SHORT STORY - Page 6

beautiful writing ! waiting to know what geet would decide...

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

I strongly feel that Geet is going to give a second chance to Maan cos in both updates she did exactly the opposite to whatever she decided n thought. So like in the end she decided to refuse him I feel she is going to end up saying yes.

In both the updates Geet n Maan were contradicting n in conflict. Geet went to Maan's house expecting to get a closure so she could move on in life but instead found herself reviving her friendship with Maan. She was also hurt when he dint shared about his life n over all experience like he used to do before. And mostly importantly she couldnt continue to lie to him about her relationship status.

Maan on the other hand, tried to surpress his feelings n curiosity but found himself asking questions related to her life. Both were very uncomfortable n feeling awkward. The silence btw them also was so awkward.

Geet is still head over heels in love with him n he still has his effects on her. She was in love with the boy Maan n she found herself wanting to understand the new Maan as well just as she was attracted to him in teenage n was curious.

But she is scared. She fears he might break her heart yet again n this time she just might not be able to get over the heart break.

I do want Geet to give Maan a second chance but not so easily. I mean, he just left her like that, mocking their feelings n the relation they shared by saying "it was good time". He walked out when he had wanted despite feeling so strongly for her n now he wants to walk back in just cos he felt restless in the work he was doing. So it was always about just him, his love for his work over his passion n love for her n now again he is back cos he wants her back, his character is selfish. He never thought how much hurt she would have been or how he had broken her heart into pieces n how she just let him go cos there were no promises made n she dint wanted something which wasnt given out of will. She had been selfless n in too much love even then I she is still in love now, she even might trust him for second time n give him the chance he wants. But I really cant trust him so easily. Not when I know that he could stay away from her for 9 freaking long years without caring how tough the initial days of their break up had been for her. How shattered she had been or how she manage herself after finally accepting that he wouldnt come back after waiting for him spring after spring.

My heart goes for Geet. But I love her character. She is a strong girl plus the beautiful thing was she couldnt continue
to lie to him about her and Ronan. I really want her to give Maan a tough time now. In past he got her easily n so dint valued her but when we get something after lot of struggle we keep them close to ourselves like precious treasure.

Loved both the updates. Enjoyed reading them.

-Sanjana!

First of all.. thank you sooo much for a long comment where you actually expressed your views about the character. I was going to end the story soon, more like rushing and eating parts. This comment made me re-evaluate. Thank you! I'll reply in detail to this after I update. The next one's for you :)

Originally posted by: Aura.

First of all.. thank you sooo much for a long comment where you actually expressed your views about the character. I was going to end the story soon, more like rushing and eating parts. This comment made me re-evaluate. Thank you! I'll reply in detail to this after I update. The next one's for you :)

Oh please dont rush your story, I'm enjoying your writing as well the characters. Your smart writing makes me want to read more. So please continue the story you have planned it.

I'm glad my comment dint offend you in any ways cos I have a habit of blabbering a lot. :P

-Sanjana!

Eagerly waiting for next update

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you updated!

superb part geet avoided maan n her friend tried to make her understand but she chosed to confront him she is right she should not run from him but ronan he just came n kissed her on lips n maan got so angry very nice part eagerly waiting 4 next