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Posted: 9 years ago
please update! waiting so long!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi guys..
Thanks for waiting..
Here is update and next part will come soon. Maybe tonight..



PART 8

Maan completed his work and move toward India. No one knows about it and he want to give surprise to all.

In Khurana Mansion,

As Geet is not able to move herself it becomes Vicky's duety to help her. Most of her time went in kitchen to talk with dadi and radha and evening is planed in garden's swing.

At evening,

Maan come from office, and told servent to keep his luggage in room, and one important call come in same time so he went straight to garden, here Geet is sitting on swing and humming the song. she heart footsteps and looks in particular direction where Maan is talking on phone after phone ended,

Geet : Suno

Maan: hmm

Geet: Papa nahi hain, tum office jao wo kaam kal karenge.

Maan looked confused. Ram works from home sometime and his employee comes to home if needed. But after Geet comes in KM, after 5pm no work allowed for Yash. And Dadi and Radha is very happy because Geet has her own ways to make it followed.

Here after seeing Maan she thought someone come for work.

Geet : ab jao.

She got irritataed because of his not moving.

Maan : aap kon?

Geet : Apake malik ki beti. And she gives cute smile.

Geet : chalo ab jao. Itna kaam karana Papa k liye thik nahi.

And Yash comes

Geet : Papa apke employee ko samaj nahi ata ki ghar pe 5 baje k baad mat ana.

She asked with angry look.

Yash : nahi bete wo..

Geet : ye wo kuch nahi apaki kal ki chai cancle...

Yash: what? Lekin ise meine nahi bulaya.

Maan is amaze to see bond between them. Even if he likes Geets beauty but his mind is cooking another story. He is not able to digest the fact that in his home some other person getting more attention than him.

On same time Radha comes.

Radha: Maan bte, aap aa gaye.

Maan hugs his mom. Geet see all these and mutter

Geet: yeh bhi bigdel hain isne bhi pair nahi chuye. Meri mom to ab tak kaan khichi hoti mere.

But to her bad luck Maan listens it and in response she got famous MSK glare. And she made big face making him smrik.

Geet : Dusht Danav, Raavan kahi ka..

Now all moved toward hall

Maan: Maa. Mein fresh aake ata hu.

Now all become tense.

As soon as he reached to room started shouting .

Maan: Mom aap mera room mein guest ko kaise rahane de sakte hoh

Geet : Guest nahi beti hu.

Maan: to kya mein mehmaan hu.

Geet: mujhe kya pata.

Maan : For your kind information , mein is ghar ka bada beta hu to room mera hain.

Geet : mein jaane tak mera hain

Mujhe maa ne aur dadi ne diya.

Radha try to stop fight.

Ram : are rahne do thodi der maja aa raha hain.

Pehali baar maan itni baat kar raha hain wo bhi bina office ki baate.

Vicky : haa mom ruko.

Till dat time Dev and Meera also return.

Here Dadi become happy because she find Geet is perfect for Maan only she can able to handel Maan otherwise he dominate everyone.

Geet: ek kaam karte hain voting karate hain.

Maan: what?? Khud k room ke liye voting.

Geet: dar gaye kya?

After that Geet ask Vicky to give all cards. Result is

Maan: 2 votes(Dev-Meera)

Geet: 4 votes(Dadi,Yash,Radha,Vicky)

Maan was angry and surprise with result.

Meera pulls Geet aside.

Meera: Geet kya kar rahi ho, de do na room.

Geet : wo to dena hi hain but usne mujhe raavan wali akhe dikhayi na so saja chal rahi hain.

Tum ruko.

Geet : Ab samaj aya mein guest nahi hu. Aur le lo room mein kisi ki chij nahi chinti . Mujhe pata nahi tha room tumhara hain.

Vicky : Bhai aap daan loge wo bhi room ka?

Maan: tumhe kya lagta hain tum daan de rahhi ho aur mein le lunga.

Geet : Jao mat lo.

All giggled at this. Maan left angrily.

Meera left behind him.

Meera : Bhai bura mat manana wo dil ki buri nahi hain bus jiddi hain.

Maan: pagal hain wo

Meera: sach mein use nahi pata tha ki room apaka hain.

Maan : jab pata chala to chup se diya kyu nahi?

Meera: wo to aapane use akhe dikhai usaka badala tha.

Maan: what??? Ab mujhe yakin hua Mahapagal hain yeh..


Edited by 1mk1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Spunky Update
Geet first thinks Maan as an employee but she neither apologizes to him
and when he greets his mother , Geet again feels that he is wrong by not touching his mother's feet
but surely she cannot impose her decisions on him and want that he carries himself as
she would want him to
than came the issue of his bedroom surely she could understand that he is the eldest son
of the house and she should at least give that amount of respect instead she ask to vote
it may be taken as fun but it certainly is not welcomed especially when a person returns home
finding his room been taken over and Geet should have at least said sorry to him
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely updte...in first meeting itself maan d geet started fighting geet is too cute dadima thnking geet for maan because of his dominance nature waiting for d nxt updte...
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Posted: 9 years ago
ha ha what an update...maan stunned by the love geet gets form his family members...geet talking to him like he is an employee...enjoyable..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woo beautiful update dear love the way geet argued with Mann and hole family enjoys it voting Mann can't believe that his family support geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Maan geet fighting like kids n geet said WO is ghar ki beti hai
Opps dadi thinks geet perfect for maan n his mom thinks about Vicky n geet relation
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 updating! awesome update! Maaneet meet n fight! Maan angry she is in his room! he is j as he is being ignored! Maan thinks Geet is crazy! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg rofl hahahahaha cant stop laugiing.. Maaneet ladayi and dadi cooking maaneet shaadi khayali pulao.. Lol everyone enjoying maaneet nok jhok including us ;)... Superb yaar.. Cont soon

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