From my heart...!!WRITER'S SPECIAL part4 updated@27on 15/12 Pm's later - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely part rushmita dear...sweta nice idea for this story towrite by different writers...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nycm nyc ... I luv this os ... is geet d gal dadi tlkng?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SWETA MUJE TERA YEH CONCEPT PASAND AAYA...ND RUSMITA...I HAD READ HER FF FORCED MAARIAGE..ND LOVE HER WRITIN...

SO GEET STILL IN LALA LAND OF HER STRANGER..MAAN TO MISSING HER..BT BUSY WIT BUSINEESS TRIP...
SO DEY ON SEARCH FOR A DULHA..ND HER
DADI TRYIN TO TRAP MAAN FOR MARRAIGE...

AWESOME PART

WAITIN FOR NEXT PART..SWETA..CONT SOON..LL BE WAITIN..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Thanks for the PM & nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
lovely update lovely story loved it maan helping geet she want 2 meet him their family want 2 marry them awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello guys here is the next update of FROM MY HEART

this part is written by my sweet sister SIMRAN(Preeti_Maaneet)

enjoy the update

PART - 3



Its been a week since Geet and that stranger meeting and today Geet was again sitting on same bench of that park where she has met that stranger in a hope to see her stranger who has been occupying her brain and heart all the time . It seems like today babaji heard her talks as Geet saw her stranger entering park wearing black shirt with top three buttons open giving view of his hard rock chest and blue denims with a smile lingering on his M-shaped lips . That stranger was also happy to meet her . Finally he got hold of her otherwise its so difficult to come daily in park bcoz of his meetings..


" Thank u so much babaji !! finally u send him here..u know what I love u lot..though u have been late in sending him but chalega aur haa the first thing that I am gonna do is to apologise him for that kiss " sweetly said Geet looking upwards with folded hands while the stranger who was coming near her shake his head knowing very well about her habit of talking with babaji . How can he forget this ?? The first time he saw her was in this position only talking with her babaji and sharing her problems with him..


" hii " greeted her stranger standing in front of her with his hands in his pockets..


" hii stranger " replied Geet and stood up from bench..


" plz take ur sit " said her stranger sitting on edge of bench..


" u are saying as if we are in a coffee shop and u will gonna order cold coffee for me " immediately spoke Geet without thinking much and when realisation stuck to her she closed her eyes and covered her mouth with her hands and sat down quietly while her stranger smiled at her..


" jhalli Geet kya jarurat thi itna bolne ki..abhi ek galti ki toh maafi mangi nahi and aur dusri kar bhi di..mumma sahi kehti hai tu bahut bolti hai " murmured Geet to herself looking at her stranger with narrowed eyes..


" hmm..sorry !! sorry !!..actually wo galti se muh nikal gaya ab aapko toh pata hi hoga ki people act like this take ur sit and all that only in coffee shops or restraunts so plz don't mind haa " said Geet making a baby face..


" no problem dear " her stranger accepted her apology..


" and sorry for kiss that I gave u in our first meeting " apologised Geet making a puppy face..


" well I didn't mind that " her stranger replied with a wink and Geet jaws dropped and her cheeks attained red colour..


" waise..why are u saying sorry for that ?? " asked stranger..


" wo isliye..so that u don't think bad about me that I am a waise type of girl who throw herself on boys " replied Geet clarifying herself..


" ohh..don't worry for that..I knew that the kiss was just a result of ur excitement " told her stranger and Geet took a sigh of relief..


" thank god !! aapne mujhe samjha warna mein toh itni tention mein thi..uff babaji " said Geet and her stranger smiled at her innocence . She is so cute . He just wants to sqeeze her red cheeks to his full satisfaction..


" so tell me..did ur darji and dadiji liked ur singing or not ?? " asked her stranger..


" ohh !! they loved it and darji-dadiji was so happy with my singing and ur song also " replied Geet happily and gave credit to him also for his help..


" thats really good " said her stranger looking directly in her eyes which held Geet captive for sometime . Both were so much lost in staring each other that they lost time but her stranger's phone broke their moment and both averted their gaze from each other . Her stranger put phone on his ears..

" hello "

" haa dadi..bas half an hour more and then I will be home "

" hmm "

" le aaunga "

" okk..bye "


" aapki dadi thi " asked Geet after her stranger put his phone in his pockets..


" hmm " hummed stranger in response while looking towards her..


" aapke ghar mein kaun-kaun hai " Geet stared her questions while her stranger rolled his eyes..


" bas mein , dadi aur meri sis Annie " her stranger answered..


" ohh..aapke mummy papa nahi hai..aapko kitna lonely feel hota hoga without ur parents " sadly spoke Geet..


" lonely feel hota hai but dadi hai na..unhone kabhi parents ki kami mehsoos nahi hone di..unhone humesha se hi hume bahur pyaar diya hai aur jaha jaha parents ki jarurat padti thi waha humesha dadi pehle se hoti thi " told her stranger with watery eyes . He can never forget all the sacrifices that his dadi has done for him and his sister..


" kitni sweet dadi hai na bilkul meri dadi ki tarah " praised Geet..


" hmm hai toh wo bahut sweet " smilingly said her stranger..


" chalo now I have to go..my dadi is waiting for me " told her stranger stooding up from his place..


" hmm bye " Geet bid bye to him and her stranger walked out of park giving her last glance..


" ohh shit mein toh aaj bhi unka naam puchna bhul gayi " Geet tapped her right hand on her hand making a baby face and she too walked out of park..


To be continued..





For all those who dont knw..who this writer is...

here is the link of her stories

Preeti-_Maaneet Link 's of stories

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4098105/my-maaneet-fiction-world-all-links-updated


Please leave ur comment...guys!!



And lastly m gona update ON THE DANCE FLOOR next so...be active on that thread!!!


love

sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago
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dusri mulaqaat bhi hogayi hai. sach mein geet kitni innocent hai. ek step agay bade indono ke beech. telling about his parents and family.😳par kya faida last mein yeh dono apne apne naam tak nahi jaan paaye
nice update preeti😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Woahhh wowww superb actually mindblowing concept
Nw coz of dis concept v r getting diff flavours in a same story
Amazing idea and d start is just wowww n so sweeet n cutee
Loved it a lot hw i wish i cud get to c all dis in real
Part 1: Actually reminded me a bit of jab tak hai jaan only a bit hai but dis one was best than d movie cuteness n chirpiness of geet awww i'm in love with her sooo lovely maan thank god hez still d business tycoon nothing is similar like d movie
My one of d fav song btw
Awww dat kiss loved dis relationahip b/w strangers
Part 2: Again a mindblowing part by a another superb writer
Loved d relationship of geet with her family so much of love n warmth
Her sis is woww perfect sister
Finally geet realised abt dat kiss lollz so soon
Hmmm marriage talks intresting
Stranger stranger ki shaadi
Geet dying to meet him
Babaji ne finally sunn li
Part 3:wowww lovely convo b/w maaneet
Ufff phir se naam puchna bhool gaye
Wud like to c geet singing d song again infront of maan
Hahaha dey hav no prob abt talking abt d kiss
Superb
Kudos to all d writers
Doing a grt job
Excited to read further
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
nice .. Liked it ...
Thanks for the update
...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Lovely update
both r soo cute

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