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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#261

Part 26

astounding update! superbly written!

Can understand Rano's tension for Geet! glad Geet told her family abt Maan! I hope that Maan moves on with Geet!

Geet is so sweet! she takes the Khuranas around the city!

Maan was jealous meeting Geet's best friend Aryan! when Geet confronts him, he denies! liked how Geet shows her affection for him!

dadis is so happy!

Maan has fallen for Geet but hesitant to admit his feelings!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#262

Part 27

exceptional update! brilliantly written!

nice that Maan showed his affection for Geet! everyone surprised! Maan admires Geet!

intense passionate moments! Maaneet cannot keep their hand off each other!

he feels much for than he felt for anyone incl NT! glad that he is over NT! Maan's thoughts and feelings well portrayed!

but he is afraid to get hurt again! but hated that he thinks as Geet is over ambitious she is somewhat like NT!

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#263

Ohhh Myy Myyy Is this happening for real more 2 updates!!!!!!!! 😲

That was such unexpected surprise will just get back to read soon...

So happy you updated once again just love you for that 🤗

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#264

Inn sha Allah will read soon 😊

Edited by MariumChoudhary - 7 years ago

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 7 years ago

#265

wonderful updates

both geet n maan wants their relation to be real but dint say it

but geet finally said that she will be happy if this relation is in real

both become one but still maan is in fear about breaking his heart again if he involve in this in real

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#266

OMG !!!!

It's like a dream come true... You have updated...

WOW

Awesomely written as always...

I just love Geet here... So perfectly perfect...

But ironically our hero is still not sure about his feelings... Although we can't blame him now... Can we... He had been broken... that too by his close ones... by people he trusted... so it's difficult to trust anyone so easily... to put himself open out there again...

Thank you for updating... Waiting for the next part already