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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

part 6 - I liked this part...she has audacity to give him back...lol...she took back away coffee made by her...lol...liked the humor punch in this part...she wants favor from him then why she keeps talking like that...she asked him was he a gay...she was ready to give her job for the sake of employees' job...

rudr was not happy that geet rejected his son...he was planning something against Sameer...

so she dig out from sash about his personal life and will emotionally blackmail to him thru' his dadi...dadi will be very happy that maan moving on...

cont soon

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Wow nice idea and concept. Thanks to all the old and new writer participating in it and giving us a wonderful story line.

Part 1

Ye Geet ne kya kiya. It was hilarious how she kept her proposal to help her in front of Maan. Sabki help karma hai to Geet ki bhi karo. Bas jyada kuch nahi maanga sir bf bane bola hai uske dad ke samne. N par se dhamki aur de rahihai. Guts hai ladki me.

Part 2

Well done Sanjana. I loved how u wrote it. U should try your hand out in writing. WE will love it..

A flashback was needed on how Geet lands into the problem. waise Geet ko koi reason nahi chahiye koi problem me padne ka who toh problem apne app attract ho data hai.

Her father wants to fix her marriage with the groom of his choice, Geet not at all happy. She has strong points not to agree to his words, which i strongly agree. Doesn't want any association with underworld activities even after marriage.

Part 3

Another funny part. This story is a mixture of comedy, thriller , romance with the essence of different writers touch. That makes it more pleasant to read.

Lion ke den me entry ho chuki hai. Ab koi nahi bacha sakta Geet ko. Phir bhi chapar chapar karne ki aadat nahi gayi uski. Maan bursting out on her. He has some unresolved past jiski wajah se abhi tak aisa young angry type man hai.

Aakhir wat it is tat is holding him back??

Geet ke dad ka call. Zor ka patka..dad ko dab pata chal gaya !!!!!

Part 4

Oh Thank God.. Sapna tha. Wanna last update ko dekhkar heart beat upar ho gayi. Yaha Geet madam aaram se so nahi hai n waha are office staff ki band baji hui hai. How can she sleep in such times... I Wonder.😕

Pinky giving the latest updates abt the toofan that has occurred in office. Maan firing employees just hearing the name of Geet...

Ab Geet kaise thanda karegi Maan ko???

Part 5

Wow Julie u wrote a fab update. U should write more parts.

Thinking of a plan.. Geet ke plans adieu honge.. thinking what drama to do. LOL, Pouting. Check. Coffee. Check. This meeting is going to be funny with Geet antics which Maan secretly loves.

Liked Maan POV. Slowly we r getting hints abt his past.

Geet ki entry ho gayi. Sugarcoating the words to melt him.. Lol

"Maan meanwhile decides to ignore Geet ... but why does she have to smell like Jasmine?"

This line is dam hilarious. I lovvved it. Couldn't stop laughing.

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Part 5 Something about lies is unsettling with Maan . Geet Handa's cartoon like gestures and behavior irks him but her smelling like Jasmine make him curious . Nice part

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Part 6 Geet has so much confidence 👏in front of MSK😈 its almost as if Geet is like in her own element in front of Maan which is probably why she took his name as her boyfriend . Loved Sasha & Geet's conversation 😆

even she doesn't know much about Maan so he is still a mystery other than being a known rich business tycoon .

On the other hand Rudr is not taking the rejection of his son well and he tells Sameer he would need time to sort this out . Geet hits upon an idea to know about Maan and that is through Maan's dadi ...

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

I loved part 6!!! The story is moving along like I had been thinking too.

But you really brought out the strong and confident Geet here. But more than just strong and confident, this girl has attitude and she is fearless. I loved that!

I was also thinking the answer to Geet's problems is Daadi.

I cannot believe Geet asked Maan if he was gay! OH. MY GOD!!!! And Maan's answer was classic!