The Prince Charming! (Part#2,3 pg.6, 14/6)

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spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Surrounded by tall n well built people who were starting at me ..n were getting close to me more than necessary. ..Though I was brave n all I couldn't help but notice the tiny fear that was creeping in my head!

Cursing the very thought of having fun out side the palace. . I took my defensive position. ..tightening the hold on my sword which was well hidden under my scarf!

To my dismay we were In a scheduled corner of the market place which was bursting with people who hardly noticed me... it all happened due to my over interest in the street food which was in the nearby stall n I lost my way... as I was walking through the crowd one of these men I think noticed my golden bangles. .

As I was about to draw my sword I heard someone call one of the men.. who was talking about guards wandering nearby searching for someone...

Suddenly they started to panic n hurriedly walked away leaving me alone with the stranger!

As they left he turned towards me ..That's the first time I saw him! His eye's were the first thing that caught my attention. .

U don't have to worry about them any more .. u r safe!

The command n strength in his voice were hard to go unnoticed! N that's the exact moment I learnt it's not necessary to exhibit physical strength everywhere!

Thank you! I mumbled. .

Being a princess my self I had few limitations n boundaries set which I couldn't cross. ..I couldn't help but watch him walk away Into the crowd. ..

Sitting by the pillar looking at the beautiful moon which was smiling brightly at me n the cool breeze which was helping me weaving dreams. Playing with the water of the pond. . I was Lost in the thoughts of today's events ...

I think there's more to my story don't you think?

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Part-1 pg-1

Part-2,3

Kahi pada sa laga rahahai na😛

don't worry maine tumari writer se permission leli😆

My old Id has some problems so using this one

Comming to the story this was all so lovey dovey one tho this is just another take on the same story. ..

Interested let me know...

Spoorthi😊

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part-1

In the same Kingdom a little away from the capital was a small village on the shores of the beautiful river... where one was lost in dreams the other was planning for their second meeting already!

Maanveer please it can be dangerous!

Aditya did u see the diamond which shone so brightly on the mahapooja night! I bet it would cost 50 bags of gold!

Hmmm heard it's ancient and is passed on to generations... So

So its simple since the king isn't having any son he would probably be planning to give it to his son-in-law ! Which would be a bonus with his Kingdom!

He completed smirking...

But Maanveer y are we even talking all this if u want to steal it all we have to do is plan for it!

Exactly my point Aditya... that diamond has a special value in the royal family so they are very careful and kept it safely hidden not even the guards of the royal treasury know about it!

Which makes it impossible for us to steal it!

I'm planning to take a easier route to it...

U mean...

Yes! The beautiful princess Geetanjali Handa's Heart!

Now sleep Aditya it's for us to rest... we have few preparations to do before our next move!

Winking at him I moved to my favourite place by the river side it was rarely visited place with lots of trees n bushes hiding the shore... It was calm n beautiful from a distance no one could make out that behind the all those thorny bushes there was this place too...

Finally we meet! princess u have grown more beautiful with the time... god she actually carried a sword... I thought chucking she can't even try opening it from the case n she wanted to fight!

Sorry Aditya the diamond isn't the only thing I want from the king there is much more... The past only caused me pain n anger rushed through my veins...

Sometimes it is so easy to say 'forgive n forget but sometimes it changes lives so drastically that it becomes impossible to forgive n unbearable to forget!

Here I once again start a boring story of a thief n the princess! Where the innocent princess is not aware of world outside her palace n the thief who knows his art to an extent where he is so very confident that he would steal the heart of princess Geetanjali effortlessly!

Ps: No it is not inspired from Aladdin too!😆

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Muskan

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice start ,Will be waiting for more.

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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome ,superb start...

maan by words...says it sounds thrilling and romantic ..

waiting nxt one..

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Taahir

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting and Intriguing yet Captivating at the same time
waiting for further updates
So does Maanveer know the princess

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Leisure
nice start ,Will be waiting for more.

Thanks for reading!😊

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spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jasika08
nice update

Thanks😊

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spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gavin14
awesome ,superb start...
maan by words...says it sounds thrilling and romantic ..

waiting nxt one..

😃 Thank you for reading!

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chiki143

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wonderful start... Hey its not boring yaar...its really interesting. So Geet is cute innocent princess and maan the intelligenng and cunning thief I think with some revenge. Hope he doesn't break geet's heart...waiting for more...