SHORT STORY - Page 4

part 3 - so maan came in front of her house while randomly walking ...her father welcome him in ...oops...somebody had already proposed her...so has she forgot him already...?...maan had a competition now...

part 4 - maan left after saying congrats to geet...was he hurt...? But her parents were very happy...so sweet of ronan...how very well he understood why geet said like that..and she was honest to him and told everything about maan..

I really loved the writing. Your style of narrating the story is really beautiful.

So Geet n Maan were teens when they fell in love. Though both were deeply into it, one had to let go, for he wanted to explore the world and live a carefree life with no ties. And now after 9 years of separation he is back to start where he has left off. But is it really that easy? He has hurt her, though there were no promises made, but still hurt he did.

Now when they finally meet after 9 years, she in impluse made a decision right on spot, of marrying Ronan, her friend, just after seeing Maan. So he still does effect her, even after so many years and hurt. Well I'm so curious to know what would Maan do now? Will he now let it go like she did years back? Or will he try to win her over n start from where he had left? But its seems there is a long way for Maan and it should be. He walked out when he wanted, letting him walk in back in her life should be her decision, if only he wants to walk back in to her life, that is.

Also loved Ronan, seems to be a very understanding, mature and nice guy as of now.

Would love to read more of your writing, its simply amazing. Please do continue.

-Sanjana!