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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: lehr
awesome

Thanks dear!!😊

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: nostalgicmoon
Nice update,muskan is understanding her parents so well,and geet's reply to dev was really good,waiting for next part

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: -Sufi-
Emotinal update ...very wll written
waiting for next..cont soon

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: dqno1
ch 1
the title makes a show here

fragmented lives

well I did not expect this at all

one night stand definitely leaves a distateful feeling but it seems both are hurting in their life

It would be too judgemental to say much and too soon also

off to read next

I myself hate one night stands or infidelity... and here my protagonists are engaged in such things...😉

I just wanted to try something new di and am totally nervous about how it will come out. 🥱

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: dreamy
nice story

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: dqno1
ripping off the faces behind the characters

boy that was painful

loss of trust on both sides for both couples

Sam knew Maan would not understand her ambition so she made the decision herself

Dev and Meera just happened or so they say

Still whatever the circumstances, what Maan and Geet did was not right either

It may not be the popular thing to say but she has a child

Did she not think of the consequences?

a marriage breaking is never one person's fault completely

there are contributing factors on both sides

right now everything is so bleak

You are right. only very people including myself would say this since its maaneet but maaneet had not done the right thing. As I said earlier my Maan and Geet are not perfect, they are both wrong yet they are the protagonists. actually for once I wanted to write a story about wrong people, their mistakes and their guilt. And I am sure you would know more as I update. for now I would just say, sometimes sex is just to have the feeling of being needed and loved even if for the physical aspect of it, even if for few hours Geet wanted to forget her ruined lives. Not a justification but maybe sometimes we all give in to our irrational mind... some us are more in control than others. and that just makes us different from each other.

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam
bahut achhi concept hai ,...dekhna hai aap kaise lead kartrhe ho ye story ,hai ,.jistarah thumne ,.. sab ka potrait ki ,.. maan geet ,.. dev aur sameera ,.. charectors ,.. beautiful ,.. sab ko apni apni pov ,.. jis tarah apni apni galathionko ,.. safai karna koshish karrahe ,.. ye mujhe achha laga ,.. ye kya justification hai ki thum galathi ki badleme mai bhi ek galat ki tho hissa barabar ,.. ,... maan tho sameera ko sab kuch bathadiya ,.. ye achha laga ,. aur sameera situation ko bahut achhi tarah handle karneki koshish karthi hai ,.. ,..,.. please add me to ur pm list ,.. thank.u.

Thanks Anuradha... please don't call me aap. Mai aapse kafi choti hoon. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Sameera aur Maan ka part abhi bacha hai. net update pe shayad aapko aur behter pata chale. please mujhe buddy request send kar dijiye for pm.😊

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: RubiesnDiamonds
loved all 3 parts both maaneet in broken marriage

Thanks a lot dear!!😊

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aditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: krithi12
just now read all parts.loved it

Thanks a lot dear!!😊

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nishamna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Aditi it's wonderful story. I read all parts and I am just loving it. You portrayed all character amazingly. Four of them were wrong but somewhere they were helpless to do so. Maneet spend one night with each other for forgetting the problems in their respective married life. Dev ditched geet with her best friend and asking sorry from geet. But geet wants divorce. N here same era abort the baby without telling maan and it's not bearable for maan. I will not defend maneet as they were also wrong. Dev was right when geet took that big step for forgetting her pain then what is the problem when dev did the same. Maan was awared about sameera priorities then why suddenly he wanted to see changed sameera who would choose their baby instead of her career. They all are in pain and feeling guilty for each other. Waiting for next dear