MG ff Bleeding Heart pain of love note on 69 -14 jan - Page 37

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Posted: 10 years ago
thhe geets behevier is natural she suffard biggest shock of her life, and it is obvious she cant alove anyone to come near her but in this situation only she wants is love and care of her husband and family to assure her that they are with her and she didnt do anything wrong.
and send message to the people that dont see victim as culprit, be human and accept the reality that thoes responsible should hand till death so that others learn lesson from ths incident and think twice before doing such horendous act.
who nis dev brother of maan or friend?
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am there to read this story... Don't discont.. It
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan shocked to know its not what they see
he calls someone
geet n maan talking about chutki
hearing about going home geet gets panic
n dr.que maan
his ans is fab
dev..is he some cbi
going 2 enquire about all these things
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi emotional sad update! Well written! Maan tensed! he contacts someone! Geet doesn't like the lady doctors touching her! she is tensed abt gng home! Dev arrives! he knows at happened! Maan breaks down!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update feel bad 4 geet & maan its emotional geet so scared maan meet chutki father maan call dev he came maan hug him his saber broke
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Posted: 10 years ago




big hug and thanks pixi_nightingal

for this help
hi all she help me to clear all my mistake in English



Maan took few min to become normal , after so many days he feel light , all these day he felt everything had been stuck like thorns inn his mind, now he have been taken off. Though he always put brave face in front of geet ,doc ect . But that burden was making him suffocated from inside, now when he saw dev is front of him he feel so much relief, as if whole earth burden had taken off from his shoulder.

Dev gives sometime to him ,and caressed her back with so much love and care ,he knows how much maan has suffer in this.

Dev ask softly are you ok ,do you need water, maan nodded in yes and dev give him a bottle of water

Dev -ye chutaki ka father innocent hai ,maan give surprised look to him like ...how do you know this

Dev- please maan don't give me that look , before coming here I have gathered all the information, so now clam down (main yaha aane se pehale sari khabaar nikalke aaya hu so take chill pill)

Dev - did you want to say something about that incident ,maan nodded and say in painful tone , I need some time please ,dev murmur ok , does geet and chutaki is ready to face me

Maan screamed no no don't even think of that ,and chutaki she even get scared of me to , and geet also doesn't like woman doctor near her, dev ,sorry but I cannot help it, maan sighed sadly

Dev - nodded in yes and say don't say sorry it's ok I will search other way so please stop this sorry and all ,ok what about doc is she co-operating with us? Because NOW I don't want to make it official so , and one more think I arrange bail for Mr. aditya so we have to rush to police station ,because I have doubt someone try to kill him so

Maan eyes widened in shock and he ask what are you saying dev

Dev - maan this our beyond thoughts, an ugliest truth which you have to prepare yourself for this ,with this both move to police station ,dev don't disclosed his identity there he give bail paper to officer but he start to make stupid excuse like , we have to scan this , my upper officer is not present in police station I need his signature etc.

Now dev really get fed up with his talk ,and without his permission he march in senior police officer cabin ,and before that officer could ask any question ,that officer get tight slap from Dev ,its so hard ,that blood oozed out from that officer lips.

Dev -I think , You don't like to say all na that I come in and slap u like this ,so chalo lets make a deal between us. I know that u have affair with your Sali , and if this secret reach to your wife's ear, than I am 100% sure your wife will take such action that you might not able to Man hmm... dev give evil smirk to him ...

Officer - who lost his face color say ...i will release Mr.aditya

Dev - that's good ,and one more thing ,if this news went out from station u will face more...u know na what .u know media and all they love gossip specially gossip of officer

Office clutch his finger but he is helpless ,he just nodded in yes

After some time aditiya is front of hospital room of chutaki ,he feel like he lost strength from leg ,he cannot move a step ahead ,it's so hard for him. Maan put hand on adi's shoulder and say softly she need you Mr.aditiya , he nodded in yes and take small step into chutaki's room.

Chutki look at adi and run to him and cried in his hug BABA kaha gaye the app ,muje chod ke main katti hu apse ...kabhi baat nahi karungi ,us din maine apki baat nahi suni and dekho muje bhagwanji ne kaise punish kar diya gandha bana diya (Baba where you went leaving me alone, I am angry with you, I will never talk with you, that day I didn't listen to you, see the God had given me punishemetn for not listening to your words, and made me dirty)

Chutaki each and every word cutting adi ,mind ,heart as well soul also

Chutaki -ask baba what they done to me. Muje ab her uncle se Dar lagata,pata hai wo geet didi ke wo hai na ,wo bahot ache hai sab bolte hai ,but main ,muje unse bhi dar lagata hai baba ,main har din ache se nahati (Bath) hu phir bhi aisa lagata hai abhot sara maiale(dirt )jama hua hai mere upper ,baba ye jata ku nahi hai ...ha baba ,app bade ho mere baba ho storng ho please bhagwanji se bolona muje pehale jaise bana do ,pehali wali chutaki ,dekho baba ,ye khoon bhi nahi rukata (baba ask them, what they done to me. I feel scared of every uncle. You know that Geet didi and her husband. They say he is very good, but I feel scared of him also. I feel so much dirt on my body though I always take bath every day, why doesn't it goes away from my body. Ha baba, say na, you are older than me, stronger than me, please tell God that please make me like before, the chutaki I was, see baa, this bleeding doesn't stop)she showed her dress which start to get strain with the blood

Adi get silent with all this, he couldn't think anything rationally. When Chutaki saw her father lost ,not saying anything

Chutaki ask with cry tone ,did you also start hating me ,because I become dirty

And that word bring the adi to the reality ,he hug chutaki tightly, cried nahi tum dirty nahi ho u r my best daughter ,bahot pyyari ,sabse achi ,sabse storng (no you are not dirty, you are my best daughter, most adorable and strongest daughter)

Outside of room ,dev maan and geet is standing very closed to maan ...become so silent with questions of chutaki ,geet who scared to dev presence now forget her own fear and lost in chutaki questions did she have any answer of chutaki question's in this she clutch her own wound so tightly that start to bleed and maan found something sticky so he look to geet and get shocked to see her bleeding hand ,he called out geet and took her to their room ,he try to call doc but geet stop him

She don't want anyone near her ,not doc also ,yes her hand is bleeding but not that much

Maan - say softly please geet , she nodded

Maan - can I change it ? he ask politely

Geet get shock ,because this upper side of arm ,near her shoulder ,for that she have to remove her top...and it's on right arm so she cannot even change her own also

Precap

Ok let me think

note sorry wo pm main galat link gaya hai of New story dosti so
Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


😊 Awesome updates

😃 read last 3 parts ..
very saddy... feeling bad for chitki nd Adi..poor souls
but who is behind all this ,, nd how d tea wander knew about that ?
it was he who handed d paper regarding Adi ,, why Dev was hiding his identity ?
it become a mystery ... 😊
waiting ..




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i cried by reading this update so emotional
who are they want to kill adi and chutki words are bringing tears from m eyes but want to know who are the people who made chutki like that
waiting for next paart
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Posted: 10 years ago
painful updates... feeling sad for chutki, adi and geet... all are suffering because of someone bad actions... who is dev... maan broke down in dev arms... dev got adi released and the scene between chutki and adi is really heart wrenching...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very painful update. Dev is here to help Maan. He bailed out Adi from lock up. Is Dev some police officer or govt. authority.
Edited by kabslocks - 10 years ago

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