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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Awesome update mahi...

maan asked geet that he will drop them..

though geet didnt like it but accepted with maans please..

vicky talking with chutki...

OMG no doc no school😭😭

maan said vicky and karan abt his past..

oh god for asking the truth maan was pusnished such hardly that to in his bachpan..

adi was maans first and lovely friend..😃

maan's dad is very nice person...

ho god adi lost his parents..

yeha bohuth kucth chel raha hai jo kissiko nahi patha yeah shayad patha ho...😭😭

great update..👏👏

continue soon mahi...

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Nice update dear very emotion poor Mann he can't voice out his thought also

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

maan ko pata nehi hai ki geet adi ki behen hai shayad...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

superb emotional updates! well written! Maan suffered so much! Adi is his best friend! update soon

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fmaaneet

@fmaaneet

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

suward?

matlab

ap ase story write kiya jo actual mein hota hai

log itna khudgarz q ban jatey hai

ek tarf city mein water ase waist hota hai koi bath nahi

dosri tarf yeh villager bund bund ka liya tras tey hai

Edited by fmaaneet - 10 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

hi thanks 4 da pm! read n commented already! update soon

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

nice concept... 4km is too much for a girl in 21 century..good that maan help her

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monika

@rashmiverma

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

nice stry but so much emotional

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Congratz on New SS
Story seems very interesting

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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

nice parts mahi

maan is still lost in his mermaid😳

maan was calld by daadaji bt wt happd btw dem in past?😕

in anger maan startd 2 drive nd was abt 2 hit gal bt thank god it didnt happn😃

dat gal tld she hv cm wit her bua 2 take water nd when she came 2 knw dat maan is 4m haveli she was mre angry

when maan saw her bua he was surprisd she was none other dan his mermaid😳

maan nd his frnds were shockd 2 knw dat dey hv 2 cm 4km away 4m their house 2 bring water nd maan dropd dem👍🏼

den maan tld dat d marks which r on his body were gift 4m his daadaji nd coz of him he lost his only frnd adi😭

waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon

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