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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SWEETY9167

nice update very emotional
but I had a doubt why vikram referred GEET as MUSKI mother even before her birth like he wrote in letter,the mother of my unborn child,HOW and why???



Sweets sorry, but if you remember in the previous chapter i did mention haphazard writing plus he only referred to Geet as teh mother of his child on teh envelope. Basically he wrote that down before he died, that's why the inside of the letter remained the same since it was sealed. Hope that clears it. Why he chose her, frankly speaking i don't know why i thought like that but i suppose i wanted to give Geet a lifeline, so she moves on with her miseries faster.

Recently i read a story about a 29 yr old women with three kids and the husband just took off one fine day and divorced her, she found it hard to live within society so she brought a house far away from civilisation and now after many years she's got back that confidence and returned home. I personally think everyone takes it differently. Each to their own, not everyone can move on so I provided Geet with an excuse to move on.

Hope that clears it

Thank you Sweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hottyangel

awesome update... geets past is really very sad. because of vikrams mother he has to marry geet though he is already married to his love... vikram as a person is nice but his cowardness made him do all blunders with geet... he requested geet to take care of muskaan... geet took care of muskaan as her own child... after listening her story maans respect for geet is more now...



I feel the same Vikram started off as a good man during the initial days so to make him completely bad wouldnt make sense to me

Thank you Hotty 😉 Gosh that sounds real cheesy 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 54 - so that's how geet kept muskan with her and not let brij to give her away to orphanage. what vikram's mentality was. he didn't wanted anyone to accuse his lover or how the world will see her but he had done the same with geet. the accident death was very easy death for him & his mother.

hope maan's promises will let geet forgive everything and move on in her life with maan & muskan.



I couldn't agree with you more, Vikram wanted to protect his lover (sorry i ran out of names so couldnt give her one) but he caused the smae defame for Geet, ironic isnt he, better yet coward!

Thank you Madhuri
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da lovely update! wonderfully written! Feeling 4 Geet! Maan assures her! she shows the letter! Maan angry at Vikram! Geet kept the baby! she didn't want 2! update soon



Thank you Kwaish 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

chalo atlast everything cleared...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...



O i love your optimism

thanks Soma
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

very touched with this part yaar... my respect fr geet have multiple up..no one will have her pure heart..to adopt n tc care of the child of a man who cheated and hurt you to the extent facing life time pain is unimaginable..maan so pround of his geet he feel so lucky to have her..beautiful maaneet moment..cant wait for next part..




Thank you Hanisha, i feel what you feel
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Believe me you likes and comments mean alot, thank you from the bottom of my heart. I'm sorry for the wait, firstly i've been busy with I'm a Celeb since its eviction week, then I've started my applications for placement which is a grueling process and then I've just been hit with personal problems which is draining my life. oh yeah plus writers block. Bloody hell i sound like wonder girl 😆😆


anyway Thank you for waiting and hope you like the next chapter, replied to some comments on page 119-120
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 55: Pictured Tidings

'Mama' resonated Muskaan's happy voice forcing both Geet and Maan to come of their hold.

'Mama' this time she sounded impatient placing a serene smile on Geet's knowing her daughter was missing her and before she could push herself off the couch Muskaan came running in throwing herself onto her mother

'I missed you' her baby whispered wrapping her small hands around Geets waist, she was away for 2 nights and a day but it felt like eons for the mother daughter duo

'Where were you guys?' Geet questioned her little one who told of the tale of visiting her Nanu's friend and staying over the night due to the severity of the weather.

'Didn't you miss me?' Maan faked hurt but seeing his soon-to-be-family smiling worked its magic on him dropping his expression the next minute to form a cute smile

'Hello' came the chirpy reply but what followed shocked him, Muskaan slightly tapped his thigh before positioning herself against her mother again

'What was that?' he questioned amused by her act raising a brow towards Geet who giggled in reply

'to check if you've turned into a' she replied in her childlike voice

'monster' she lowered her voice range sounding serious as if she's dictating a conference on world's peace

'You stayed at a hotel with monsters' she continued with her theory which she formed after watching the latest Disney Animation (Hotel Transylvania 2)

'oh' came Maan's response not at all understanding what Musky's saying but nodding his head every few minutes to show that his intrigued. Geet watched the conversation from her peripheral view, a sight she was alien to. Where Muskaan and Maan conversed like a father and daughter. A part of her danced to see Muskaan happy and the other part felt peace seeing the reality.

'I'll be back' Geet said placing Muskaan onto Maan's lap before taking out her phone to capture this moment forever, whether tomorrow would be like this was a mystery but she promised to save every memory of today. Was it true that this morning has brought in glad tidings for them? If the chirping birds, the smiling sun and the clear sky was a sign then maybe, just maybe the tides in her life would mellow down too. Pushing back her thoughts Geet walked into the bathroom to get ready for the day, wanting to not miss any details.

'Musky can I be your papa?' she heard the question as soon as she existed the bathroom. The sight of him sitting with Muskaan in his arms, his hands delicately holding onto her baby's warmed her heart

'Papa' Musky questioned back with a face of shock and happiness

'App superman ho' and before he could react she threw herself to him, hugging him for her dire life. Geet watched again from a distant knowing this time was for her daughter to bask in as much love as possible. It was her right to finally feel loved by a father. She again captured the moment, she who never understood the psych of people who took selfie's/pictures at every given opportunity was doing the same.

'Ab mama ki bari' Maan danced his brows at Geet making her laugh, what was it in today's air that made her giddy with happiness. Her heart raced and the pit of her stomach tickled seeing Maan approach her ever so slowly carrying Muskaan.

'So you're ready to be Mrs Khurrana, because as on now Muskaan Maan Singh Khurrana is on my team' he pulled Geet with is spare hand, drawing her close enough to place a soft kiss to her cheek while Muskaan kissed her other cheek. Glad tidings indeed!

Mohinder raised a brow seeing Maan walk down carrying Muskaan who looked as jubilant as ever slowly followed by Geet who looked equally happy, ignoring his fatherly instincts on why Maan was here this early in the morning but raised the question of what actually happened to cause such a scene.

'erm papa wo'

'Geet your back' Pari crashed in with Pinky stopping Geet in her speech while Maan watched the girls hug one another

'You look happy' Geet remarked seeing the blush creep up, a blushing Pari was equivalent to an eclipse as in hardly ever seen

'Yash proposed' came the whisper with her forwarded hand which shone showing a diamond ring

'Oh my!' with that Raji and Geet sat down to inspect the ring before launching into another hug attack, Pinky seemed like the sane one since she already knew the story

'Yash is here, I knew you would want to talk to him' Pari informed seeing Yash walk in, Pinky had already interrogated the poor fellow which wasn't exactly easy with her being pregnant and a laughing Adi behind cracking jokes every so often. Poor guy had it bad.

'My superman' Muskaan shouted the minute she saw Yash getting off Maan, this disturbed Maan to no ends but the next minute she came back and pulled him along.

'Papa' Muskaan cleared when Yash asked her to repeat shocking the occupants apart from the two who stared in disbelieve and surprise

'Mr Handa, I mean Sir, papa' Maan hesitated finally settling for the apt call for the man he grew to respect over the past few weeks.

'Can I marry your daughter?' Maan earnestly requested while the rest of the people stood aghast. Mohinder turned towards his daughter who blushed velvet giving away her heart's desire.

'Welcome to the family beta' he hugged Maan while Muskaan hugged him round the leg creating the perfect picture moment but this time it was Rajji clicking the photographs. What followed was another round of hugs and congratulations. Although technically Maan hasn't yet asked the woman in question whether or not she wants to marry him? Funny isn't it? But it never occurred, Geet was bound to say yes!

'Please take care of her' Geet asked standing next to Yash seeing a very happy Pari at the other end of the room, after years of pain it seemed like everything was falling into place. Could one get happier?

'I will, I promise' he promised pulling her hands into his

'She looks really happy' he nodded towards Muskaan who lay in Maan's arms playing with his finger while Maan conversed with Mohinder, another memory Geet stored in her brain. It was an overdose of happy memories, she who thought life would always remain dark felt the lightness of the day and the gift of joy.

'You better take care of her' Pari threatened Maan with Rajji in tow, Mohinder had gone upstairs leaving the opportunity for Pari to drill in some points

'Of course I will, she's my life now' he stated with arrogance making Pari groan, why does this man need to be so difficult?

'Guys breakfast' Pinky shouted who sat at the table eagerly waiting for some food forcing the silent conversation between Pari and Maan to stop

'Papa sits next to me' Muskaan commanded pulling Maan along, finally having her superman made her exceptionally happy however she still forced her Nanu of the seat beside her, clearly showing that her Nanu jaan was still the favourite man in her life.

'I've spoken to the lawyer, adoption paper is ready to sign' Maan said to Geet who was too absorbed in the kitchen work. Pari, Pinky and Yash were still at her place playing games with Muskaan

'But I'm Musky's legal guardian' Geet stressed, this was a confusing business

'I don't want any complications Geet' Maan wanted all legal matters sorted before their marriage

'Dadi's got the pandit on the phone, I told her we want to get married as soon as possible'

'KYA' she cried hitting his hand in the process

'Maan dadi kya sochengi, god Maan why don't you just tell her that we want to get married today'

'Even better honey' with that he redialled leaping Geet into action, gosh the Maan hasn't even proposed properly yet here he was demanding as early marriage without her consent

'MAAN' she shouted disconnecting the call while he laughed at her red face

'You've proposed to the world but not me yet'

'so' he said playing with her curls with one hand while the other creeped up her waist

'SO' she mouthed feeling agitated with his smirk, why can't he do something right?

Glad tidings, sweet news passed by all day with Dadi formally meeting Mohinder the same afternoon to arrange the engagement who was accompanied by Naintara and Dev. Everyone rejoiced at the news, double weddings; double brides and double the fun? What caused for such glad tidings you may ask well when time is in favour what more can be expected? Every life goes through a slippery slope which we deem as a test' whether they pass or fail is dependent upon them. But ones that help others in that time are truly blissful and live a beautiful happy life, like the one Geet was faced with now and being in the company of her loved ones would only increase this glad tiding by a million.

Note: I never let Muskaan name Maan anything because I wanted her to call him papa first, I hope you like it

Would you like me to continue till the wedding or can I just end it with Maan proposing, please let me know or else I'm ending this with Geet being officially engaged to Maan

Also sorry you may have to wait a bit for the next part, I seriously wanted to finish this story way before December but not all things go so as planned. I'm sorry but I'm going through a stressful period so writing isn't coming to be as easy. Hope you understand

Thank you, please do like and comment.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Happiness And Joyous Moments Indeed

Finally Geet would bury her bitter past and concentrate on her love her happiness
that she so well deserves .
Muskaan now will have a father someone that will love her immensely someone that
will pamper her will lead her in the right path .
Maan finally gets a true woman in his life someone that has a vast difference from his
own mother someone that will pour true and pure love into his soul .
Mohinder finally sees his daughter happy blessed with love he sees Maan in deep admiration
for this man not only accepted Geet with her past but also accepts Muskaan as his daughter
today he finally has a perfect son in law that will support his daughter in every phase of life
Pari and Yash also on the road to getting married that is great
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic beautiful update! superbly written! they are all so happy! Maan n Muskaan share a lovely bond! Geet gets happiness! Maan will adopt Muskaan! Muskaan calls Maan papa! Mohinder happy 4 Geet! Pari n Yash getting married! Maan gets his life partner! dadi comes 2 decide engagement! regd ur note - of cos wantr Maaneet's marriage! update soon

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