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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos



I think she is going to buy a camera :).


Hmm but she already had one... remember the previous part 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Lady I haven't got any more nails to bite. The suspense is killing me.😲
I can almost see you sitting on the chair late in the night, twirling your imaginary mustache thinking of new evil ways to torture our poor reading souls😆

Or shall we call it the slow strip tease that the smoke and mirrors is concealing while revealing something intriguing with each unveiling.😉

The bar setup, the protagonist walking into the bar nonchalantly, the bitter hero(unsure if he is the hero after reading the latest chapter)
It all reminds me of one of my most favorite classic movies of all times 'Casablanca'

Now the main question is... Is the dead guy Rick( the heroine Ilsa's lover) or is he Victor( the heroines husband)
I got the idea when the dude in Chapter number 3 made a remark to our disreputed gal
"I'm happy without you. Don't come back here again."
It reminded me of of Rick's comment in the movie where he says.."Of all the gin joints, in all the towns, in all the world, she walks into mine"
The, "I'm happy without you. Don't come back here again." could almost be a continuation of the dialogue above.
These are my characters for this story from now on and obviously I would like to believe that the guy in the bar was Rick😉

A young romantic Humphrey Bogart. ...Aish😳
Edited by Susegad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos



I think she is going to buy a camera :).




camera - could be, but she already has a one..

repair the house -- it is ruined to such a level, that it will need a rebuild..

and she said she is here for some unfinished business...guess she is here to punish someone / revenge..

but I think all the speculations probably are going to go wrong in the next update..
:))

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Hello!!!
I am back not with a bang but with a song.

Old Lady Gossip is a mean old gal;
All kinds of troubles she causes!
You'll find her in homes,wherever she roams,
In her work she never pauses.
Nothing can give her more joy and more glee,
Than to start an untrue story
That will smirch the name of a gent or dame,
For it covers her with glory.

- Gertrude Tooley Buckingham
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
The unconventional heroine has had a very controversial past.
But at the same time she has been the cause of envy for many.

It is funny to read the way people are gossiping without any feelings for either the dead or the supposed murderer. It seems everyone has added their own share to the spicy murder story and busy passing judgements. So typical to the society we are a part of.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
A cruel story run on wheels , and every hand oils the wheels as they run.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
"...partaking in the town gossip was the quickest way to keep her morale high.."
Completely abhorrable yet one cannot deny that this is just one of the other weaknesses of humans-gossiping.

So geet married the town's most favoured bachelor.
Infact had been brave enough to propose him herself .
Dean's son. Supposedly rich.

And then the rumour has it that she killed him.
The wife killed the husband despite being in love with him.

And his death was due to accidental drowning .The gossiper declines to believe it for he was in swim team.

And she put the house on fire . The house which she had insisted to buy. A dream house i suppose. Although the gossiper doesn't believe so.


And then there are other points like he was ill and she had taken care of him.
A testimonial of her love. May be or may be not.

And the gossip girl wouldn't give up unless she makes you believe that it was Geet murdered her husband even if there are certain other possibilities.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Thankyou for updating.
Riveting and intresting.
Will be waiting for more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
The way you are unveiling the secrets leaving traces and keeping the mystery content alive all along is so fascinating and yet mind boggling.
I cant help but read again n again for something i have missed .
It keeps me on my toes. It is totally impossible to wait for another one.
Hats off to you!!!! For this marvellous piece of work. As simple as it lookd while reading but the amount of talent one requires to write a mystery.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I got your story direction after the fourth chapter. Pretty interesting. Geet is being accused to murder her husband by neighborhood.

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