(new thread added)MY INNOCENT SURRENDER-2 #2 Updated P 12 on P-131 - Page 72

Amazing n thrilling update
Lol maan become true devil n he make geet dev life hell ...

dev tricked gundas n he came to know the whole truth from nt how maan planed everything against him n geet he felt so dishearted after knowing whole truth ...here maans obsession for geet made her scared , her life on mess ...
dev confronted maan but maan didn't regrets his deeds and he told dev to leave his mansion but in all dev said something
Bro one day u I'll regrat i think some future indication ...
Maan threatened geet to accept him either he will not regret to have her without her will :P ...I never thought geet n dev comes to know about maan's trap so soon ...now I'm wondering what was gonna in upcoming update n gosh story take 360 degree turn
N geet how she gonna cope up with maan's obsession god head spinning twist like yaar mujye laga tha jab tak maan k true self samne nahi h WO safe h but yaha toh tune boom phod deya dev geet both know maan's trap now what ????
I'm eagerly waiting for the upcoming updates ...its a love story I don't know how maaneet love gonna happen ...why do I hv gut feeling its gonna be sad story but I hv faith on u Richu tune kuch dhamkedar he socha hoga coz whenever its comes to maan's payback time u make sure he will pay heavily...
Sorryyy for my last comment i do feels u dont like my comment n if u feels hurts but yaar trust me or not , I just said like that i hv no intensone to hurt u...n I hv no issues in ur story or anything if I ever don't like any story or track i cant digest I just leave that story simply without making any fuss I know the fact writer know his story better then reader's ...sorry ones again...

nice part...
wanna see what would be the next step of Maan...

Very nice update. Man is obsessed about geet . everythigng has already been revealed. Fearing what will b the next. Geet n Dev both r truly in love with each other. Update soon dear. Waiting for the next.

Plzz i wanna read this stry
if its shifted to blog pls give link di

I like to read this story

I loved the way the story is gng.
n yes of course I was a bit more shocked when maan was being so simple n gave up easily.
bt now the devil is back n I'm loving it.
so pls add me to ur blog.
I'm totally interested in reading it.

Nice part..

Read all parts.honestly speaking i loved ur concept its differnt .i love to read more waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: idunno

to be frank maan lost total respect and he showed he is devil and he snatched his brothers love is disgusting here maan is villain and dev is hero don't know how will you proceed with this story as once respect gone is for ever and geet should never ever love maan,as what he did is totally wrong by snatching someone's happiness to fulfil his desire is completely wrong i didn't like this maan and cant accept any future love story between them unless you bring some big logic twist where we can stop maan hating so much.

read your comment on page 95, so story is going to be more intense and maan will become more devil ,i have read many stories of devil maan, one is running on your ff only, but this one is topping all others, i don't mind if he become so much devil ,but than i will happy to see geet doable devil person as poison kills poison. you portrayed maan was not womanise rand he didn't like dev flirting around,if i am not mistaken,some times i mix up another stories also, so i think there is more in to it i was thinking in this ff geet is -ve character and maan is good,so till he got marry i assumed he is nice person but when you expose secret it was dhamaka bhoom...i just cant digest my all assumption gone wrong for this ff i think dev is negative here but dev turn out bettr than maan,but who knows he might turn out worst than him as in love and war everything is jayaj hota hai, got ur hint cant assume maan as good person now, i am sure now he will consume with her force fully as he is lusting her not loving her the person like him cannot love anybody...