New MG FF - Beyond Love - Part 1 - Page 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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CS is great , very interesting indeed

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys, just thought to post a little teaser to tease you guys.

Teaser:

In Khurana Mansion:

K Person 1: "Lekin bhai hai kahan?"
K Person 2: "Arey, ye bhi koi sawal hua bhala. Woh toh wahin honge na"
K Person 3: "Hmmm yeah...what a stupid question that was!"

In Handa Mansion:

H Person 1: "Ye ladki bhi na! Ek din usse na mile toh bilkul chain nahi aata isse"
H Person 2: "Arey yahi toh umar hai bachchon ki enjoy karne ki"
H Person 3: "Aap keh rahenge hai ye?"

Sorry guys, there's no formatting in the font, because I'm updating this from my phone.
Plus I haven't given any expressions here coz I want to keep it a surprise.
Update will probably be up on weekend.

Till then enjoy. And guess karo ki who is who.
Edited by maangeetkhu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Interesting waiting but what is that another teaser no please give update waiting . Yar u r such a tease with teaser.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnks for the teaser

Want more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1:


Khurana Mansion:


"Oh no...ab toh gaye" he stated.

"Oh no,!" while shaking his head "no no no no no nooo". Moving from one corner of the room to another.

"Chuppp. Bas Bhai. Kitna bolte ho aap. Aap toh bas itna sochiye ki ab aap unse bachenge kaise?" she spoke making him stop in his stride.

"What"...he asked getting shocked..."what did you just say?...DO NOT FORGET THAT U TO R INVOLVED IN THIS? So tum bhi nahi bachnewali ho" he exclaimed.

"Arey ab main kaise involve ho gayi". She said while getting up from the bed. "Maine thodi na kuchh kiya hai, sab kuchh toh aapne kiya". Trying to be innocent.

"What the"...he shouted and then just pressed his lips. "Dekh...Ye sab teri wajah se hua hai. Tu mere pass ayi thi ye kehte hue ki Bhai please kuchh kijiye na, dadi mujhe shaadi ko lekar bohat chidhati hai. Aap na kucch aisa karo ki dadi mujhse is bare mein baat hi na kare. Aap na unke chai mein namak milado aur na unke towel mein colour milado, taki subah subah jab unke beautiful chehra colourful ho jaye toh woh shock ho jaye. Aur dobara mujhse iss bare mein baat karne se pehle 100 baar soche. Please bhai kardo na. Please'."

Coming out from the past.

"Aur yeh Vicky Singh Khurana toh hai hi sweet sa innocent boy', jo teri sweet si sugar-coated baton mein aa gaya. Lekin beware Miss Anwesha Singh Khurana". Whilst almost hovering over her and glaring at her. "Agar mein phassa toh saath mein tujhe bhi phasaunga..."

"Arey par maine ye toh sab kuchh Dadi par karne ke liye bola tha, lekin aapne toh The Great Yash Singh Khurana par kar diya...ab yeh toh aapki galti hui na". Annie cleared.

Vicky glared really hard.

Whilst Annie just gulped hard. And said while pouting "Sorry".

Vicky: "Chal ab ye soch ki is situation se bachein..." before he could complete his sentence.

"Vicky, Anwesha COME DOWN NOW..." came a loud voice from downstairs.

10 minutes later:

Yash: "Ye sab kya hai?"

Annie: "Woh Dad yeh sab Vicky Bhai ne kiya".

Vicky (shocked): "Joothi." He said while looking at Annie and then looked towards Yash "Nahi Dad maine nahi..."

Annie: "Achchha...ab aap jooth bol rahe hai Bhai. Boliye ke ye sach nahi hai ki chai mein namak aapne milaya, aur towel mein colour aapne dala. Hmm boliye boliye". She openly challenged Vicky, hoping that he wouldn't drag the situation anymore. And take all the responsibility.

But Khuranas' don't like when their ego is hurt, and Vicky off course is a Khurana.

Vicky: "Haan kiya toh kya. Par ye sab Dad ke liye nahi tha. Aur waise bhi ye sab maine tere liye tere kehne par kiya".

Annie: "Dekiye aap..."

And there they go...both couldn't stop quarrelling.

Yash was just standing and look at the both them; and Priya on the other hand just holding her head and watching her two grown-up babies, who exactly aren't grown up.

Whilst on the other hand, two people were silently enjoying and laughing.

Yash: "Chup tum dono. Ye sab chahe kisne bhi kiya ho, lekin sazaa toh tum dono ko milegi" he said strictly.

"Arey par Dad, sazaa aap akele kyun denge?" Interrupted one of the person who was laughing at them.

Yash: "Kya matlab hai tumhara, Dev?"

Dev: "Mera matlab ye hai ki ye sab kuch aapke liye nahi tha. Bas galti se aapke saath ho gaya". He cleared the doubt.

All present there were surprised, except for Annie and Vicky, who were just looking for a way to run away.

Priya: "Toh phir kiske liye tha?"

Dev pointed towards the other person "Dadi".

Dadi was shocked... "What...par humne aisa toh kya kar diya ki aap toh dono humare saath ye sab karna chahte the".

Dadi: "Vicky Annie, hum aap dono se kucch poochh rahe hai, ye sab kya hai?"

Vicky: "Dadi woh Annie aapse..."Annie cut him in between.

Annie: "Nahi Dadi maine kuchh nahi kiya".

Dadi glared at both of them.

Dadi (shouted): "Boliye ab chup kyun hai dono".

Vicky: "Dadi woh aap Annie ko shaadi ko lekar chidhati rehti hain na; toh woh aapke saath kuch aisa karna chahti thi ki aap dobara usse iss bare mein chidhhaye na". He spoke at the fastest speed he could. Whilst, the others were standing with open-mouth.

On the other hand, Dadi is thought that it was the perfect timing to start her melodrama.

Dadi: "Bas itna hi pyar hai aap dono ko humse. Hum toh bas aap sabko khush dekhna chahte hai, issliye ye sab...Par hume kya pata tha ke hum bojh ban gaye hai"... she spoke turning towards one corner, from where no one could see her face and was secretly laughing.

However, all the others just shook their head knowing that she was again at her emotional blackmailing mode.

Annie: "Sorry Dadi"...she said while hugging Savitri from back.

Vicky: "Your Mono is Sorry Dadi"...cutely said, while hugging both Annie and Dadi.

And she just pouted and smiles: "Achchha chaliye thik hai. Maaf kiya humne aap dono ko. Lekin dobara nahi karna".

Vicky and Annie nodded their heads and smiled at her pecking her cheeks on either sides.

Yash: "Maaf kar diya?...Aise kaise maaf kar diya maa. Abhi toh inko sazaa milni hai. Meri halat toh dekhiye aap". He cribbed at his mother, as if his schoolmate broke his favourite toy and he was complaining to his mother.

Dadi: "Woh sab hum nahi jaante..." turning towards Yash "Aur haan aap bhi kaan khol ke sun le, aap humare bachchon ko kuchh bhi nahi karenge. Warna HUM aapko sazaa denge"


Yash wasn't surprised at all. After his mother loved his kids more than him. He made an annoyed face and left from there blabbering. Everybody else laughed when he was out of their sight.

Annie: "Dev Bhai, aapne yeh thik nahi kiya". Annie stated after they settled from their laughing fit.

Dev: "What did I do?" He asked confused.

Annie: "Aapne Dad ko humara naam kyun bataya?" she questioned him.

Dev: "Dekho shararat tum dono ne ki, toh naam toh tumhara hi aayega na. And for your information, maine Dad ko nahi bataya".

Vicky: "What?...Toh phir kisne bataya?"

Dev: "Bhai Ne".

Vicky: "Ufff...Of course Dad toh Bhai ke favourite hai, toh unhone hi hamari chugli ki hogi". He twisted his lips. He turned to Annie and said "Dekh tere favourite Bhai ne kya kiya!" Whilst, Annie just pouted.

Annie: "Lekin Bhai hai Kahan?"

Dev: "Arey, ye bhi koi sawaal hua bhala. Woh toh wahin honge na".

Vicky: "Hmmm yeah...what a stupid question that was!" looking at Annie with how dumb can you be' expression.


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Scenario in Handa Mansion; and Maan & Geet's entry in next update (hopefully).


Till then enjoy this.

Edited by maangeetkhu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loving khurana family children and dadi can't wait for manneet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start. loved khurana family intro.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Sweet update
Loving the bond between the siblings
Eagerly waiting for maaneet entry
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#29
Nice part loved the khurana family they seem very nice waiting 4 maaneet entry
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
nice story n prologue too
waiting to know d real reason of der pain
1st part is amazing

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