But I love their cat /dog fight 😆
They are trapped by their fathers for 1 year. 😛
Awesome !! Its going interesting...

Edited by ..neelanjana - 10 years ago

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mlaran852

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

they actually meet for the first time!!!!
and what an encounter they had...she hit him and he kissed her...
maan saw her at the hotel and thought that she is following him...
they both went to maans dad like kids that fought at school...
loved maan's dad, he had the best reaction ever...the man is great...
what will they do now???

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harshu...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#479

Rocking shocking update ,
maan kissed her Forcibly .
this is the best couble ,
same yet different in many ways ,
both always trying to overpower each other ,
he thought she ws spying him ,
nd she he ws spying her ,
Liked their nok-jhok .
thmx for pm's .
sorry for late comments !!""