New MG FF - Beyond Love - Part 1 - Page 6

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Somewhere in one corner of the world:

A person walking aimlessly, unknown of where life is going to lead.

With unbearable pain of separation, unbearable pain of mistrust and unbearable pain of love, from loved ones.

"How will I live without you all? How will I breathe?".

Breaking into sobs... "Why did this happen? Where did I go wrong? Why didn't you all trust me? I always loved you all. You are my family my world...No You Were" came a whisper

And that was moment. It felt as if every emotion died. As if the Fun-loving Soul DIED and an Emotionless Stone took birth.

Whilst on other side:

"How could you do this?

How could you become so selfish?"


Breaking and throwing away everything that came into hands...'"I wish I could stab this heart and throw it away, which loved you!"


"I loved you but with this action of yours..." breaking into sobs "I Hate You!"

"You broke me. You broke your family. You cheated them. They loved you. You played with their respect, their honour, their love."

Anger, pain, hurt all rose together.

"I will never forgive you for this, NEVER EVER. I Hate You."

"But I wouldn't leave them for your deeds. I will take care of them. I will take your place.

You now are no one to us, anymore."

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Character Sketch:

Handa Family

Yashwant Handa:

He is the head of the family. Everyone calls him Darji. He has a son Mohinder and a daughter Roopan. He calls everyone with a unique name in the house. He is just lovely. But when it comes to his anger, he is a volcano.

Mohinder Handa:

Owner of Handa's chain of hotels. He share a very typical father-son relation with his father. They fight with each other, tease each other and love each other. His wife calls him 'Mahi' lovingly. He is a perfect son, husband, father and brother.

Rano Handa:

A perfect house maker. She handles the house and keeps the whole family bonded. Mohinder lovingly calls her 'Rani'. She scolds kids on their mistakes and never back off from praising them too on their good work too. She simply loves her family.

Brij Handa:

Eldest Son of the Family. Perfect in all ways. Keeps tab of all his siblings. Currently, helping Mohinder in their business.

Raj Handa:

Naughty one, but knows how to respect elders. Becomes a kid when with family. Completed hotel management course from London and will soon join his father and brother. Currently on 2 months break.

Priya Handa:

Loving daughter. Everyone loves her. Nowadays, she is dreaming about her marriage and preparing for it. Yes, she is getting married soon. Her Fiance Arav Batra' is in Fashion retailing and his saali takes full advantage of it.

Geet Handa:

She is an Angel. Loves her family, but very naughty. She is a chatter box and talks non-stop and she loves ordering her Jiju for new attires every now and then...More you will get to know as the story progresses.

Kapoor Family

Roopan Kapoor:

She had love marriage. Loves her family. She with her family, spends most of their time at Handa mansion because they all love to spend time together.

Ram Kapoor:

He is travelling most of time and so is the reason why roopan and kids are found at Handa mansion most of the time. He owns a marketing firm. He loves Gajar ka Halwa' made by his Rano Bhabhi.

Prem Kapoor:

Helping Ram within their marketing firm and also is planning to open up his own digital agency, which if succeeded, he wants to gift his father.

Shreya Kapoor:

A dynamic young girl, loves shopping. Currently, doing business management from Mumbai. She is in second year.

Khurana Family

Savitri Singh Khurana:

An ideal woman. People look upto her. After her husbands' death, she emerged as an fighter and gave a new height to his business. Very loving and naughty too.

Yash Singh Khurana:

A strict gentleman, but his heart is filled with love for his family. He owns a construction firm which is very successful. He is a strict businessman and a loving son, husband and father at home.

Preeti Singh Khurana:

Loving lady, loves to spend her spare time in kitchen and inventing new dishes. She spends most of her time with Savitri, as mostly they are the only ones left at home.

Maan Singh Khurana:

The name itself describes a lot. He is the most popular, eligible bachelor. But very down to earth. He loves his family and...More you will get to know as the story progresses.

Dev Singh Khurana:

He wants to become like his Maan Bhai'. He simply adores him. He is very kind-hearted and when needed can do anything for his family.

Vicky Singh Khurana:

The naughtiest in the house. He can never be at peace and keeps jumping from one place to another. Daadi and Maan calls him Mono' lovingly. Yes Mono. When Maan was baby, he used to call monkey as mono and because Vicky used to always jump here and there, and so he kept his name as Mono. But no one else is allowed to called Vicky as Mono, otherwise he will not talk with that person.

Anwesha Singh Khurana:

She is cute, she is lovely and loves studying. She aims to become a doctor, and the Khurana family is very supportive of her this decision.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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AMAZING

Both are hurt ... in the pain of betrayal

the prologue s interesting
waiting for more

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Interesting...but who is who?.. waiting eagerly to know more...
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Congrats on the ur FF! lovely interesting prologue! Superbly written. update soon! pls post cs! Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys
I will post character sketch and part 1 soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting Prologue

both people are very much hurt and in pain
waiting for the story to unfold

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Wonderful portrayal of emotions ...seems u r a born to rule writer ...if this is ur first work ? if yes u need special applause ... waiting for more if need any help plz tell...
Sonia 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

Wonderful portrayal of emotions ...seems u r a born to rule writer ...if this is ur first work ? if yes u need special applause ... waiting for more if need any help plz tell...

Sonia 😆


Hi thankyou for the compiment. Yes it's my first work.
I do need help actually. Can you suggest somebody who could help me with banner.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi all,
Thankyou so much. Your comments are encouraging.
Currently, I'm in the process of writing the character sketch will post within and hour or two.
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Originally posted by: maangeetkhu


Hi thankyou for the compiment. Yes it's my first work.
I do need help actually. Can you suggest somebody who could help me with banner.



At the moment I cant help by myself coz I hav to download photoshop in my laptop ...old one khraab ho gaya...otherwise main he banna deti u can ask ...Cherishh...at first place will give other names...

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