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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

awesome ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

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Deleted1

@Deleted1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks da excellent SS! superb emotional end! well written! he returned bt she was to angry! he sneaks in to her room 2 explain n is caught by her dad! he explains wt happened n why he left the first time! he loves her bt his parents marriage influenced his decision! he left this time as his mom met in an accident! he proposes! please post epilogue! will u b continuing your other stories??

THANK YOU

No, I do not have any plans to do so as of now. They were written when I was experimenting with words, just a thoughtless game. Over time, I changed as a person. I am not who I was when I wrote them. Even if I do pick those stories, because my perceptions about things and people has changed, the story will not be the same. I would insist on rewriting it and the TRP of those stories was fun and innocence without any link to reality. It was a fantasy world. And as someone who has fallen in love with the written world, I cannot bring myself to write them. I tried, and I failed. I don't want to start them again and read comments which ask me why I am doing it. Why is it more . . . mature. I am not saying I can or will make it real, but I would infuse real elements in it. People would, justifiably, want the exact same story to read and that is something I cannot deliver. I did restart a story of mine, TL and the way I ended it did not sit well with me yet I couldn't help it. Readers were not receptive to the changes. And while I understand that non reception because this forum, essentially, is about FAN FICTIONS and not stories I could not write them. Separating the show leads from the story lead is not an idea they would consider. My apologies for generalizing.

Edited by Aura. - 10 years ago

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Its a gr8 work I loved every bit of it

The transition n pace was perfect 👏

The gradual transformation of both Geet n Maan was dealt with poise n a certain limitation not going OTT for either albeit I loved to see Maan getting out of control in jealousy at certain times

The love gotten n lost they drifted to meet again ... Maan had a choice earlier bt he chose to escape ... so did Geet bt then they were naive n young n they din know any better !

This Spring however the very idea of losing Geet drilled a fear if not sense in Maan to fight for something he hadn't been done in past !

The twist of reality with witnessing an innocent life being lost like that amid harsh cruelties of life that taught Maan to value what he loves akin to what Geet's mum tell her whilst she was once taking for granted her blessings ~ her n her father !

finally Maan leaves again bt this time for a cause that his mom was sick however the fear still instilled in Geet refused to hear any of it . Persistent Maan reveals abt his lying in hospital n getting shot at the same encounter ! a love proposal n Geet's decision was beautifully penned ...

The ref to While Lillies was touching❤️

I loved ur work

Shd u continue in ur blog lemme know plz

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

read full story today

superb story

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Lovely SS. Enjoyed reading it.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

hi thanks 4 da reply! understand ur perspective! Please continue writing! u r an excellent writer! I will read whatever u write! Thanks 4 a fab story! 😊

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Deleted1

@Deleted1

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Hey Guys,

Thank you for taking out the time to read one of my stories. I will removing it from the forum tomorrow evening :)

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Classic Ending

I really thought Maan again left but this time he had to go as his mum
met with an accident and he did leave a note for Geet .
Maan confessing that he loved her ten years ago but was terrified and now he wants her in his life for always so he ask her to marry and of course Geet loves him too to agrees .

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

i love this sshort story, very beautifully written and quite romantic,when maan left even i think what he is doing but feel peace when he came back,removed mu and they become one again.