~CRAZY_SWETA aka CRAZY'S WORLD ~ my photo gallery@16 - Page 14

Awesome writings and beautiful creations.

Thanks for sharing ur stories.

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Nice OS dear !

Ably written

Totally loved the concept !!

Geet was victim of domestic violence and was enduring all the tortures and pain inflicted on her. She happened to bump on Maan and pretended to be a mere acquaintance and her gestures hurt Maan. Geet was victimized by her husband and tolerated her husband's harassment. Maan freed her from being victimized and encouraged Geet to stand up thyself to fight her battle on maan's insistence. Her parents on the name of reputation and respect asked Geet to endure her husband's persecution and held Geet responsible for the happenings instead of supporting their daughter to fight against domestic violence.She won her battle to lead a life filled with respect and warmth. Geet has been orbiting a dark star for too long caught in arjun's deadly gravity now that she is finally free setting out a new trajectory heading for a place where her shine won't be stolen and maan was doing his best to be her heaven !!

Maaneet got married and geet's scars were replaced by maan's love and warmth . Finally Geet was leading a to blissful life with Maan.

Fab writing with lovely message !! To stand up for thyself and to raise ur voice against wrong and to believe in thyself

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Lovely OS dear !

Loved the concept. Cute and adorable storyline.

Maan was green in envy witnessing Geet's concern and love for Ayan. Ayan being lovely & mischievous kid demanded Geet's special treatment for him. On other hand Maan wanted to grab Geet's love and attention only for him and was jealous of Ayan. Geet realised that she had being ignoring Maan and hurt him. Loved Maaneet understanding . He just left Geet so, that she can spend time with Ayan. Loved the way Maan never let Geet feel sorry for her demeanor and showered her with his affection and love.

Sweet and cute lovestory !! U have protrayed their love in cute way dear.

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Nice OS dear !

Liked it!! Well written.

Maan had his share of colorful life and was enjoying his life. On other hand Geet was beauty with brains excelled with flying colors in business world giving tough competition to khurana s.

Maaneet got married to each other with time and had their own motives. Maan who lusted Geet fell in love with her and confessed his feelings to her. He was willing to wait for geet's reciprocation till eternity.on other hand geet married him to get access to KC but alas witnessing Maan's love gestures for her made her fall hard for him. Out of jealousy Geet confessed her love for him witnessing Maan in other women's arms. Though she was upset with Maan, she trusted dev's words and Maan's true love for her. Geet was overwhelmed witnessing Maan love for her and despite of knowing her motives he loved her selflessly. Maaneet were blessed with baby as their token of love. Their lust turned into true love for each other. Loved Maaneet transition phase from lust to love.

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Lovely OS dear !

Loved it!! Beautifully penned.

Loved the way u have penned Maaneet love story in the form of diary entries.

Geet happened to read Maan's diary after years of their togetherness. Maan has penned his inner feelings for Geet and their journey in a diary. On their first meet Maan named her as his angel but Geet misunderstood him as a flirt and accused him. On knowing truth she apologized for her demeanor and extended her hands for friendship. She stood up for Maan against her friends as they valued their status more than person. With time Geet confessed her feelings for Maan and was ready to let her love go away from her as she thought Maan loves someone else. Maan confessed his feelings for her which he has suppressed within his hearts as he thought Geet deserves best as he was dumb. Maaneet were living a blissful life but the demise of there baby brought thick times in their life and filled negativity in geet's mind. Maan's love and warmth brought her out of darkness and they adopted a baby girl and was proud grandparents of a baby girl. Loved Maaneet selfless love for each other.

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Cute OS dear!

Loved it!! Simple and sweet writing.

Maaneet are part of the band. Maan confessed his feelings and proposed Geet Infront of the crowd making their go awestruck with his lovely gesture. Geet reciprocated his feelings and felt happy to be loved by her love. She feared his rejection bit thanks to their friends. Geet was upset that Maan will leave the house , the place where lived together for years and she would stay alone. Maan cleared her misunderstanding. Geet felt overhelmed with his love and warmth for her.

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Cute and sweet story dear

Loved it !! Crisp writing.

Geet is mother of a teenage girl. Her baby girl with her girls gang were interested in knowing stuffs regarding kiss and were fascinated to read about the kiss from the book. Geet was astound with girls curiosity and decided to tell her own first kiss story without revealing that it was her's and Maan's story. Sasha being foe of Mishty and her gang challenged Geet to kiss a boy who enters canteen first and Mishty in her feisty demeanor accepted sasha's challenge. Mishty kissed MK to win her bet. Mk and Mishty as their backstory too. Being timid and shy MK never conversed well with Mishty and with time their priorities took over but their families remained close as ever and shared beautiful camaraderie. Mishty started to feel for MK but couldn't acknowledge her feelings. To confront him she lied that she fell in love with him and loves him from childhood. Mishty's feelings started to develop making her feel contented and warmth. Loved MK and Mishty's cute date. With time she realised that MK fell in love with her when she overheard his and his friend's convo. She despised thyself for hurting MK as he hates people who lie. She dreaded that MK would hate her after knowing that she lied to him but on confrontation Mishty was pleasantly surprised hearing MK's prespective and his story of their love. The girls gang who listened to Geet's narration was awestruck with Mishty and MK's lovestory. Geet narrated her and Maan's story to the gang by replacing their original names with their affectionate name.

Loved the way u have included ur IF friends in the story as a token of ur friendship and love.

Beautiful story dear !

Loved it!! Articulate writing .

Rohan amid his chaotic life and divorce fiasco bumped on Maan. He shares his problems with Maan and states that true love doesn't exist but, Maan resents his thoughts and shares a story with Rohan about Geetika and MK. Geetika and MK were opposite poles and had was living contrast life. Geetika was nerd with simple style statement and Mk was the heart throb of the college. Accidentally in his drunken state he kissed Geetika. He was feeling guilty for his act and wanted to apologize to her after knowing about the problems she faces from their fellow college mates vowing to her simplicity .

With days MK and Geetika turned friends and with time they feel for each other. Loved their ball room dance sequence. Geetika changed thyself to suit herself in MK's world which MK did not like and thought to breakup with her to see his old Geetika back and focused in her life. Glad that Geetika and MK reconciled yet again as they love each other truly. Rohan who was listening to Maan's story was awestruck with the love MK and Geetika shared. He was inspired even more when he got to know the truth that MK was none other than Maan himself and witnessing him happy with his wife Geetika added to Rohan's inspiration more. Rohan understood were he went wrong in his relationship and was ready to mend his relationship with his wife for their better life filled with love and warmth. Loved Maan's narration dear.

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Interesting and cute story dear !

Loved it!! Crisp and clean writing

Loved Geet and Ayan's Beautiful relationship. I really adored that way Maan and Ayan's relationship took turn over with time filled with love and warmth for each other. U have Beautifully penned the transition phase between Maan and Ayan's camaraderie from their dislike phase to love phase. Loved Naina's characterization to the core and her friendship with Maan. Geet in her turmoil hurt Maan and mistook Ayan's state of mind but glad that Naina intervened the situation and sorted Geet's misunderstanding and muddled up thoughts. Finally Maaneet's true love found it's destiny till eternity with Ayan in their life.

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