Distorted Lives..... FOUW...Link to Thread 2 Updtd - Page 14

Originally posted by: lehr

awesome

Originally posted by: nostalgicmoon

Nice update,muskan is understanding her parents so well,and geet's reply to dev was really good,waiting for next part

Originally posted by: -Sufi-

Emotinal update ...very wll written
waiting for next..cont soon

Originally posted by: dqno1

ch 1

the title makes a show here

fragmented lives

well I did not expect this at all

one night stand definitely leaves a distateful feeling but it seems both are hurting in their life

It would be too judgemental to say much and too soon also

off to read next

Originally posted by: dreamy

nice story

Originally posted by: dqno1

ripping off the faces behind the characters

boy that was painful

loss of trust on both sides for both couples

Sam knew Maan would not understand her ambition so she made the decision herself

Dev and Meera just happened or so they say

Still whatever the circumstances, what Maan and Geet did was not right either

It may not be the popular thing to say but she has a child

Did she not think of the consequences?

a marriage breaking is never one person's fault completely

there are contributing factors on both sides

right now everything is so bleak

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam

bahut achhi concept hai ,...dekhna hai aap kaise lead kartrhe ho ye story ,hai ,.jistarah thumne ,.. sab ka potrait ki ,.. maan geet ,.. dev aur sameera ,.. charectors ,.. beautiful ,.. sab ko apni apni pov ,.. jis tarah apni apni galathionko ,.. safai karna koshish karrahe ,.. ye mujhe achha laga ,.. ye kya justification hai ki thum galathi ki badleme mai bhi ek galat ki tho hissa barabar ,.. ,... maan tho sameera ko sab kuch bathadiya ,.. ye achha laga ,. aur sameera situation ko bahut achhi tarah handle karneki koshish karthi hai ,.. ,..,.. please add me to ur pm list ,.. thank.u.

Originally posted by: RubiesnDiamonds

loved all 3 parts both maaneet in broken marriage

Originally posted by: krithi12

just now read all parts.loved it

Aditi it's wonderful story. I read all parts and I am just loving it. You portrayed all character amazingly. Four of them were wrong but somewhere they were helpless to do so. Maneet spend one night with each other for forgetting the problems in their respective married life. Dev ditched geet with her best friend and asking sorry from geet. But geet wants divorce. N here same era abort the baby without telling maan and it's not bearable for maan. I will not defend maneet as they were also wrong. Dev was right when geet took that big step for forgetting her pain then what is the problem when dev did the same. Maan was awared about sameera priorities then why suddenly he wanted to see changed sameera who would choose their baby instead of her career. They all are in pain and feeling guilty for each other. Waiting for next dear