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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.















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Thread - 8
Thread - 9

Part - 79

Part - 80

Part - 81

Part - 82
Part - 83

Part - 84

Part - 85

Part - 86

Part - 87

Part - 88

Part - 89

Part - 90



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CS.

Maan singh Khurana ...

Gurmeet Chaudhary in first scene of Geet

Geet singh ...

Armaan singh/ Manu

Yash singh Khurana..

Ruchi Khurana...

Savitri devi Khurana..

Anvesha Khurana...

Sameera/sam

Rano handa..

late Mahinder singh handa..

Dadrji..

Brijveer singh handa..

Tayaji/tayeeji

Aditya gill .

prem & heer ...

Spl member...

Jojo...



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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 78


Part - 79

Geet tried hard to make U&A Sam agree nd they wanted some time to think over that ,, they got ready nd went for dinner nd Geet came back ,, their meal had come nd Maan was waiting eagerly for her ,, she came nd they had their dinner together ,, Maan was surprised why she was quiet in front of him nd not saying anything about her visit ? what is running in her mind ,, he became lil alert about her intention ,, after dinner manu was watching his fav show nd Geet quietly waiting for Maan to go back his home ,, she was working on her lappy in dinning area nd giving look at him now nd then , while Maan was also waiting to start d convo ,, when Geet didn't open her mouth he became impatient nd went near her ,, took a seat nd sat infront of her ,, Geet looked at him casually .

Geet: aamm,, do u want something ?

Maan: yes,, want to ask something .

Geet: what ?

Maan cleared his throat : aahhmm,, r u going India?

Geet startled : how did he come to know ?

Geet: me , no , it was not sure ,, I m thinking to refuse d offer.

Maan annoyed: don't lie Geet ,, I heard nd tell me clearly,, r u going india?

Geet : I said mr Khurana that it is not sure , I don't want to go nd thinking to ...

Maan: enough Geet ,, I know u r going nd requesting U&A Sam to come with u ,, why r u hiding this nd lying to me ? tell me when r u going nd where ?

Geet: why it's matter to u mr Khurana ? I m working nd have my life ,, there r many things nd I cn't share everything to u ?

Maan: why cn't I ,, m I nothing to u ?

Geet gave a thoughtful look to him : who r u to me Mr Khurana ? why sd I share my matters with u ?

Maan annoyed : u know Geet ,so stop ranting this ? How cn u distance from me ?

Geet huffed: here u start again ,, what do u want from me mr Khurana ,, why do u want to drive my life according to u ? It cn't be possible .

Maan: I m not driving ur life Geet but want ur favour to live with Manu nd u .

Geet looked at him awed ... He wanted to live with her ,,, No .

Geet: Do u have any idea , what r u saying mr Khurana ? How cn u live with us ?

Maan: nd why cn't ? leave this , tell me when r u going india nd where is ur office?

Geet closed d lappy nd decided to clear her side ,, it was need before going to India .

Geet: yes I cn go Ind in 10-15 days for my office work nd I m planning to take U&A Sam with me this time .

Maan: where ?

Geet: in Gurgaon ( delhi NCR) .

Maan beamed : really ,, WOW!! It's a good news nd u r hiding it , u disappoint me .

Geet sighed: mr Khurana it's not a good news for me nd I got this news today only ,, I have my prob nd I m not happy .

Maan: why Geet ,, it's good that u nd Manu r going back home again nd we all r going to live together ,, I m giving this good news to dad-mom.

Geet: not now mr Khurana ,, easy ,, this time I cn't live in KM ,, my co is providing accommodation to all ,, many ppl r going with me ,, I m not alone nd U&A Sam cn join me ,, I m living away ,, so don't inform them now .

Maan : what ? u r planning to live away not in KM , but why ? U&A Sam cn live there with us ,,, No , u all will live in KM ,, no argument Geet ,, dad won't allow u .

Geet: i'll handle that nd make him understand , u don't worry .

Maan glared : I won't Geet ,, u all live with us nd that is final .

Geet: u cn't force me everytime mr Khurana nd this time i'll talk to uncle .

Maan hurt : prob kya hei Geet ? ku dur bhaag rahi ho ?

Geet: yahi sabke liye accha hei ,, plzz samajhne ki koshish kijiye ,, apni aur apni family ki khushiyon ke liye chup rahiye .

Maan was hurt with her words ,, why she was becoming so hard? he got up from his chair nd knelt near her ,, held her hands in his looking deep in her eyes ,, d pain in his eyes steered Geet nd she felt a shiver in her body ,, she didn't want to face this situation which make her weak .

Maan pressed her hand a lil : Geet , mai tum dono ke bina nahi raha sakta ,, ye sach ab meri jindgi ban gaya hei ,, mai tum dono ke sath jeena chahata hun ,, mujhse dur matt jao ,, mai apna gunah manta hun Geet ,, jo chahe saza de do lekin tum aur Manu dur matt jao ,, plzz.

Geet felt a lump in her throat nd gulp hard : Mr Khurana ,, apki apni jindgi hei ,, sapne hein ,, DM , uncle aur aunty ke bahot se armaan hei aapke liye ,, wo aapke apne hei ,, ek galti ke liye aap ku sabko takleef dena chahaty hei ? wo ye sab sahan nahi ker sakenge ,, toot jayenge ,, aapse naraaz ho jayenge ,, ku un sabko dukh dena chahaty ho .

Mr Khurana mai fir se aapke aur aapke pariwaar ko todna nahi chahati ,, plzz meri baat maniye aur bhool jaeye sab kuch ,, mujhe aapse kuch nahi kahan-sunna ,, mujhe meri jindgi jeene do aur aap apni jeo .

Maan's eyes turn wet : Geet , humari jindgi alag kahan rahi ,, kaise bhool jau ki Manu aur tum ab meri zindgi ka ek hissa ho ,, tumhare aur mere na manne se sach to nahi badal jayega na ,, Geet tum ek baar haan kaha do mai sab kuch saha lunga ,, dad-mom ki naraazgi bhi ,, tum ku peeche hatt rahi ho jab mai sath hun .

Geet became restless thinking about his family's reactions ,, his DM deffo blamed her nd may be this ugly truth cd break Yash uncle nd Raashi aunty's heart nd changed their views for her ,, no she cdn't bear that ,, she cdn't see them in pain coz of her ,, d best way is to d d things nd stay away .

Geet in a broken voice : aap theek kahate thy Mr Khurana ,, mai sach mei ek curse hu ,, mujhe darr lagta hei , meri wajha se fir aapki family toot sakti hei ,, ye mujh se nahi ho sakta Mr Khurana ,, aapko to kuch yaad nahi fir ku uss bare mei soch rahe hein ,, apni family ki khusi ke bare mei socho .

Maan: wo meri family hei aur , tum dono ,, tumhe aur manu ko chod du akele jeene ko ,, tum ek gunah ko chupane ke liye dusra kerne ko kaha rahi ho ,, kya Manu ke bare mei janne ka mom-dad ko koi haq nahi hei Geet ,, tum ku darr rahi ho ki tumhe koi blame karega ,, mai hu na sab accept kerne ko .

Geet: nahi ,, plzz ,, I don't want to face any one ,, plzz stop all this here ,, mujhe darr lagta hei ,, pllzz .

Maan looked helplessly at her feared face ,, she was not ready nd fearing to face d truth ,, his own words which he used for her became curse for him ,, she didn't accept easily .


Precap ---- Maan manoeuvred ... Geet agreed ...

Part - 80



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