The Prince Charming! (Part#2,3 pg.6, 14/6) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome yaar.. do pm me pass. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part #2


Her mighty father had other plans for his Kingdom or say his throne. .. he wanted a powerful Kingdom to marry off his daughter to... he wanted a king who would be having many lands under him who would leave his Kingdom to him ... And taking his age to count he knew his throne was in a major threat forum there adjacent Kingdom!!

Kuvar Yeshvardhan who was the successor to the throne of the powerful Kingdom was his choice for the princess!

He was a greedy king who would do anything to save his throne n who better than Yeshvardhan to make his job easy!

He was strong powerful n in every aspect eligible for the princess...

As soon as he disused this matter with his ministry the news spread like a fire...

People rejoiced at the news as they knew no other prince would be match for there princess n they couldn't get anyone better than Yeshvardhan!!

Unaware of all the rumours surrounding her our princess was still lost in her thoughts trying to paint the picture of the stranger whom she met in the market!!

After a few failed attempts n crumpled sheets she finally gave up n walked out of her chamber towards the garden for some fresh air. ..

She didn't bother washing her hands which were strained with colours ... which resulted in colouring her face too when ever she pushed her lose strands of hair off her face...

She knew thinking too much about a stranger wasn't good thing for a princess...

It slowly started to drizzle n the heavy winds blew off the burning lights leaving just a few inside her chamber. ..

She heard a faint sounds from the bushes across the pool but she chose to ignore taking it to be birds or something. ..

She was about to step in side when she was suddenly hauled against a strong muscular chest with a large palm against her lips n the other hand halting her moments caging her against the wall!

He was covered by a dark scarf hiding his face leaving his blazing eyes where wandering around making sure if he was not noticed. ..

Once he knew they were alone he slowly removed his hand covering her face...

I want something from you he whispered in his husky voice. .. the hidden meaning sent chills doen her spine... even he could feel her shiver under his palms

U can't deny as u owe your life to me!!

will wait for you at the ghat behind the temple!

He was out of her sight even before she knew what she had gotten herself to!

Yes she recognised him she knew what he was referring to when he said she owed her life...

She had violated the rules of the palace one n before she could take a sigh of relief she has landed into another!

The ladies from the palace weren't allowed to step out of the palace expect for days of mahapuja!!

N she was somewhere getting vibes that this Mahapuja her life is going to take a huge turn... only time would tell say if it was for good or ...




To be continued. ...


Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Read bothe parts..
Hmmm...
I will give my proper comment after reading next part..😉😛😆
It seems Maan already knows Geet..
Or is it that the actual kingdom belongs to Maan or maan's father would have been in some higher level post for previous king and geet's father somehow got hold of Kingdom by cheating and killed maan's parents..
Okay I will stop my guesses here and u give us next part..
Edited by kkmouli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kkmouli

Read bothe parts..

Hmmm...
I will give my proper comment after reading next part..😉😛😆
It seems Maan already knows Geet..
Or is it that the actual kingdom belongs to Maan or maan's father would have been in some higher level post for previous king and geet's father somehow got hold of Kingdom by cheating and killed maan's parents..
Okay I will stop my guesses here and u give us next part..


Nahi nahi go on...
Sari story tum hi batado😡

On a serious note will post the next part in a while but I don't think u can guess much from that!🤣

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Curious Update

While Geet is trying to paint the face of the stranger it seems he has already entered her Kingdom unnoticed and now he demands that she meets him and she cannot deny as he says she owes her life to him
on the hand it seems that her father wants to get her married and she does not even know about it .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Curious Update

While Geet is trying to paint the face of the stranger it seems he has already entered her Kingdom unnoticed and now he demands that she meets him and she cannot deny as he says she owes her life to him
on the hand it seems that her father wants to get her married and she does not even know about it .


Thanks for reading! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part#3


In a Huge royal hall which was surrounded by bright violet drapes tied to the pillers which were the only colour in the otherwise white n bright interiors there where few elderly people seated n discussing some thing serious n upon reaching a conclusion they asked for there prince to be called in!

With in few minutes a very handsome man with a charming smile walked in to the hall greeting the king he very politely asked the reason for his presence...

So the situation was laid out in front of the prince. .. either they would be declaring a war or would be sending a wedding proposal for the adjacent Kingdom which would be only after knowing his consent that is...

After giving him time to think about it he was sent away...

He was kuvar Yeshvardhan every girls dream... brave, strong, handsome n what not. .. he made his way towards his mother's chamber to know her views regarding the whole situation. ...

Rani ma was a wise lady n she knew how such situations are as she has also been through the same... after dismissing the servants she lead her son to the northern end of her chamber where there was a seating arrangement done...

Son listen to your heart!

After all the thinking he put forward his views in front of the king... of meeting the princess personally

On the other hand the most important decisions of her life slowly knocks her doors too but in the form of a gossip amongst her maids!!

It paind her to know that such a important matter related to her life wasn't even discussed with her... she shrugged off those thoughts thinking her father would have thought of something good only... N being a dotting daughter she would wait for her father to talk about it rather than jumping around conclusions. ..

For now she had a major task in hands to sneak out of the palace once again but this time it was far more risky than the previous... knowing the consequences of a princess being caught with a man out side the palace!

Making up her mind to reward him a bag of gold n walk back .. determined she made sure the time of the court proceedings clashed with the time of her being out as it was the safest time of the day as everyone will be busy in attending the court n the back doors will be less crowded!

Offering her prayers to the goddess she made her way towards the bank of the river behind the temple making sure no one notices her...

Her heart was thumping so loud against will that she was afraid every one could hear her... closing her eyes tightly n releasing a breath she looked around on finding no one she was relieved washing her feet in the cold water of the river she turned back with a peaceful smile that it was over but to her luck she came face to face with the him!

Dressed in the rich cloths looking charming as ever he stood folding his hands to his chest making his muscles more prominent...with a killer smirk adorning his face...

Looking at him all her calculations lead to only one thing...

He was the prince she was going to get married to...




To be continued. ...



Hay pep!
Don't curse me... I remember all my pending ones well n this one isn't a new story but the first story after I made this id... so to be fair enough I took up this one for now!!


Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Superb Update

So Geet's stranger is actually the prince that she will be married to
Prince Yesvandhan is called by his father the king and the matter is discussed about either war or marrying the princess but for Geet her father still has not discussed anything

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Superb Update

So Geet's stranger is actually the prince that she will be married to
Prince Yesvandhan is called by his father the king and the matter is discussed about either war or marrying the princess but for Geet her father still has not discussed anything


I know this would be the result of reading so many stories at a time🤣

Please reread the story so far!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Okay ab maine kuch guess kiya but i dont want to say.
kahi tum jhoote nahi marogi!!😳😛
Isiliye mujhe samaj mein nahi aaraha ki main kya bolun..😉😆

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