SHORT STORY - Page 2

very mature writing...loved ur style...
in first part u mentioned the name abigail for geet..is it mistake or what??
now maan is again on fix...and maybe geet too...
she might just started her life trying to forget maan and accepted someone...and bang...now maan is back...

Originally posted by: flowing_river

very mature writing...loved ur style...thank you
in first part u mentioned the name abigail for geet..is it mistake or what?? thank you for pointing it out. I've made the edits. It was an oversight. The characters names in my original story are Abby aka abigail and Daksh. I change the names to Geet and Maan before posting😳
now maan is again on fix...and maybe geet too...
she might just started her life trying to forget maan and accepted someone...and bang...now maan is back...

Beautiful part so they meet oh no someone proposed her hope she doesnt love that person poor maan

Intriguing start and scenario

hey bhagwan !!!!ye kya ho gaya😲
maan babu in for a competetion now😆
ab geet kya karegi...waiting for more😃

interesting... Liked it ...

I love such stories...

read it again

last night it was with one eye open 😆

beautiful writing that made me remember one of my fav writers

A drifter's soul seeking a home

an innocent crush which went away or has it?

lovely penmanship; btw don't like this word; why man? should be woman.. most of my fav writers are women 😃

waiting for more 😃

Avi