MG part 3,4 on page 10,11 - 10 jan

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hello me again
with another subject jo muje bahot
disturb kar gaya
and mind shannt hua
hi nahi jab tak ye write kar liya nahi




kuch log souchenge koi achisi love story
deni thi ye mahi bhi na kya write karti rehati hai

but u know mahi ke 70% relative farmer hai
to bahot kuch nazdeek se dekha hai



thoda souch main pad gayi so gunjar ko
pucha she say
agar app ko man kar rahi hai tho likho mahi...
koyi kucth nahi sochega..
aur jo log aiisse sochega na shayad unmai kucth common sense nahi ha..
farmer hai tho kya wo bhi tho insaan hai..
agar wo nahi hai tho humareliye yeh rice aur baki sab khane peene ki saaman kaha se aarahi ha..
kya ek job yeh business karne wala yeh kar saktha hai.
..


so mahi is here big hug dear

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue

kya farmer suicide suicide kuch
aur baat nahi apke pass bolne ke liye
main yaha chutti bitane aay hu ye
rone dhone ki baat sunne nahi samje app
maan say harshly



jab koi humko Admi samjane
ke liye bahi taayer nahi ku aaye ho
app log yaha bhia main bola tha
na kuch faida nahi hoga
ku app In shikhe hue
logo ka time kharab kar rahe ho
geet ask sharply but her eyes glued on maan
Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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part 1


yaar maan hum log kab pounchnge tere village ye india main hi hai na
kya yaar kahi to koi jugal ko belong to nahi karta na maan



maan drag glare to vicky who shut his mouth




karan vicky baba msk ko jaga mat nahi to thisari aankh kul jaayegi like sihv ji samje




vicky nodded in yes


maan - kya tum log dekh rahe ho na sadak kaisi hai , to main kya kar sakata hu
bas ho gaya abhi jada se jada 1 hour we will reach there


maan going to his village after so many year he is in abroad for more than 9 year
now coming back after finishing his study he going to meet them after so many days
he is happy and his tw freind also come with him karan and vikcy for holiday they want to see maan place


but who know this luck what should show us in next moment




maan suddenly stop his jeep with loud sound of brake all took big relif when jeep stop safe near road side




vicky and karan look to maan with qustion mark face mark pull out his googal from his eyes what main kya kiya its pompacher yaar


vicky cried yaar yaha chuch pineke liya tea hi sahi dekh na


maan - vicky muje yaha aaye 9 saal ho gaye hai tu bhi na




just than one man paasing from there they ask him about village distuance and tea and micalnical




he say they get it in 15 min walking distunce and village is have more 1 hour joureny with walk



maan lock jeep and trio start to walk




vicky - maan sachi u have 100 acer land




karan know maan dont like this sub he cut vikcy and within 15 min they reach near tea stall where there r three four coustomer and liietl away one man writing somthing on board


tea shop owner (kya bhavu tumhi pan kon nahi wachnar te ,tachya avagi cricket kiwa film badal lihal astana tar wachal aste ) no one goin to read tha t ha if u right about film or cricket than they will read it




bhavu - (pryatan ter kela phige na hi mahiti pohacvancya )i have to try na that this new shoul reach to people more and more people


now this tairo get curious about news and went near that borad

vicky start to read


over 60 percent of farmers' suicides, are Mahara****, Mp (including Chattisgarh), Andhra Pradesh and Karnat***. If one examines data from 1995 to 2013, these states have probably seen close to 1,50,000 farmers committing suicide due to debts and various other problems related to failure of crops and commercial viability of the farm.



Over 200 farmers committed suicide in April-January period in Mahara*****


The Vida**** region of the state, once considered the epicentre of the farmers' suicide in the country, recorded 942 suicide in 2013, claims the Vidar*** Jan Andolan Samiti , a farmers' advocacy group working in Vidarbha.

and image of











vicky and karan get sad and ask that man is it true that man turn to them he is near 45 well fit man ...i simple dress before he reply anything




maan - yes yes farmer suside sab chijo ke liye sabsidy hoti hai light se lake seed tak fhir bhi ye , money lege farming ke liye karenge kya bhane shadi and all phir no to mudal
Capital di jati hai na sut suside




bahvu


maine to janam liya is mittise
ishi mitti main mar jaunga
kaam mera hai yeh sab ka pet
bharana hai chey uske liye main khud
khali pet so joun to kya hai

sab kehate hai usko ye milta hai
wo milta hai likin kish ko pata hai
ye jo bhi milta hai bas kagaz main
milta duffter ( office) main file ek
ander hi rehata hai


abhi to ye haal hai na khud ji sakta hu
na pariwar ko jinda rakh sakta hu
jab mere bache ko main ek niwala
nahi de sakta
to kya main haq rakhta hu jine ka
maine to janam liya is mittise
ishi mitti main mar jaunga



bhavu stop for while kabhi kabhi gogal utarke bhi dekha na chiye shayyed truth kuch aur hi ho and bhavu went from there with sad smile



all feel wordless for second like ye kya tha same time maan phon start to ring and all come back in reality



maan talk on phone than turn to shop keeper and ask kon tha ye


shopkeepr jane do sahab pagal hai shetkari (farmar ) ke liye lad raha hai dhan mat do app apko kya chiye tea ke sath


maan nodded and trio ask machanic for his jeep and within 15 min jeep come there trio settal in it and went to there destiny which may going to change forever



Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks 4 da pm. Congrats on the new SS! lovely concept! Fab interesting update superbly written
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🥳 Congo for new start dear Mahi...
😊 very good topic ..
well written..😊
waiting for next...
Love it..❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new mg story
Nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank for pm
Nice part
Congrats for new ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yeh lanuage konsi hai
thoda understanding prob hai
well nice concept
mujko acha lagta hai k
jo is tarha k topic bhi likta hai
maaneet par

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely start n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratz 4 d new OS mahi🥳
u hv chose nice concept👏
maan was in abroad 4 studies aft many yrs he is cmng back wit his frnds😃
he nd his frnds saw a person who was talkng abt farmer's misery well our farmers standard of livng is very poor so dey ill go suicide 😭
waitng 4 d nxt part mahi
Edited by mishtypie - 10 years ago

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