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metromasti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

ya its interesting teaser 😉
waiting for update 😃

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Note

I'm stuck up on one crucial point so delay in posting

will update soon

I'm not getting it the way I want it to come out

I'm truly sorry to keep u'll waiting!

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archana roy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: heytal

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I'm stuck up on one crucial point so delay in posting
will update soon
I'm not getting it the way I want it to come out
I'm truly sorry to keep u'll waiting!


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Don't worry Haytal just take your time 😃 .. we will wait .. thanks for the note ❤️ !!

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Will update tonight or max tomorrow

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Sorry won't be able to post here update on pg 127

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Due to excess limit I couldn't post here so have posted on the next page

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Originally posted by: doll.12
U updating/??

yes

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tooba ilyas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: heytal

yes
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Yuppie... ... hurry .. really waiting... ..

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#699

Author's Note~~~~~~~~~~~~
A very heartfelt Thank you for all ur lovely looonnng comments😳Believe me I read them so many times as these comments give a the much needed push to update as soon as I can😊

A warm welcome to all my new readersI'm glad u all liked this story!😳

Coming to the update
Those plotting against Maan u will get to know gradually
This is a very crucial update as some things revealed some things hiddenI wasn't planned Kurbaan Hua but many of u were expecting it so included a bit weaving in with the situation.
PS : The song isn't typical party, dance number but its suiting the situationNot proof read so please ignore errors!

Hoping you all like the updatePlease tell me ur views😃

Since I'm in the flow so will try and post one more 😳

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I'm clearing my buddy list I'm adding up only those who have liked and commented on this update
Please mention in ur comment
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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#700

PART 10~~~~~~~~~~

I'm the master of my fateandthe captain of my destiny!

That's what we humans think unknown to the fact that

Fate doesn't care about our plans!!

Humans ... their plans ... their intentions ... and their decisions! ...BUT ...

One (Maan) wanting to distance himself from his weakness! ... One (Adi) with a sole intention to fulfill his duty! ... One (Geet) trying hard to come in terms with her new found love for her boss ... One (Shasha ) to take and exercise control over everyone around her ... And the last one (?) to destroy everything possible in his control! ...

Maan decided to leave for Shimla preponing his meeting with his client so that he can overcome his lust that was weakening him and can yet again attain his indifferent, ruthless and unwavering demeanor.

Adi was hell bent on fulfilling his duty and loyalty for his best friend and the Khurana's! Not paying any heed to Shasha's warnings Adi went ahead with his decision to personally go and file the quotation.

Geet decided to take a day off from office to escape the awkwardness of facing her boss after yesterday's too close encounters with Maan and the erotic dreams of their togetherness!

Shasha believed that everything was sorted off and now nothing will go wrong!

And the last one who had it all planned out how to destroy Maan Singh Khurana, the Khurana group and then takeover their whole business empire.

But Alas! Its just in a matter of moments everything changes!!

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"Sir woh gaadi mein baith raha hain ... kya order hain?" A man informed on phone.

"Peecha karo aur sahi waqt pe ..." Came the orders from the other side.

And...

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Geet reached home after visiting the temple, her mind now calm and happy!

But her feet froze on the gate seeing Rohan and his parents leaving her home. She hid at the side not wanting to meet them, finally after few minutes she headed towards her house only to hear heated arguments going on in her house. She peeked through the window and heard her family were talking about Rohan's and her marriage alliance.

Geet numbed hearing their conversation, though her wedding was long ago fixed with Rohan yet today she didn't want this to happen! Not only did Maan rule her heart now ... but few past events flashed in her mind which had strengthened her resolve!

Geet and Rohan very good friends, their family's were very closely knit. Post Mohinder's accident one day Geet had gone to Rohan's house to seek his advice for her new job but the true face of her so called friend and his mother had shattered her.

Rohan was in love with some other girl and was refusing to marry Geet but his mother was persuading him to marry Geet for sake of his family's future, as marriage to Geet would bring in a lot of wealth.

Devastated ... after witnessing the incomprehensible side of the people whom her family trusted so much Geet just dashed out of there firmly deciding she will never marry Rohan.

Rano's loud voice brought her out of that painful memory. She heard her mother shouting at her father and Beeji, accusing them of being biased and mean to her and her kids. Rano's final words just shocked Geet beyond her wits.

"Main Geet ki shaadi nahi hone doongi ... mere bacho ka bhavishya daav pe lagaya tha aap ne aur ab apki beti uski bhar paai karegi!"

"Aap ne mere bacho ke liye kuch nahi kiya ... lekin yeh Maa apne bacho ke liye kisi bhi hadd tak jaayegi!"

"Kaan khol kar sun lijiye ... Geet ki shaadi nahi hogi ... MAIN HONE NAHI DOONGI!!... Samjhe aap." Rano said in finalty.

Geet knew that her mother had a lot buried inside her and today her outburst just left her shell shocked! ... Her eyes moistened with sorrow and pain! She closed her eyes in defeat as a tear trickled down her cheek when she heard someone call out to her.

"Geetji..."

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XYZ Hospital

Adi's car met with an accident when he was about to reach the venue to file the quotation, he was immediately rushed to the hospital by Pinky and Pari (another employee of KC). Jay too reached in time informing Shasha about the accident.

They chose not to inform Maan about the accident for time being. Adi was still being attended in the operation theatre, Pinky was inconsolable witnessing her husband fighting for his life. Jay was completing all the required formalities as well as trying to trace the motive behind the accident.

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"Kya Maan Shimla chala gaya! ... Lekin ... That hotel project was delayed for few months than how? ... That *******! " He smashed the glass in anger.

"Ha ha ha ... Tumhe kya laga ke Maan Singh Khurana follows rules?" He smirked.

"Maan Singh Khurana ek cheeteh (leopard) ki tarah hain ... woh kab kya sochta hain ... woh kab kya karega ... yeh shayad woh khud bhi nahi jaanta ... Aur issiliye woh iss business world ka undisputed King hain!"

"Don't underestimate him ... You won't even know when he will crush your entire being!!" He asserted.

"Just shut up Mehra! ... Don't forget that I have got u out of jail ... Bhool gaye kaise kutton ki tarah tumhe bahar nikala tha KC se ... Agar main nahi hota na ... toh zindagi bhar andar hi rehte ... Aur tum mujh par hi has rahe ho." He plunged ahead grabbing him by his collar.

"Mehra lagta hain darr ke maare dushmani bhool gaye?" He bit out.

"Kuch nahi bhoola hoon hoon main lekin yeh baat tum mat bhoolon ke MSK ko harana (defeating) itna asaan nahi hain ... You can never predict his next move!"

"Tumne Adi ka accident karwaya phir bhi KC ne quotations file kar diye ... itne logon ko Maan ke peeche lagaya hua hain lekin phir bhi woh Delhi se nikal gaya aur tumhe pata bhi nahi chala ... Yehi Maan aur uski team ki khasiyat hain... They always have a back up!"

"And I never underestimate my enemies ... specially when the enemy is MSK himself!" Mehra proclaimed releasing his collar from the man's hold.

The man called up someone and barked.

"Tum uske peeche hi rehna and see to it that he can't sign the deal. By hook or by crook just stop him!"

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Maan had already reached Shimla early today and finalized most part of the deal. The excited client, jubilant over being able to strike their second deal with The Maan Singh Khurana and having him as his guest had announced a sudden party in his honour the very night.

Maan sat disinterested on the bar counter of the party hall, gulping down his nth drink. He was in terrible mood but was controlling himself. He had rejected to be a part of this party but when the client and his wife personally came over to his cottage to escort him, he couldn't refuse and dragged himself to the party.

It was a Bollywood theme party where everybody was dressed up in typical Bollywood characters, looks and outfits etc. As he sipped his drink the lights dimmed and an item number began...

He glanced towards the stage where many couples were enjoying themselves, he felt so lonely and irritated. But he couldn't complain bcos it was his own decision to come here, away from Geet , away from that desire to consume her!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-S1IhJ_DHjw[/YOUTUBE]

He had ran away from his heaven to burn here in this hell!!

Teri baahon mein jo sakoon tha milaMain dhoonda bahut thaPhir na milaa...

He turned away from the dance floor only to find a skimpily dressed women lying on the bar counter. She was slithering like a snake making seductive moves on the slab.

Duniya chhoona chaahe mujhko yunJaisay unki saari ki saari mainDuniya dekhe roop meraKoi na jaane bechari main

She got up to the sitting position and held Maan's glass, keeping it on the slab she grabbed Maan's face and attempted to kiss him but Maan turned away.

Haaye, tooti saari ki saari mainTere ishq mein hoi Awari mainHaaye, tooti saari ki saari mainTere ishq mein hoi Awari main

Maan got up and walked away but the woman caught him from behind, plastering her body to his back, seductively swaying to attract him. She then pulled him to the dance floor. Maan was loosing his patience and he just pushed her away.

But again she gripped his hand and this time Maan was livid! He turned to give that woman a piece of mind but froze seeing Geet holding his hand.

Gurmeet Choudhary &amp;amp;amp;amp; Drashti Dhami

Gurmeet Choudhary &amp;amp;amp;amp;amp; Drashti Dhami

She was dressed in White-Silver saree, her bare milky white arms emerging out of her sleeveless blouse held him firmly, . Her satin silky waist peeking through the sheer material, her perfect hour glass figure open to his view and her hypnotizing eyes like drowning him in them. He pulled her to him and held her tight against himself.

Drashti Dhami as Geet in Kurbaan Hua

Koi shaam bulaayeKoi daam lagaayeMain bhi upar se hanstiPar andar se haaye..Kyun dard chupaye baithi hoonKyun tu mujhse kehti haiMain khud hi bikhra huaa

He took control of her petite body and guided her as he started dancing with her. Not for a moment did he let go of her as if he left her hand and she would disappear. His large palms, his mighty body like feeling each part of her during the dance. Her eyes held pain, confusion, nervousness while his eyes depicted his thirst, anger, helplessness!

Main jee bharke ro lunTeri baahon mein so lunAa phir se mujhe millMain tujhse ye bolunTu anmol thiPal pal bolti thiAisi chup tu laga ke gayiSaari khushiyaan kha ke gayi

Her presence calming him ... his body longing for her ... his mind deceiving him ... his tired heart surrendering! ... He danced with her like he owned her! ... Her body like molding to his command!

Drashti Dhami &amp;amp;amp;amp; Gurmeet Choudhary

Drashti Dhami &amp;amp;amp;amp;amp; Gurmeet Choudhary

Haaye, andar andar se toota mainTere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main

He lifted her up in the air and held her there burying his face in her navel. A current passed through her body as he brought her down, his face brushing over her each and every part of her upper body.

Drashti Dhami and Gurmeet Chaudhary as Geet and Maan in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

Drashti Dhami and Gurmeet Chaudhary as Geet and Maan in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

And finally their eyes met and Time stood still!

Haaye, teri hoon saari ki saari mainHo.. tere liye na saari main.

While that dancer stood leaning her back onto Maan's back.

Contd below ...

Edited by HeytzMaaneet - 8 years ago

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