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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: anu5
SS- ON THE DANCE FLOOR
Interesting and cute story dear !
Loved it!! Crisp and clean writing
Loved Geet and Ayan's Beautiful relationship. I really adored that way Maan and Ayan's relationship took turn over with time filled with love and warmth for each other. U have Beautifully penned the transition phase between Maan and Ayan's camaraderie from their dislike phase to love phase. Loved Naina's characterization to the core and her friendship with Maan. Geet in her turmoil hurt Maan and mistook Ayan's state of mind but glad that Naina intervened the situation and sorted Geet's misunderstanding and muddled up thoughts. Finally Maaneet's true love found it's destiny till eternity with Ayan in their life.
Two things u never have to chase: True friendship and true love !!
:))

Thank u sooo much for you lovely comments on each of the story..

I really appreciate this dear, a big hug to you sweety for doing this and yes for reading my works... It really means a lot