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Posted: 10 years ago
congrats for the new story Heytal
it is very gripping
the hunter has become the saviour
the beauty has stepped into the beast's lair
but she is more of a disaster and very dangerous for his health
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Posted: 10 years ago
Writing will try n update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
beautiful maaneet moments n thanks yaar u remind us GHSP's maaneet moment in ur own sweet way its amazing... geet wanted to do something for maan to show her gratitude toward him and our jahllli had done something else ROFL she did all the shyaapa pe shyaapa poor maan is keeping his anger on check so as not to hurt her...lol i hv doubt how long maan will be able to control his desire after being so close to her ...
maan trying to avoid his desire but his innocent geet is hell bent on arousing him ...
accidental kiss left maaneet stunned...
awesome pic...
Edited by brandgurti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
TEASER
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'The worst distance between two people is ... misunderstanding and miscommunication !!'

One struggling with frustration while other unable to voice out her feelings! ... Attraction worsening the matters further ... And the gossip around was the final nail in the coffin!

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"Mujhe Maan se baat karni hogi ... woh aise kaise kar sakta hain Geet ke saath ."


"Aadi I'm surprised that u didn't see it coming ... I mean it was so obvious ... Maan ke saath kaam karna itna aasaan nahi ... specially Geet jaisi ladki ke liye ... jo underqualified hain aur upar se usne Maan ko irritate karne mein koi kasar nahi chodi."


"Tumhe kya laga Maan react nahi karega? ... Infact I think jo hua accha hi hua hain ... Maine toh Tasha se keh kar Maan ki secretary ke interview ke liye arrangements bhi karwa di hain ... Main khud personally ek ideal candidate select karungi."


"Shasha ... mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain jaise ke tum chahti hi nahi ke Geet ... Maan ke saath kaam kare ... I mean to say that you are kind of trying to keep Geet away from Maan ...isn't it?"

Aadi's statement did create the desired effect. Shasha paused in her way but very next moment she masked her face and then calmly spoke.

" Aadi Chale ... meeting ke liye late ho raha hain!"

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"Maan tumne hi usse job se nikala ... Poor girl! ... Maan U shouldn't have done that to her ... she would be so hurt!" Shasha exclaimed.

"Haan Maan ... agar tumhe Geet se problem ho rahi thi toh mujhe bol deta ... main usse apne saath rakh leta ... yeh tune theek nahi kiya." Aadi stated dejectedly.

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"Meri job chali gayi ... maine Maan sir ko itna pareshan kiya issiliye unhone mujhe ... sab log sahi keh rahe the ... I don't deserve this job nor to work with him ... Shasha Mam ne bhi sabki baat suni aur mujhe ghar chale jaane ko keh diya."


"Sab kuch khatam ho gaya! ... Ab main kabhi unse nahi mil paaungi!"





If some one has a 'close up'of this pic do post it on this thread I need it

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Thanks for all your comments

Loved reading them

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Feeling sad too as many of my regular readers not responding😭



Still writing

will update soon

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Edited by heytal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely teaser...sasha jealous of geet working with maan...oops geet ne aisa kay kiya jo maan ne use job se nikal diya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting teaser ...oh no maan fired geet y??? grr sasha jjj of geet working with maan esko toh dafaa he karo witch kahi k...
unres... my comment on page ---30
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet ko nikala diya...

yaar sab jagah sasha vamp kyu..
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting teaser
waiting for update...
Edited by metromasti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely teaser... Waiting 4 da next
part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Teaser is Interesting

Captivating and making me very Curious

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