MG ff Bleeding Heart pain of love note on 69 -14 jan - Page 35

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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional painful update dear, hope real culprit punished hard chutki and her dad got justice and geet also
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan want to punish culprit but
wen he beat that man told he is
father of that girl and he asked
about the girl which angered maan
but he said he only want to file case
against criminal and they put blame
on him maan was restless seeing truths
in his eyes and tea boy gave chit and main
time call from hospital remained him about
geet he ran to her she is so much insecure
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant Update

Its sad when innocent people are always the victims now the little girl's father has also been falsely arrested and Maan is a bit confused on the situation fortunately the boy selling water gives him a note telling him that the girl's father is innocent

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Posted: 10 years ago
HearT wrenching part
Someones blame on chutkis father
Will maan help him
Geet crying like a child missing maan

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Posted: 10 years ago
that's so sad to hear she will never be able to bear children in future & then society will blame her for it! This things are very disturbing to me.😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
I wonder who the real culprit is. Her dad is professing his innocence and the tea boy gave Maan a note stating the same. Interesting part but also very disturbing. Poor chutki will never be able to be a mother.
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Posted: 10 years ago
acha logo k sath bura hota hai qqq
chutki father arrested

that b#### move freely

i hate people who bow down infront of powerful people 😡

like they dont have strenght to fight for right


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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update. Feeling bad for chutki😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
hope chutaki get well soon

i like ur concept ..plz continue
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 6
Maan agian and again reading that note n reminding adi word which he feel like something is wrong in all this how a person who looking so innocent become a rapist of his own child how n upon this note ,kya chal raha hai yaha? How I am going to get all answer how ,upon geet in so inscured ,shayed usko bulane ka time aa gaya hai ,maan closed his eyes for while n called someone ...maan ask sure till evening u manage to come here ...than ok I am waiting for u ,n ya don't give your true identity for some days

Just than maan saw geet waking up from her sleep ,she look to maan n give soft smile ,maan always love smile of geet ,not this one jo ek sadness carry karati hai ,geet called softly ,maanji wo doc ne kya bola about chutaki wo wo ,she cannot utter that word .. maan sit near her n say she is fine geet don't u worry ,chalo ab fresh ho javo fhir doc aa jaayenge checkup ke liye geet turn sad with doc name n maan note that he ask with care what happen ,why u become sad

I don't like any one touch me feel wo...she bend her head n tear escape from her eyes maan closed his eyes in pain n agaony , yes that insidnce make so many changes ,n geet now don't want women touch also ,he get how much damage is done ,ek beautiful doll ko jo toot chuki hai ,he have to make her comfortable, he have big task this trauma of geet

Geet maan called her softly ,I know this is tough for u but don't u want to cure early so we go back to our house ha bolo ...she look to maan with teary eyes to maan ,her face turn white with home name ...maan turn so confused with her reaction why she react like this

Main nahi jaaungi wapas ,main nahi jaaungi please muje nahi jana and she start to cried loudly

Maan don't know how stop her she crying in high voice and murmuring I don't want to go back ,muje nahi jana ,muje nahi jana

She just crying ...maan don't know how he going to stop her n why she is so much hayper with house name why so

Hearing her crying voice a nurse run to their room ,n look all crying geet she try to call her mrs khurana ,but geet no wear to stop at last nurse called other stop n they inject her sleeping medicin so she get some sleep

Maan so much shock n froze in his place just than doc entered in room n ask what haapen why she turn like this

Nurse - don't know doc ,they both alone in room

Doc give look to shocked maan and called him in her cabin

Maan fallowed her n went to her cabin

Doc - doc took deep breath and ask ,did u try to touch her in any sense

A tear gather in his eyes , no husband shall get question like this ,he took deep sine ...n say in serious tone

Maan ka geet ke liye pyyar sirf physical nahi hai ,I know in what situation facing by my wife so I know my limit doc ...he say with gazing her eyes

Doc really feel amused with this man yes trually his love is different from other ,uski jgaha koi aur hota to shaayed biwi manganese bhi na bolata

Doc - soory mr khurana ,I have to ask

Maan - mummer its ok u carry on

Doc - what subject u both talking

Than maan narrow all things which happen in room , doc hear all n nodded in yes

Doc - mr khurana I think she fearing of other reaction about this incidence in more than 98 cases girls blaim themselves as impure for husband ,family and society I think mrs khurana also thinking same that's why she react like this

Maan come out from doc cabin n his mobile beeped ...i am standing back side of hospital ,maan mummer lo aa gaya ,ghost ,pata nahi itnai jaldi kaise phoach jata hai ,last birth main 100% bhoot hoga

Maan smile with own thoughts n frist confiremed that geet is not alone ...n went to back side of hospital

Its lonlly place , no one is there ...maan saw , a well build man standing in jeans and t shirt ...

Maan - to rakshes (devil) waqt se pehale phoch gaya

That man without turning to maan say to kya ,jo insane paida (birth ) waqt se pehale hua tha , wo to aisa hi karega na

With that he turn to maan ,n both hug each other so tightly

Man - maan ki muskurahat kaha gai hai ,khurana

Maan - I am ok ,yaar ,why u ask like that

Man - to maan dev se hide karna sikh gaya kya

Maan - dev aisa nahi hai

Dev - main sab pata kar liya hai hospital main maan ...dev put his hand on maan shoulder n maan broke down in dev arm ...pata nahi kitna pain dabaya tha ...sab jaise bahar aa gaya after dev hug

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