Maaneet SS Beautiful life / PART 10 page 38(8 feb) - Page 17

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hope u will nt leave this incomplete~!
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Lovely SS
Read all the part in a go!!
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Read all in one go pm me when u update next part
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PART 10

Doctor changed her medicine and give injection.

In sleep she mumbling only one line "Mumma jaldi aao, ghar jana hain"

Maan made her sit and help her taking painkiller. But after that he hug her side way like child and made understand.

Maan: Geet Sorry about my words. But ek baat kahu har time sharat achi nahi hoti aur jaruri nahi har kisi ko pasand aye. Aur sharat ki bhi to uski responsibility lena ana chahiye na.

He made her understand like small kid and she agreed making him surprised.

He looks upward like geet still holding her.

Maan: pata hain babaji, Apaki Geet bahut achi bachi hain. Wo alag baat hain ki koi perfect nahi hota aur insaan ko kamiyo ke saath apanana chaiye.

At this statement she looked at him his brown eyes has care, honesty and truthfulness. It is same thought her mom told her. And she give little smile to him.

At door Meera listen this; due to work she was not able to give her time. But today she thought to make her vocal about what exactly bothering her. She is surprise by Maan's caring nature. But she is caring sister how can she left both alone , she knocks door and enter and pretend like she don't know anything. Maan move toward room.

At night Maan thinks about her she has capacity to bring both best and worst in him. He smile thinking how he made her thing understand and she listen like cute baby.

At morning he gives holiday to both Dev and Vicky. Vicky carries Geet to kitchens near all ladies and put her on slab she took carrot and start her bakbak , all ladies got happy finally she is in happy mood.

At 7 pm,

Dev bring trained Mitthu( Parrot ), so she cant feel bored. She like new member introduces him with all family members.

Geet : Mittu ye dadi, ye Ma, aur Vicky, dev.

Ghar mein aur bhi log hain Papa and meera job pe gayi hain aur Devil bhi papa k sath hoga.

Mitthu : oh..

All laughed as he understud every thing.

Vicky brought cage for him but at same time meera come, she refuses to lock Mitthu in Cage.

Meera : Jise pyar karte hain use bandhkar nahi rakha jata, apake pyar mein itni takad honi chahiye ki wo apase dur na hone paye.

Yash impressed with her thought as hard working nature.

Geet: Mitthu ye hain papa and Meera.

They all chatted for some time , Radha give green chilli to Mittu. He eats it and repeated statement of family member.

After some time Maan comes,

Mittu: Devil...Devil...

All looked confused while Geet bursted into loud laugh folllwed by all.

Maan : Geet

Maan screamed loudly and all suppress laugh but sametime he sees fear imn her eyes somewhere he doesn't like it. But this time he doesn't lose control.

Maan feed Mitthu Green chilli and taked with him.

Maan : Mittu tum sabse mile ?

Mitthu : ha

Maan : Mera naam Maan hain aur wo tumhare same(Points at Geet)wo bhootni hain.

Mittu: accha.

Mittu: Bhootani..Bhootani

Geet shots angly glare while all enjoyed drama,

Geet :oye tum kya...Maan gives disapproving look

Geet : Mera matlab hain aap mere parrot ko buri baate math sikhao.

Maan : accha

Mittu : Devil bhootani ..More chilli More chillies...

And all laugh like no tomorrow.

Edited by 1mk1 - 8 years ago
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Hi Guys,
Thanks for Waiting so long.
From now onwards you can expect update at every weekend or may be twice in week.
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Welcome back yaar.. Lovely part.. Maan finally realize his mistake n mnfy geet... Love the parrot scene yaar. Devil n bootani. He he..

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