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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

very nice updates..loved them



hai anu di... are you gng to come back soon with ur writings?😳
eagerly waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



rems ke aane tak patience de do babaji😆



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Posted: 10 years ago
whn ll we get d update?? :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part eagerly waiting 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago


DONT RIDERE

patiently wait karna mushkil hain rems especially when it comes to ur story😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update... Geet n her change of topics... Poor boy maan getting too much dose from geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its Sunday... Its update day...
Waiting...
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanku so much for the likes and comments. Support me as well as other writers too..😊

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Posted: 10 years ago



Chapter 6



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Anticipation built inside Geet, making her more restless. She cursed her big mouth for provoking him to maximum extent. For diverting her mind from his brooding sensuality, she just read the lines of the book, which in turn surprised her. But then hanging onto that subject, she diverted both their attention which hit his massive ego. She can still remember his rage filled face before he stormed out.

Wanting to calm her senses, Geet decided to take a cool shower. The washroom is filled with modern amenities which everyone woman dreams of. Relaxing into tub she welcomed the warm shower and soothing aroma of vanilla and roses filled in it. She switched on iPod allowing the music to relax her body and soul. After what felt like an hour, she stepped out the shower and toweled herself dry with the linen bath towel. She was shocked to see no robes inside the cabinet. Where the hell were those things? How was she supposed to step out of the washroom?

Tying the long bath towel in sarong style, she stepped out of the washroom praying that Maan is buried inside some file work. She was shocked to see the whole room dimly lit like in a romantic movie.

Maa.. Maan?

No one answered making her more suspicious. She just wants to reach the cupboard and take some clothes to cover her.

Okay Geet.. Don't panic. It can be a powercut!

Taking baby steps she was about to reach the cupboard when someone hauled her from elbow and she crashed into a naked chest. Naked chest!

Maan watched the half naked beauty in fascination. Her skin was glowing like satin and her husky voice which uttered his name was turning him on. He felt jealous of the water droplets that kissed her skin shamelessly. One day he is going to make them jealous of him. For now he has a mission to accomplish. Without making any noise he hauled her from elbow making her petite form crash to him.

Not so soon baby

Next second she let out a loud shrill from that small mouth of hers making him wince.

Shut the hell up woman! You are killing my eardrums.

Leave me now or I am going to wake the whole England screaming.

She was till struggling to free making his grip tighter.

Oh no cara mia!! That's not going to happen, since this room is sound proof.

Wh..what?

Oh yea.. Now coming to our situation..

Wounding his arms around her waist, he plastered her whole body to his. Both were aware of how their bodies are mingled and Maan let out a small wolf whistle.

Wow! I am so enjoying this position cara mia. What about you?

Oh you sick dinosaur. Why are you not wearing anything? And please move aside you elephant. I can't bear your weight.

Don't worry tesoro. Get some practice now. It will help us in future. And if you want I can remove this boxers too.

Why? Are you allergic to clothes?

Yes. But only with you.

He blew his breath to her making her eyes widen.

Mr. Dino Singh Khurrana. Are you going to rape me?

Maan's mouth widened in shock imitating hers. He was never called a rapist before, but now this woman is hell behind on creating the fight.

No Geet.. Don't worry.. I am just going to prove my virginity.
Geet was stunned to hear him uttering those words. Oh no!! His dangerous eyes are glittering wildly making her remind of some villains in Ramayan Serial. For a second she felt like she is Sita and he is Ravan, kidnapping her from hero Ram. But unfortunately in this story, the twist in her story is both hero and villain are the same characters.

Maan baby.. Calm down. You are just stressed up. Just breath in and slowly breathe out. See I will show you. Breathe in.. Breathe out.. Breathe in.. Breathe out.. Yea that's right. Do it once again.

Maan realized that he is following her words unconsciously breathing in and out making him curse. She is a little witch who can cast spell on anyone.

That's good. Do it again..

Picking her up, Maan threw her softly to bed and covered her body with his before she gained control of her senses.

You will need that breathing exercise soon sweetheart.

Wh..Why?

Maan let a Cheshire cat smile plaster his mouth making Geet gulp her saliva. But why was she not struggling anymore. Did she love the weight of him on her? Oh no geet.. Don't let the attraction interfere.

So where we? Hmm.. virginity! So what was your first point!
The guy is shy about touching you, right. Well, let me see..

He slide his forefinger from her forehead to the pert little nose, then to lips stopping a moment to rub it, down to chin and throat and stopped just above the V of her robe. Geet's breath hitched in throat while Maan's eyes held hers darkening with desire. Suddenly Maan groaned in pain making his grip loosen and geet took that chance and ran towards the other end of the bed.

I already told you Mr. Khurrana I know karate.

You devil woman.. you kick like hell. Do you hate my manhood so much to hurt it!

Maan stood ready to chase her wincing a little. Did she kicked that hard?
He crossed the distance between them ready to pounce her. Geet made a run to other end, jumping across the bed and stumbling a little.

Geet.. Stop it. You are going to hurt yourself.

She used her two forefingers in a plus like symbol and stretched it towards Maan

In the name of Jesus, you go away devil khurrana, go away.

Maan let out a loud rumble of words in Italian making geet confused. Did he praise her or curse her. May be latter. Before she could realize Maan stormed towards her and geet made a dash without realizing the knot in her towel loosened. Letting out a loud shriek she plastered herself onto wall.

Geet..

Maan covered his body with hers and closed his eyes. Geet was breathing heavily, clutching the towel at the front, while the back of it was hung loosely around her hip. She don't know whether Maan is going to enjoy the view or take advantage of the situation. May be he is smirking and enjoying her vulnerability. She felt tears burning her eyes but blinked away rapidly. Glancing sideways, she was shocked to see his eyes closed and he dint move away for which she was eternally greatful.

Don't move.

She nodded and then realized he possibly couldn't see her. So she murmured an acknowledgement.

I promise not to open my eyes. But you have to trust me in this.

Without waiting for her affirmation, he took one end of the knot clutched by geet and held it tighter around neck. The other end was hanging loosely around the hip showing geet's left side bare. He wound his arms around her front and very carefully found the other end without touching her bare form. Securing both ends around the neck, he opened his eyes.

I am not at all shy touching any woman or with intimacy, but when I do it, I will make sure that she agrees too. I respect woman whether you might think of me as a leech or dino. And as for my proof of virginity..

Geet sucked her breath in anticipation of next words.

Yes. I have flirted a lot, kissed at times. But I have held my values and virtues intact all my life tesoro mio. Waiting for someone special.

He whispered the last words huskily, his lips grazing her bare shoulder and then stormed out of the room without glancing back.. Geet's eyes widened in shock hearing his words. He couldn't possible be saying?



Note : Thanku so much for your support, likes and comments. And thanku once again for waiting patiently. I wish our beautiful actress Drashti Dhami a very happy married life. Also Happy Birthday Rose. This part is dedicated to you.😃

Remember my updates will be once in a week as i wont get much tym after my job. So u have one week to read. So our motto is Like comment and Get another update!!!




Edited by Remya_Pillai - 10 years ago
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Don't know who to feel sorry for!

Poor Maan!
Getting kneed in the family jewels and getting screamed at!

Meanwhile he has been saving himself for someone special.. aww!
Man has no wardrobe except Devil Boxers😆 Kuch toh kapde pehen ne doh isse Remya😆

Geet getting into close encounters of the intimate kind!
Too good!
Breathe in breathe out Avi!
Remya is just getting started.👍🏼
Uff oh!
Now I have to wait another week?
Are you bribeable?😔
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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