(new thread added)MY INNOCENT SURRENDER-2 #2 Updated P 12 on P-131 - Page 71

Oh my god !!!!! .
what a twist ,
I am loving it ,
maan did all this to make geet his ,
me so so happy now b'coz agar geet ki shaadi dev se karake maan sad hota toh itna interesting nii hota,,

Part 10
geet is scared with maan's attitude ,
hmm msk nd pooja ,
is it possible ????
me waiting eagerly for next part !!!!!!

I always like obsessive nd posessive maan ,
pm me when u update the next part ,

Awesome update . dev ne nt se sari sacchai nikal hi li chalo banda the grt msk ka bhai hai prove ho gaya . but on a serious note sach mei bechara dev ke sath bura huya ..but i dont care about dev i only care about my maaneet so m happy ki woh geet se dur hai :p maan se wait nehi ho raha issliye itni jldi pandit ko bhi bula liya :p geet ko dev ne sab sacchai bata di woh bhi itni jldiii !!! N geet ne man bhi liya.. Egrly waiting for next

Super part

finally completed reading all ten parts again
fab concept yr..
maan ka character is an icing on the top..
the way he is obsessed with geet my god he is a pure devil..
the way he is dreaming about her those scenes prove how intensely she is affecting him..
great parts..

Dev is a Casanova but he is changed with geet in his life
maan is searching for his mystery girl but unable

finally mili girl..
but she is dev's fiance

omg he agreed never thought he will but guess what devil h
kuch plan kiya hoga
he can't let her go
itna toh I know..

so he trapped her , much expected maan will make her his , he is quite obsessed that will definitely do something

fab concept

dev shocked to know the truth

Hi I m new here and read ur story all parts in one go il like it must say ur superb writer 1 st part main meets feet he is not interested in women but lost in her he dreams abt her 2 and part 2 ho he again dreams abt her dev and feet r related with each other 3 red part main saw feet in the office and searches her in devas cabin feet wants talk to maan abt dev andvrealarion part 4 main saw geet again and she nurses his wound but recognize her later knows and lost the chance part 5 ho so there is a mysterious persons who is behind feet and main knows abt mysterious girl that she his his brother girlfriend and felt pain. Part 6 main want to meet feet for sake of dev finally dev got engaged to feet main again thinks abt her part 7 dev got unknown cal and not cms to the seen and blavkmai
S her .feet saw him and says is happy with relation part 8 dev idiot left is wedding again got a mysterious call part 9 finally main married to feet and dev is kidnapped by main and nt part Gert is heart broken and dev got to know that main is behind all this he wants geet for himself and also threatens feet to accept him and feet hates him very mush . I must say u contioue ur story this foot so carry own