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Posted: 10 years ago
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG... Really beautiful...
So many emotions together;
Love n pain so beautifully portrayed.
They really needed each other n gave up to desires...
Them being married was a shocker to me!
N geet-dev convoy also shocking; but her letter was a big blow!!!
With a believe they ll meet again; I move to next part 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part3

Really... Evn I didn't understand her arguments!!!
Well some things r right...
Like he was not able to express why tht happened, coz evn he didn't knw the reason! True that is

With geet... Really felt bad seeing her state...
N the baby; sad for her too
Muskan so sweet... She could figure out there's prob between them...
And they cooperating for her is smthing I aopriciate;!
No matter what happens between a husband n wife; the child shd now bear its consequences!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part4

So he knew she was acting...
Well wht to say?
Only that mistakes do happen; n we r helpless abt
it
They did love each other but not tht much... Maybe!


Geets side of story is painful...
All tht happened from childhood to now!!
Its difficult not to b welcomed by ur own parents; unimaginably painful!!!
And then loosing the only brother she was emotionally close to...
Wouldn't say brij is wrong... As they are parents after all; right ya wrongs facts wouldn't change

Now devs side of story remains...
Waiting eagerly 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
This man is one confused soul.
In his guilt conscious he is hurting Sam too.

Sam is right at her place.
No woman would accept it.


Nice chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 2-4
beautiful updates...
maan is so confused one day ago he wanted divorce n now he want to give a chance!!!
he is in guilt for betraying sam...
but sam is right in her place...once maan's guilt wore off he will again stared to blame her...
and no wife would accept her husbands betrayal...
geet is so lonely poor her...now she lest friend lost her two best friends to who were her support from childhood...
Edited by CrazyEyes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Nice part..Geet move back..I think Maan also move here or he stay here..I think maybe Geet might work for him..I feel that Geet might get preg.
Let see how Geet & Maan come face to face..


Thanks a lot dear!!! Okay one thing for sure is Geet won't get pregnant. Rest am sure you would come to know as I write. Honestly I haven't planned till now. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! well written. Geet leaves! She tells Pari wt happened! Sam upset! Maan tells her he knows her! Pari worried tht she may b pregnant! update soon


Thanks dear!! And am sorry for being late.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl



Of course I dont know anything about how things work in other states n their cities while admitting a child in school. But I asked questions simply cos I felt she is way too young to be sent to hostel away from her parents.

Coming to what you said about Maan, I saw things more clearly now. I really havent met any person who is perfect in life n have high morals n virtues. I was just confused about his sudden change n so couldnt actually get why he felt like forgiving her. But with this explanations things are more clear to me n I now get why the conversation felt so alien to me. I exactly wouldnt understand until I myself face such a situation or go through it or at least see someone in my life facing it. I'm reading such a complicated story for the first time n I really dont know what view to have on any situation. I'm just going with the flow, hence my comments are also having Dev bashed left right center.

I know I dont know his side of story n I'm being harsh but I cant help it. I really wouldnt have been this judgemental had Muskaan not been in the picture. But her presence is for now making me hate him. May be in future n after reading his pov I might really try to understand him. But until it comes out I would be confuse. I'm also curious to know if Dev-Geet's was a love marriage? There are actually so many questions going in my head but I know I will get answers slowly with every updates.

But all this also doesnt meant that I support Maan n Geet for their actions. They both were equally wrong if I find Dev, Meera or Sam wrong. Just cos their names are Geet n Maan, I'm not over looking their faults.

And Thank you so much Aditi for this reply. It will now help me to read the story with more open mind. Also it cleared many doubts of mine.

-Sanjana!


Hey Sanjana, I understand that you might not know about the admission procedures of our state. I have stayed in different states for my education and job so makes it easier for me to get familiarized with the idea. Muskaan is young but I am sure you would have to read on to find the details of why she was admitted to the hostel. Regarding Maan...well some people are there like that and I pray you never encounter that feeling. Guilt is the worst emotion of all. It kills one man.

You have a lot of questions but I answered the ones I can. rest you have to wait for the story to reveal. You know I would always be ready to reply to your queries.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Oh ho, so Geet herself dint had a good childhood. Its really really strange that Rano-Mohinder were an ideal couple until Geet happened n so she could never witness the love once shared btw her parents. Geet's mother not loving Geet was yeg another painful fact of her life.


This update also cleared that Geet-Dev-Meera were childhood friends. Now that hurt more. So I now guess that Dev n Geet's was a love marriage cos she had broken ties with her parents so no chances of them getting her married or something.

Also Geet's past relations with every person in her life was a much needed one for the story. Brij's relation with Geet n Yash also was very strange. But at least Geet n Yash had each other unlike Brij. So I really felt for him. Him being the perfect son somewhere create a distance btw Geet-Yash n himself. Good thing was that in spite of being the perfect son he came to Yash's wedding going against his parents. Just says how much he loves his sibblings. Glad that his this one step towards them got him his bro n sis back in his life n their bond strengthen.

Whatever I read about Pari, I liked her. She too has faced a lot in her life. My heart went out to her after knowing that she lost her husband so early. Yash was so young. But then life is full of unexpected things. You really never know what would happen next. She seems to be living alone in the flat which made me wonder at what age Yash really died? No children? Cos its obvious he married before Geet. Will wait to know more about it.

Geet finally confided everything in Pari which has left her shocked. She dint seem to judge Geet on her having one night stand with a stranger. May be cos she knows Geet too well. But for a second even I tensed after Pari's first question. Glad to know Geet was on pills. One child is enough, I really cant take Geet's pregnancy in such a complicated situation. I'm anyways too much worried for Muskaan, I dont want to worry over another one.

Sam's pov was again very emotional n hurting. She indeed is an awesome actress to have pretend that Maan's cheating on her dint bother which had confused me like anything. I was left with so so many questions. Her reaction really dint sounded normal to me at all. But now I can say she is very much human.

Just cos she did wrong in aborting the child dint mean she would be cool about Maan's infidelity n will forgive n forget accepting him starting anew. She already being on the wrong side dint helped her, hurting her to know about Maan's one night stand, resulting in her telling him that he will get over his guilt. Cos if her wrong doings couldnt let her overlook his mistake n forgive him then how could he actually forgive her for aborting the baby? They both have done wrongs n made grave mistakes. It might really have made things bitter btw them in future even after giving their marriage a second chance like Sam said or may be it really make them genuinely forgive each other over the time if they both want it.

So again I'm confused regarding Maan-Sam relationship. Its way too complicated n I really dont know whats right n wrong for their marriage or to each individuals. I will choose to go with the story n its flow.

Aditi be ready to give answers to my essays. Cos I'm sure as hell I'll be eating your head with my confusions.

Liked the small insight of Geet's past.

-Sanjana!


Hi Sanjana, First of all I absolutely love reading your essays😉 so keep writing them. Lets talk about Geet first. I have no intention of making Geet pregnant with Maan's child at this juncture of the story. And Geet is a married woman with a disturbed married life so it is only natural for her to take some sort of birth control measures. Her childhood is an important factor of the story. It made Geet the woman she is today.
Sam and Maan...well they are complicated.They had been in love one, being happy in the marriage until Maan somewhere stopped loving her. 'love left us' concept to be frank. But that does not mean they are really going to start hating each other all of a sudden. They still care about each other to provide solace to each other. But infidelity hurts... aborting your unborn child hurts. So yes they can't be together as a couple anymore. Doesn't mean they stopped caring.

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