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Tanya, first of all a big big virtual hug to you for the awesome detailing you gave in this update, precisely of Geet. Also, it was a very very smart update you gave there. So applause.

I will comment in details too.

I loved how you mentioned Geet's attire. Very professional. It said she might be a simple girl but she is professional when it comes to her job. No wearing suits and sporting a braid. You also made Geet a bit modern there. She doesnt shy away from wearing skirts and shirts.

Also loved how she thought she doesnt care if he helps her or not but then immediately reminds herself of Vivaan and gather enough courage to speak to him.

But when she speaks, she knows how to shut the person in front of her. The way she said "Sir you don't seem it, you sound it" Hilarious 🤣 Then she totally goes into her sherni avatar forgetting that she was even nervous just a while before demanding an answer about how can he fire his emoployees.

The confidence with which she said why he shouldnt fire her was awesome. You are making me her fan. She actually looked like a Don's daughter to me there, fearless. No wonder even Maan's face softened listening to her reasoning. Her words were straight to the point with no sugarcoating to it and that is what I loved about her. She was ready to lose her job but not of the employees which she considered happened cos of the havoc she brought in his life.

Then you told about Maan. He dint fired them only cos of his anger. He found mistakes in their work. I loved the line about that he understands the importance of a job and income. Gave a lot about his character professionally.

But the rest of update was hilarious. Loved the humor punches you added there. Specially when she said he should be proud that was willing to play his girlfriend. God, she is crazy. Then she has the guts to ask him if he is a gay. 🤣 No wonder Maan finally lost his patience with her. And then she returns back to take her coffee back. 😆

Another scene you put out that i loved was Sameer and Rudra. Sameer tells him they cant carry on with the alliance for his daughter has fallen in love with Maan Khurana. But Rudra couldnt take the rejection of his son. Sameer knew that and so tries to explain him for the sake of the friendship they share. Cos he neither wants to lose his daughter, nor want to lose his best friend. But Rudra isnt understanding that and is planning something. You gave such a good scope here. So many things can happen here if one tries to sit and think about it.

You made Shasha a positive character and a good friend of Geet beside Pinky now. Now thats a surprise and I totally love this Shasha. She is already drooling over some Nikhil and I really found her cute when she complained to Geet for the disturbance.

Shasha happened to be Maan's distant relative. Trust me, I tried to find understand how exactly Shasha is connected to Maan, but sadly it went above my head. 😆

Geet tried to get some information out of Shasha about Maan, but she is as unaware as Geet is. Both only know about his profressional life thanks to media.

But you did gave something about Maan there. Shasha said he carried forward his father's business for dadima's sake. So there is some past to it. He also seems to share a nice bond with dadima? Not sure.

So only Shasha and Pinky know about Geet wanting Maan to play her lover in front of her dad cos he wanted to get her married. But they both are unaware about the real reason, nor do they know Geet's real identity.

I enjoyed how frustrated Geet was growing at not finding anything about Maan to have a upper hand. The bickering btw Geet and Shasha was nice.

Last part of the update made me excited. So Geet will take dadima's help.

Okay, so in short I have loved every bit of the update. l

I really cant wait to see how the story is going to go from here.

So excited and eager.

-Sanjana!

Also All The Best to every non writers out there who are going to be writing for the first time.

-Sanjana!

Wowww guts man im really impressed with her reply to maan

Fabulous update, story is moving very well inspite of several writers.

Amusing...

Awesome Idia
All credit goes to Tanya
Sabhi writers ek saath ek FF mei thik IPl ki tarah
Geet ne Maan ko tough job de diya hai
I loved her fighting sprit
All parts are written very Beautifuly
I loved it

Amazing update shasha is so close relative of maan

Awsome updates aur so happy ke sasha is positive in here aur geet ka brain buhut tez hai she will get info frm Dadi abt maan aur will make him her BF

spectacular update! superbly written. Maan angry n tells her no! Geet annoyed! she confronts him n is raedy 2 los her job if he rehires those he fired! he says he didn't fire anyone! Geet reveals y he can't fire her! They argue! She asks if he is gay! Maan livid! he tells her to Get Out! Sameer Handa tells Rudra tht Geet is in love with Maan! so wedding is off! Rudra upset! Sasha is Geet's friend! she asks 4 help 2 convince Maan! Sasha refuses! Geet decides 2 asks dadi! update soon