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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

yay!

off to read😃

edited..

Thanks for the fast update😃

Amazingly captured under currents

I like that she is inaccessible in his head, for him for now

Definitely adds to the allure and chase

Will he sulk and hide away or will there be a desire to prove himself worthy of her?

After all she is not married yet.

Your story is exciting to read.

Do update soon

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Loved the update Maan leaves hearing the news and there Ronan speaks they are great friends but seeing her parents he understands why Geet believes in love . Geet speaks out truth about her and 'Maan .

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

beautiful update! superbly written! so she lied! n they meet again! Maan congratulates her n leaves! Ronan shocked n confronts her! she rejected his proposal n nw agreed! they talk! he sees her as a friend n doesn't believe in love! he knows she does! she reveals her past n that she fell in love with Maan! she knew he wld leave bt love happens! he understands! she will tell her parents! Ronan is a nice friend! update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awesome update u r a amazing writer the way u described geets feelings its just beautiful so rohan n geet r friend now i like rohan hope now geet will find love after years i want add i like the name of ur story thnx 4 updating eagerly waiting 4 next

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anky_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Very beautiful story and amazingly written...
loved every bit of it...
loved how Maan realized his deep feelings for Geet and how he admitted to himself that he indeed wanted her to be with him...
Geet on the other hand was lost in her love being lost...
she couldn't overcome their togetherness...
now both are in a tight spot...
waiting eagerly for next parts...

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Part 3

beautiful update..loved the changes in their emotions and expressions..

his scrupled hesitation, still wanting to meet her, the disappointment and relief knowing she is not in the house..

Geet's the excitement and happiness fading away seeing him..

A surprise to all and a shocking blast for Maan..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Part 4

the blunder...an impulsive reaction due to Maan's unexpected come back after years..

Rohan is intelligent person and good friend to capture this..

Geet still believes in love though not for her, but since Maan is back, there is some hope to the belief now.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

part 1 - geet had crush on maan and tried to change her appearance for him...he even knew what & how she reads the books..geet was amazed when he told her to dress which are comfortable...eventually they fall in love and advanced in their relationship...and he abruptly left her to pursue his dream of photography & ravel...she felt betrayal and still waited for him every summer...

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

part 2 - he came back after 9 long years after accomplished as a photographer...he came back to his house which his granny kept for him...the place so much reminded him of geet...he felt restless while taking a tour of place..

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