ON THE DANCE FLOOR#2 UPDATED LAST PART,EPI@81 ON 13/2/15

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#451

just loved ut finally maaneet get married and ayan got his father lovelly update

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Another amazing story came to an end!!!!
But loved n enjoyed ever bit of it.
From maan-ayan fights to maaneet love..everything was fabulous!!
you rock swetaa<3
loved d last part n a perfect epilogue😃
finally geet confessed after a mindblowing kiss ...
Loved naina too
epilogue was really amazing!!
ppl demanded maaneet come back😃...wow!! dreamy😳😃
i love u for getting gurti married in this SS ...
so sweet of u

Edited by CookieMonster. - 10 years ago

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#453

Mein upset nahi bas sad hun ki dis one ended no complaints

Btw im seriously in some other zone nw

Will surely read again n comment later

U knw hw much i love dis

Knw wat abhi bhi mere dimag mein ek tha raja ek thi rani wali DD ghoom rahi hai

Just aft watching promo i read dis

N im dat DD imagining in d place of geet here n kissing maan

Wahi picture ankhon k saamne aa rahi hai

Ek taraf se im feeling choked up coz dis ended n other side im laughing ki dis geet with do choti kissing maan

I knw im a total gone case🤣

Will get back to dis soon

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#454

awesome story luved dis story n u r an amazing writer 😊

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@_CrystalFlames_

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#455

Awesome di...
Just loved it...
A jealous geet turned into a kissing lover...
😉
And Maneet's passionate kiss is a treat for us...
😊
I love the bonding of maan & ayaan...
Will miss this story for sure...
❤️

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#456

A Beautiful Journey Indeed

I loved Geet's jealousy and because of that it gave her the ultimate
courage to kiss Maan and at that moment he knew his Geet , his life
his love has come back to him .
I guess there is no true love without hurdles which actually strengthens the love .
Maan and Ayan having a beautiful bond no doubt Maan been the best daddy a little boy craves for and loves .
Maan making Geet complete her studies which was absolutely adored by me with great respect for MSK .

Thank you for this feisty and adorable yet soulful story

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#457

wow kya dramatic ending diya tune. aur different propose bhi karwayi maan se. really its so beautiful. finally geet found a true friend , love and father in maan . sach mein agar naina nahi hothi tho shayad yeh dono kabhi ek nahi hopathe. everything well settled in geet's life. withthe help of maan.

beautiful story came to an end. thank u swetaa for this wonderful story