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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx dear

Originally posted by: drrose31

<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Congozz on new thread sweets</font>

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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Nice part...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Maan is not happy hearing abt geet's health and he was relieved once he got the news that geet was at home...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">He even came for lunch ... Geet is so scared of him...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">geet got to know that maan met with her doc, good ...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Dev and meera worried for her... and Maan's short temper...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">thnx for pm dear</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">cont soon</font>

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx dear

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

awesome .. something changes in maan ... hope he'll take good care of his baby & Geet...

thnx for pm.. .waiting for next update😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
will maan stay at home tonight
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats on d new thread...
Nice update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
glad maan is not being so rude to geet and caring forger...
loved the update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 19

MAAN IS CHANGING BUT SLOWLY
TODAY HE WAS CARING AND SOFT SPOKEN
AND HE EVEN TEASED HER
DEV AND MEERA ARE WORRIED AOUT GEET AND THE BABY
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
loved the update
maan is getting a little soft
geet is getting strong
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm. Well written
Will u pls give translation for hindi dialogue. Basically I don't know Hindi.so pretty pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update loved it maan taking care of geet
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART - 20


BOTH dont face each other. He dwas busy in his work so she dont disturb him. At 8 pm he glance at his watch and close his laptop and files. Same time Geet too came inside his studies.

'aapka kya prog hai?. I mean dinner aap ghar pe karoge ya bahar?' she asked in an astounded voice,hoping that he wont go atleast today. But all hopes shattred soon.


'Geet take your meal and medicines on time and go to bed. I am leaving.' He dont even watch her continue fading face and left.


After so many sleepless nights the dark circles under eyes had incresed. She is fragile but know she had to take cary of her baby alone. Maan left her alone again.


At 5 am he arrived in his messier state and found her sleeping on a couch.



Maan saw her sleeping in sitting position and his heart began to race.'damn. Why the hell she sleeping in hall and like this?' he grew angry.

Actually she was get herself busy in some book and slept reading them. Maan went near her and scooped in his arms. He thought for a sce where he took her to her room or his? But then he moved towards his room and palced her on his king size bed. He covered her properly.



Her stiffened muscles began to ease. She felt warm and cozy. Maan caressed her face and push aside her hairs. Then he stood up but his hand was hold by her firmly. She sensed him even in sleep and wants to hold him near her.



Very carefully he removed his hand and went to washroom. After taking a warm water bath he come out settled next to her. His choclate brown eyes raked over her body,growing warmer with each other pass.




Slept like a baby,innocently took his all attention. He bend on her and inhaled,as though he were breathing in her scent. Stared her without a blink and his lips nuzzling her ears. Suddenly he pulled himself back and come out of his bed. Her proxcimity aroused him. Maan roamed in his own room in irritation.


Unable to stop himself Maan glance back to her and went near her. He laid next to her and gathered her body against his own,with careful tugs until she came to her.


Geet perfectly snuggled in him. He kissed on her forehead cuddled as much he can without hurting her. He felt relaxed in her warmth and went in deep sleep.


Sun dawn and her compsed sleep broke. She awaked but the feel was exceptionally warm then other days. Her eyes half opened and drowsy but she able to locate Maan near her. She squeezed her eyes hardly before opened them widely. He was slept holding her. Then she roamed her neck and got that she was not only in his arms but in his room also.


She had mixed feelings but chhose to leave,which wasn't easier as she thought. Geet tried to loosen his grip over feeble body but failed to do so.


Maan to woked up due to her struggle. He watched her red turned face. She quickned but not much then Maan. 'what happened?' he asked.


'its 8.' she exqused.

'so?'


'i have a lot of work to do.'


'no need to go anywhere. You need rest. So sleep right now.'his low whisper sent fire throught her entire body.


'par...' Maan put his finger and stopped finishing her. She shivered. Feeling the heat radiating through his body and eyes. He was able to over power her any time as she aware of her this weakness.


Maan rested his forehead on hers. She breathed in his scent and clench hard her eyes.




Their hands entwined and he start kissing her. She to lifted her head on a side giving him an acess to explore her. With every kiss his hunger grews up. His thigh thurst in between her two legs and his twitched shaft teasing her senses.


Her mind wants to push him away but body denied followed the instruction. His phone rang and vilate the going on moment. Frustratingly he watch the screen first. Finding a call important he forced to leave her in between and that was the moment she calmed herself and made an escape from his room. Her heart still beating fast,but she wont look back and stop only after reaching to her room.

Geet locked and cribbed to god again. 'why you doing this to me? Let me stick to my resolution and told him not to do such things again. When he have lot of girlfriends to spend time then why me?' she cribed and fresh n up fastly.


Servants waiting for her instructions. She reached and all worked after getting the orders. Geet quickly made coffee for him and left in his room. But he caught her again. Her breath getting harder. He sipped his coffee.

Geet was not sure what he was upto. So she scanning him in confusion. Geet thought to leave so she step back.

"Geet wait." He commands and she rooted to her place.he come closer to er and bend over her shoulder. "Vinny ko bolna coffee achhi hai." He said huskily and his velvety voice caressing her soft skin, giving goosebumps but his words made her annoyed.

Geet stirred to face him and showed her big eyes. "Apko lagta hai ye coffee vinny ne banai hai?" She asked in ragefilled voice.


"Ofcourse." Maan knotted and teased her more.

"Aap ghar pe rehte bhi jo apko pata ho. Ye coffee maine banai hai. Kal b maine banai thi. Vinny ki coffee koi insaan to kya janwar bhi na piye. Aap pata nahi kaise pee lete ho." She burst frequently and poured all her frustration in a go.


"Achha tumne banai hai. I don't notice actually." He said ignoring looking at her.


Geet pouts but he wont pay heed. "Chhodo abse main nahi banaugi. Aap pio apni wo gandi sadi kadvi coffee." She said and raised step to go out when a stron pull dragged her back.


"Its really good and I knew it ki ye tumne banai hai." He grazed her cheek with his stubble.


"To firr apne aise kyu bola?" She asked innocently.


"Tumhare funny expression dekhne k liye." He said and smirked.

"Hwww apka marlab main joker hu?"

"Geet keep it up. Chalo mere sath ka kuchh to asar ho raha hai. You are getting smart with every passing day." Maan teased her more.


Geet pouts and leave as she won't know how to snap back. Maan saw her antics and sip his coffee while smiling. Only one peaceful night and she looks better then before.




PRECAP: "if she won't force me then I will not allow her stay with a person like you. Just becoz of you her condition is going worst. Lekin apko kya farak parta hai? Apko to sirf apki aayishiyo se matlab hai. Aaj to Meera or main time pe pahunch gaye. Thodi der agar or ho jati na to Geet or baby dono me se koi nahi bachta." Dev poured his all anger on Maan. For the first time he raised his voice before him.

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