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Posted: 9 years ago

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PS: Posting only half update still writing the the second partAnd do read the NOTE after the second part don't wanna ruin the update by disclosing the crucial points
PMs after I complete the entire update!
Haven't proof read so ignore errorsAlso this update is really important so please pen down your viewsI really need to know your POV

Thank you😳

PART 11

Not all scars show Not all wounds healSometimes you can't always see......the pain someone else feels!

SHIMLA[MAAN'S COTTAGE]

Geet stood motionless outside Maan's room door!... Maan's each and every word had shaken up her entire being!

Everything had collapsed in just matter of seconds! ... Truth in its full glory was so painful that her senses had numbed!

She slowly dragged herself out in the lawns, it seemed that today even nature was crying with her! She stood there in the storm in that negligible clothing, the cold chilly winds hitting her hard! ... Even the heavy downpour seemed powerless in front of the truth that had surfaced out!

The chaos within her was so powerful ... loud and painful that any other thing just seemed immaterial at this instant!

In these few moments her entire life flashed in front of her eyes!

She was again standing at a juncture where she was left all alone! ... Nobody to care for her ... Nobody to love her ... Nobody to hold her! ... Nobody to fill the void within her!!

She crumpled on the ground crying her heart out, the deep buried pain within finally finding its release!

The events in Maan's room broke her down ... his words ... his misery ... his pain ... his helplessness ... shattered her!

The fact that SHE was the cause of his pain butchered her heart into thousands of pieces!

"Samajh nahi aata tumhe ... chali jao yahan se ... akela chod do mujhe ... samjhi tum..." His words echoed in her numb mind and him pushing her away ... had ripped her heart and soul apart !!

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After throwing that cheap woman out of the cottage Geet had rushed back to the room only to find Maan holding the glass of that drugged drink and was about to gulp it ... But thankfully Geet reached in time.

"Sir please woh drink mat pijiye!!" She pleaded.

"Tum ...tum yahan kya kar rahi ho ... aur tumhari himmat kaise hui uss ladki se saath aisa karne ki! ... Woh meri dost thi ... mujhe company dene aayi thi." He burst out.

"Sir woh ladki sahi nahi thi ... yeh drink ...isme kuch hain ... aap please isse mat piyo... please sir meri baat maan lijiye!" She tried again.

Maan looked at the glass meaningfully like in deep thought and then spoke out.

"Theek hain ...main iss drink ko nahi piyunga ... kyunki ab iss drink ko tum piyogi!" Maan put forward his condition.

Geet tried to reason out with him but Maan was not in his senses and was livid with Geet's constant appearances around him inspite of him shunning her away each time.

He wanted to scare her away ... knowing Geet ... Maan was sure that she will never ever even think to do something like this forget drinking! ... So finally she will leave him alone for good!

But here innocent Geet thought if she agreed to Maan's condition then he won't consume that drugged drink. So inorder to stop her Maan, she held the glass and drank the liquid.

Geet's sudden move had caught him off guard and before he could stop her Geet had consumed a fair quantity of that drink.

Maan was quick enough to pull the glass and at once threw it on the ground, breaking it into pieces but now he was seething in anger.

This girl had crossed all limits today!

And here Geet was lost in her own thoughts totally unaware of what was troubling Maan. Now that she had fulfilled his given condition ... Geet thought Maan would comply to her request.

She rushed to bring some water for Maan and was trying to make him drink it. She didn't have much knowledge about how to deal with such situations so the only thing that struck her was to make him drink plain water.

"Sir aap ki tabiyat theek nahi hain ... woh ladki ... usne aap ko kuch pilaya hain ... aap paani pi kar please so jaayiye ... phir main chali jaaungi ... aap ko aaraam milega." She tried to persuade him but ...

"Aaraam milega? ... Main so jao ?... neend aa jaayegi mujhe? ... huh!" He bit out sarcastically.

"Tum jaanti ho Geet ... na jaane kitne dino se ...main chain se nahi soya!"

" ... Neend nahi aati mujhe ... takleef hoti hain ... aur tum ... Ha ha ha
"... Aur tum kehti ho mujhe aaraam milega! ...ha ha ha ..." He laughed at his plight.

"Sir please meri baat maan lijiye ..." She pleaded, totally confused and scared seeing his weird behavior.

And that was it!

"Kyun maanu main tumhari baat? ...huh ... Kya tum meri baat maanti ho?"

"... Baar baar ... har baar main tumhe apne aap se door karta hoon ... toh kyun aa jaati ho mere paas? ... Itna bhala- bura sunaane ke baad bhi ... koi farak nahi padta tumhe ...hain na?"He shouted moving away from her.

"Samajh kyun nahi aata tumhe ke ... main tumhe apne aap se ... door karna chahta hoon!" He paused for a moment and then again walked up to her.

"Lekin phir bhi tum baar baar ... mere aur bhi ...paas aa jaati ho!" Holding her Maan whispered angrily.

" ... Kya bigaada hain maine tumhare ...huh ... jo tum mujhe itna dard deti ho? ... Bolo Geet?" Maan held her shoulders and confronted her harshly.

"Main ... main aap ko dard ... nahi ... main kaise ?..." Tears poured down her eyes hearing his words.

But Maan was so zoned out that he failed to even acknowledge what he was doing or how his outburst was affecting Geet.

"Haan tum mujhe dard deti ho Geet! ... Bahot dard deti ho ...itna ki bahot takleef hoti hain mujhe!"

" ... Raat raat bhar jagta rehta hoon main ... tadapta rehta hoon ... tumhare wajah se ... sirf tumhare liye!!" Maan burst out, his fingers digging in her soft skin

"Takleef ... meri wajah se?" Geet murmured.

"Haan Geet! ...Takleef hoti hain mujhe!"

"Jaanti ho iss takleef ko? ... Kabhi mehsoos kiya hain tumne ... nahi na?"

"Aaj main tumhe bata ta hoon ... How you make me feel!" Plastering her to him, he started caressing her body.

Pushing her on the bed, he came over her and pulled off her pallo. Geet gasped as he started tantalizing her senses with his touches and kisses. Geet was scared as well as getting seduced on. His body touching every part of her body and ... then she felt it!!

Her eyes widened in shock as she felt his arousal on her bare stomach. Maan had purposely done it so she can realize what it meant to be between a man and woman!

He was still placing wet kisses on her neck, he had already slid off her blouse strap down her shoulder and now his hands were caressing her softness over the flimsy material.

Geet was writhing below him with fear as well as an unknown yearning and excitement!

She couldn't resist anymore and screamed his name.

"MAAN..."

Maan paused for a moment looked into her eyes that were glazed with uncertainty and desire!

He smirked at her response and continuing his mission he while licking her ears whispered.

"I lust over you Geet ... your beauty ... and ... your body! "Geet shivered as he uttered these words.

"All I want is to have you ... claim you ... own you!!" His hands now freely fondling her.

"You think I'm your protector?"

"Tch ... tch ... tch ... NO ... no ... no ... I'm a predator and YOU ... Geet you are the prey!!

"Look at you Geet ... you are away from home ... here in an unknown place ... all alone ... with me ... in my cottage ... at my mercy! I can do anything with you and you won't be able to stop me ... But ... Its just that I don't force myself on women!"

"And no matter how much I yearn for you! ... I can't break your father's trust and ruin your life... your innocence and breach your chastisity!!"

"So just get lost from here!" Getting up at once he ordered turning away from her.

Still lying motionless on the bed, Geet kept gaping at his back .. tears continuously streaming out of her eyes. The hard hitting truth had awakened her from her dream world ... shattering her every fantasy!

Sensing no movement from her side Maan turned again only to find her still frozen in that disheveled state in his bed.Taking in a breath he pulled her up and ...

"Door raho mujhse Geet ... Yahin tumhare liye theek hain ... Meri takleef ko aur mat badhao ... Chali jao yahan se ... Akela chod do mujhe ... Chali jao..." He barked.

Geet still didn't move and Maan's control snapped!

"Samajh nahi aata tumhe ... chali jao yahan se ... akela chod do mujhe ... samjhi tum..." Pushing her out of the room he banged the door shut on her face.

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Geet stood motionless outside Maan's room door!... Maan's each and every word had shaken up her entire being! Remembering all their encounters Geet realized.

How Maan had always protected her from the world and also from himself! ... The iron man for the world seemed so vulnerable today ... And she was the reason for all his pain. He always tried to keep distance between them and she would end up coming all the more close to him ... adding on to his woes.

His pain felt like thousand stabs in her heart!! Dragging her lifeless body out of the house she reached the lawns cursing herself for to have caused so much pain to her Love!!

"Woh hamesha mujhe bachate rahe aur main unhe hi dukh deti rahi! ... Apne hi pyaar ko itna dard diya maine! ... Main kabhi unki takleef ko dekh hi nahi paayi! ... Yeh maine kya kar diya!"

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Edited by heytal - 9 years ago

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

TEASER~~~~~~~~~~

Enjoy Maan's plight
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I need only DD's full pic in this dressif anybody has please help me
thanks in advance
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Thanks Sharmin
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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

TEASER~~~~~~~~~~

'The worst distance between two people is ... misunderstanding and miscommunication !!'

One struggling with frustration while other unable to voice out her feelings! ... Attraction worsening the matters further ... And the gossip around was the final nail in the coffin!

"Mujhe Maan se baat karni hogi ... woh aise kaise kar sakta hain Geet ke saath ."

"Aadi I'm surprised that u didn't see it coming ... I mean it was so obvious ... Maan ke saath kaam karna itna aasaan nahi ... specially Geet jaisi ladki ke liye ... jo underqualified hain aur upar se usne Maan ko irritate karne mein koi kasar nahi chodi."

"Tumhe kya laga Maan react nahi karega? ... Infact I think jo hua accha hi hua hain ... Maine toh Tasha se keh kar Maan ki secretary ke interview ke liye arrangements bhi karwa di hain ... Main khud personally ek ideal candidate select karungi."

"Shasha ... mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain jaise ke tum chahti hi nahi ke Geet ... Maan ke saath kaam kare ... I mean to say that you are kind of trying to keep Geet away from Maan ...isn't it?"

Aadi's statement did create the desired effect. Shasha paused in her way but very next moment she masked her face and then calmly spoke.

" Aadi Chale ... meeting ke liye late ho raha hain!"

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"Maan tumne hi usse job se nikala ... Poor girl! ... Maan U shouldn't have done that to her ... she would be so hurt!" Shasha exclaimed.

"Haan Maan ... agar tumhe Geet se problem ho rahi thi toh mujhe bol deta ... main usse apne saath rakh leta ... yeh tune theek nahi kiya." Aadi stated dejectedly.

"Meri job chali gayi ... maine Maan sir ko itna pareshan kiya issiliye unhone mujhe ... sab log sahi keh rahe the ... I don't deserve this job nor to work with him ... Shasha Mam ne bhi sabki baat suni aur mujhe ghar chale jaane ko keh diya."

"Sab kuch khatam ho gaya! ... Ab main kabhi unse nahi mil paaungi!"

If some one has a 'close up'of this pic do post it on this thread I need it

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Thanks for all your comments

Loved reading them

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Feeling sad too as many of my regular readers not responding😭

Still writing

will update soon

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

INDEX~~~~~~~~~
Note
Part 1
Part 2
Teaser
Part 3
Teaser
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6 A&B
Teaser
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10

Part 11
Thread 2

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

TEASER~~~~~~~~~

Thanks Laxmi for this pic
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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Authors Note~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is one longgg updateHope I could make up for the delay
Not much Maaneet but it was necessary as both Maaneet have strong resolves to stay away from each other and these events will bring a lot of changes in their lives!

Do let me know how it was Your comments really motivates me to write
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Going out of town for a couple of days will get back and catch up with u'll
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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Author's Note

I'm truly ... genuinely sorry for so much delay in updating but I'm doing a course and with all submissions and stuffs I hardly get time to come online forget typing :/
Its not that I have forgotten or that am going to leave this story midway :( I'm truly trying that I can give u updates as soon as I can.Please bear with me and please support me! Let me know how was the update , it will really motivate me to write more n update quickly ;)

Here is the new year gift for all of u lovely people I love u all!!
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

Quick recap :

Maan returns to India after quite some years for important business issue only to find a senior employee of his Company trying to force a girl in KC's office premises. He rescues her but is blown away by her beauty when he comes face to face with her. A sudden lust to claim her rises within him but the fact that the girl Geet is the daughter of one of the most trusted and loyal employee of KC forces Maan to promise to protect her and bury his lust for her.

Geet starts working with Maan and day by day their interactions and physical intimacy result in firing his desire to claim her whereas Geet on the other hand considers Maan as her ideal, her mentor and hero worships him and gradually falls for him. Shasha ... Maan's friend cum employee also senses the fatal attraction between Maaneet and vows to use it against Maan to settle some old scores.

Each day situations weaken Maan's control and he tries hard to fight his lust!

And here

Geet's trust and respect for Maan increases each day and her love strenghtens!

Who will win Love or Lust

Who will loose Trust or Heart

Only time will tell!

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

NOTE~~~~~~~~

A very big sorry to all of you!!!I'm right here just that I've been loaded with work n have a deadline to meet🤢
Practically sleeping just 3-4 hrs a daySo not being able to update

Just give me few days will update as soon as I canAnd please wish me luck for my work I really need it!!!
So terribly missing reading n writing FF😭

Love u all
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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

TEASER

Drashti Dhami & Gurmeet Choudhary

Drashtii Dhami &amp; Gurmeet Choudhary as maan &amp; geet in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi.

Hope this seems interesting
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Writing it will update soon
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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Author's Note~~~~~~~~~~~~
A very heartfelt Thank you for all ur lovely looonnng comments😳Believe me I read them so many times as these comments give a the much needed push to update as soon as I can😊

A warm welcome to all my new readersI'm glad u all liked this story!😳

Coming to the update
Those plotting against Maan u will get to know gradually
This is a very crucial update as some things revealed some things hiddenI wasn't planned Kurbaan Hua but many of u were expecting it so included a bit weaving in with the situation.
PS : The song isn't typical party, dance number but its suiting the situationNot proof read so please ignore errors!

Hoping you all like the updatePlease tell me ur views😃

Since I'm in the flow so will try and post one more 😳

PM Note
I'm clearing my buddy list I'm adding up only those who have liked and commented on this update
Please mention in ur comment
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