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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
congrats on the new story. quite a different concept but its nice to read something different.
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!! again a sensitive & brilliant concept...I think u r the only one in this forum who has brilliant touching social issues as concept in their stories... 👏...great start...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
nice concept mommy

always u come with unique topic
really i was shocked to know how many farmers are suicide
mostly i don't newspaper...so don't no much abt it
the people who give us food re in this condition...
really feel sad for them...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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most sensitve n brilliant concept momy dear u rock
i love you
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interesting
truth is a bitter capsule no one likes
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Posted: 10 years ago
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no wonder but this is sad reality of our country. more than 50% of country population is engaged in agriculture & but there contribution in our country's GDP is around 20%( or less aprrox). Government needs to make improvement in our agriculture area first rather than improving in urban area working sector.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulation for this new SS. Lovely concept. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very sensitive n serious subject. .waiting to see what happens next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2

After some time maan with his friend start journey to his village thou Bhavu word start to come again and again in his mind but he ignore it Vicky and karan start to look here and there there no green place for eyes side till end where gaze is going only empty field like someone snatch greenery from place all tree are burn with hit of sun ...

Half hour later there jeep entered in big gate which showing Khurana Farm ...and pitcher change like film all area with so much greenery , all tree crop r so well yahA TO SUKHA kahi dikh bhi bahi raha tha Vicky so much wanted to know how but karan stop him both get silence

Than they saw big mention old construction but example of beautiful architecture in front of them Vicky mouth open in o shap he bend near karan and ask ye Msk yaha ka prince to nahi hai na ...karan mummer shut up chalti fhirti question bank poor Vicky make face

Here r so many people gather for welcome of maan and his friend

Maan feel irritated just than they all stop with seriouse tone of someone all look to that man late 60 in white dress ,wahi ruko arati utarni hai app logo ki maan want stop but his eyes met with one women eyes who looking him with so much love maan mummer ajji (dadi) and bend to take blessing from her she make aarthi of them and three entered in mention its so huge and beautiful

Ajji (dadi) maan beta app in dono ko apke bagal wale room main lake jao humane ramu mama se bolke ready karwa liya hai tab tak hum apka nasta (brakefast ) apke room main bhijwa dete hai

Maan nodded in yes and went with karan and vikcy he look once to that old man and went from there karan and vikcy get confused with this formal welcome they expecting family drama cry and all but this so much silence

Maan show there room and went to his room karna and Vicky entered in room another beautiful room fhir bhi kuch adhooora lag raha tha

Vicky yaar karan ye maaon us old main ko namste bhi nahi kiya

Karan - hu muje bhi kuch ajeeb laga and u look na outside of this property so much sukha ek ped nahi dikh raha tha dur tak and look hear koi nomonishan hi nahi hai suke ka , in same place how is possible yaar

Wo admi sab sach bol raha tha kya ask vikcy just than some one knock on door and vikcy open door ,one servent is bending head mummer ap logo ko maan shaab ne unke kamre main bulaya hai

Vicky mummer yes we will in few min

That servant went from there without looking to them

Vicky shake his shoulder like kya hai

Both went to maan room maan waiting for them he look lost ...

Vicky say so what is next plan maan

Hu finish Bf that we will went to swim pool

That is perfect plan maan ok lets go maan slap vikcy playfully and say finish bf first vicky mummer don't maan mere baal kaharab ho jate hai

But maan again slap him and Vicky msk now u goan main alert kiya tha and they start to run in room like kid

Karan took his dish and start to eat his bf both stop when they get tiread and finish bf and went with maan

Maan took them to back side of house its so beautiful area ful of greenery at last Vicky ask maan how mann your property have so much greenery and

Maan face change with Vicky question he say kuch nahi we have water plant we rain water and use that whole year

Maan show them there own swimming pool it is surrounded by tree it look like small river part so many mango tree r there with lots of mango

Vivky and karan just jump in pool along with maan on there in swim suit

Bare from upper side that water making them relax so big travel they enjoy it maan went to other part of pool it is S shape so he get hide from Vicky karan view so much silence and greenery make happy maan

In few min something fall in swimming pool with sound thud maan look to sound after few second on girl na beautiful girl apeer from water maan so lost in her her wet look big eyes rosy lips she mummering smoothing and when her lips moving maan so much want to touch her rose petal maan mummer mermaid and that girl gasp loudly till than she thinkinh she is alone hear but a man chi chi a nagu man so closed to her she open her mouth to shout

But maan get her action and closed her mouth with his plam he know if any one heard her voice she will get in big trouble

He say "chilana mat sab aa gaye to tum hi takleef hogi' with maan touch her eyes winded like boll so beautiful eyes ,she tr to say something but maan in lost in her so not having any other way she bite on maan plam poor boy hissed in pain and come out from la la land

And before he say anything she run away from back side of pool she just cross that wall so eaily maan think for while is she real or his imagination but his plam pain give proofed that she is real maan mummer mermaid and went near Vicky and karan

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Awesome update mahi..
oh poora village shukhe pedon se bhare huve hai
lekin maan ki ghar ki pass poora greenary
yeh kaise huva..
mai bhi vicky ki tara poora confused hu😕
aur maan ki dadaji aisse kyu kar raha hai
maan unse theek se baath ku nahi ki
aur ajji bhi kitni formally baath kar rahi ha...
akhir inn sab ki peeche ki raaz kya hai😕
and then vicky and maan ki chase😆😆
wowww girl in swimmingpool
yeh ye kahu ki maan ki mermaid😳😆😉
abb dekhna yeh hai ki akhir yeh mermaid hai kaun...
great update mahi...👏👏
continue soon...

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