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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update jannat loved ur concept and idea of an ff lovely intro really funny how abt making it steamy romantic thriller with a comedy ka tadka
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely funny update mitu loved it how geet wnts maan to be her fake lover he is utterly 😡 on her par ye jhalli ko kaun samjhaye msk ko dhamki 😲 par geets dad is don agar maan ne geet ki help nahi ki to he will be 🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love this FF

Unique concept 👍🏼


Geet and Sasha are friends 😲


Thank you all the writers
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely awesome update sanjana loved it how geet dug her own grave yaar uski marzi to pooch leta bas decide kar liya she wants a simple life for herself maybe somewhere she finds that security in maan that's why she blurted out his name chalo atleast geet ke dad ko maan se koi pro nahi just that they arnt in love for real but not to worry hamari honhaar writers haina loving this story yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's my 1st comment on ur story dear...i just read only 6th part & it's Superbbb update...
Geet is tooo muchhh...
loved it...
Continue sooonnn...
nd PM me tooo plzzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
All parts r Mindblowinggg...
Geet as a Don daughter is Outstandinggg...
loved all parts sooo muchhh...
Excited for Vivi entry...
Continue Soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 7
Geet waited with hope and anticipation for dadima to pick up the call...she could be the only saviour...
If someone could rule over THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA...den it was Dadima...after all she made sure dat maan took geet as his assistant...inspite of geet making a disaster by spilling coffee on maan s shirt on her interview ..!!!!

"Hello..geet bete"...dadima picked up the call happily..
"Hello dadima ...how are u..???" Geet responded sulkingly making dadima aware that something is fishy..
"I am fine..bete...kaise yaad kiya aapne. .???" Dadima responded
"Dadima ...u love me right...??" Geet asked in a sugary tone to melt dadima before she tells her about the fuss she has landed herself in.
"Geet kya kiya aapne..???"
"Dadima...u would help me right..?" Geet continued in the same tone...
Dadima sighed,she was now sure her hot headed grand son would be involved..." Tell me...wat is the problem"
And den geet narrated her the entire story,"dadima bataeeye na kya karoo mai...??? Ye zaalim Singh khurana baat nahin maan rahe hai...!!
"Hmmm...beta dariye mat...and do as I say...maan would definitely be your boyfriend..."

Geet hoped that this would work, and it did start showing results seeing maan restless and not concentrating in his work.

Its been three times ...full three times that geet came to maan's cabin...and not even once had she talked bout the issue again. She just left once the work is done. Maan was completely distracted. Considering how geet is , it was unlike of her nature to shut herself up after him shouting over her only twice. Suddenly maan felt restless...may be geet is upset with him ...and may be she really needed help..
The next time geet came, maan decided to have a talk with her.

" ...ah ...geet...WO...I have to talk to you...sit...".maan told uneasily.
"Yes sir...???" Geet responded sitting down opposite him and maintaining a straight face.
"" ...WO..you were telling... about it in the morning...about the...wedding thing...y did u need my help to act as your fake boyfriend" Maan spoke hesitatingly...
"WO sir...u don't have to worry ...I will tell papa that we broke up.." Geet told acting very sad and gloomy.
"Geet tell me" maan spoke sternly.
"Actually sir my dad wants me to marry his friend rudra uncle's son.. ..and...I don't want to...so to escape out of situation...I told I am dating you..."
"Rudra as in the don rudra...???"
"Yes sir..."
"and by saying we broke up you would end up marrying him...".. Maan replied instantly and was completely shocked." .one : she would be married...two: married to a don's son...NO WAY...not realizing why the thought of geet being married pinched him ...

***bingo**** geet thought and was pleased with his reaction, however continued acting ..." yes sir, I guess that is the only way out...and moreover vivaan is a nice guy and not a don unlike his dad..."
"So what...??? You can't marry him" maan told with a tone of command and finalty in his voice..
Seeing geet looking at him confused .maan replied..."uhh...I will...I will help you out...when is your dad coming...???"
"Its OK sir...I will deal with it... you don't worry..." Geet was enjoying his plight...after all its not everyday that you see maan stuttering
"Geet...I told I will help you.." Maan told sternly and ordering her.
Geet mentally did a victory dance ...she wanted to jump and give maan
a tight hug and a kiss... But still continued her act..."OK sir as you say...papa will come in evening at five.."
Once inside her cabin geet could not stop herself from jumping and pumping her fist in the air..Surely ignoring and making maan curious worked for her. .

Edited by nish285 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
PS...I am completely new...!!!so spare me if it's not up to mark...and I wanted to participate seeing so many of them participating...and it was fun and I enjoyed it...thanks to Tanya for such an initiative and also for reviewing...waiting to see how the story goes from here...:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update geet goes to apologise to maan but he is hell angry somehow she sensed his pain as there might be reason he is so brute and ruthless she says she tell her dad the truth and marry whoever he chooses but further makes him angry he wants nothing to do with her but geet saw something in his eyes for her is it love is she in love with him but before she could think anything her dad calls and tells he knows the truth horrifying her
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update mitu thoda bada update likhti yaar ok from scenario it seems geet fainted and maan save her and also in his rage fired 8 ppl geet jhalli phirse monster ke den mein jana padega either it was her dream

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