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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

raasta yaad haina 😆
aaj ganti nahi baaji aapki...


nahi ghanti tho kal dophar ko hi bajega
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

mujhe neend aarahi hai. ab main chaloo kya?


😃 OK ,,
waise ghanti to bjegi nahi aaj ..😆

Good Night dear...
sweet dreams...



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

raasta yaad haina 😆
aaj ganti nahi baaji aapki...


😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
babie update kis page par dene waali ho?
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Updating



Thank you all of u my friends





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 34
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4210147/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-4-updated-pt-36-pg-120-9th-nov?pn=89


Part - 35


Geet touched d stuffs nd then her eyes went at d bottom self ,, there was something dumped roughly ,, she took out that nd her whole shook seeing that ,, flashes come in her mind remembering d incident .
There was d dirty bed cover with her torn suit roughly rolled in that ,, she didn't touch those after that night coz of her disturbed mind ,, after that her mind thought only to leave this place ASAP ,, she was going to open them but pushed them back listening Maan's voice from behind who came there in search of Manu n Geet nd heard Jojo's barking ,, Geet startled nd closed d cupboard back at once .

Maan: Geet ye room pura dirt se bhara hei aur tum manu ko yahan le aai ho ,, dekho ye sab ganda ho gaya neeche baithker .

He picked Manu nd cleaned his hands nd dress with his hanky then took him in his arms .

Maan: kal nakul se clean kara lena ,, kuch lena tha kya yahan se ?

Geet fumbled: no ,, nothing ,, bas esse hi ghoom rahi thi to khol ker dekha ,, yahan ab kuch nahi hei lene ke liye.

Maan: chalo ,, yahan etna dirt hei, firse beemar panda hei kya dono ko ? u have to be careful .

He come out nd Geet closed d door back ,, Maan was talking to Manu nd asking what he had done in d day nd he said that he went to gu lu dwa la with mommy .

Manu: uncle that was vely big nd I ate pal saad ,, yummy .

Maan: OK nd where is mine yummy Prasad ? u didn't bring for me ?

Manu: mommy blought ,, mommy u blought fol uncle ?

Geet didn't listen she was lost somewhere in her thoughts ,, Maan looked at her nd find her lil upset ,, he realised that may be after visitng her old room she is remembering her old days ,, he touched her shoulder.

Maan: Geet , kya soch rahi ho ?

Geet again startled nd looked at him : haan , nahi kuch nahi .

Maan: kuch to ,, u didn't listen what Manu said to u .

Geet: wo mai soch rahi thi ki kal din mei kuch shopping ker lu ,, mujhe kuch indian stuff chahiye ,, eve to packing mei nikal jayega ,, fir early morning flight bhi hei .

Maan : Oh means day after TM ?

Geet: yeah.

Manu: mommy , we al going back ?

Geet: yeah baby ,, mommy has office na nd u ur crche .

Manu: I want to live mole ,, cn we take jojo with us ?

Geet: no baby ,, u cn play when u'll come again .

Manu: I miss him .

Maan's heart became heavy listening all about their departure ,, not only he , all wr going to miss them hell ,, they wr in living hall ,, Yash was sitting with Dadima nd Rashi ,, yash took Manu nd Maan went to his room for change ,, he was feeling very weak parting from manu ,, in these few days both made this KM a lively place nd filled their life with happiness nd smiles ,, definitely KM was going to miss them like hell .

Geet didn't say anything about her going back at dinner time ,, luckily yash got d call from Annie after dinner nd all got busy to talk her for some time nd then geet went ot make manu sleep ,, Maan nd Yash finished some of their office work nd in their respective rooms ,, Geet slept with Manu nd Maan came in their room to check them ,, he came daily after sleeping them ,, he looked at them lovingly nd went back quietly .

Next day Geet did shopping for her nd Manu from d Mall nd came back in afternoon ,, Maan came early with lots of things for Manu specially cars of many types ,, Manu was super happy then they went to eat icecream ,, Maan spent all his time with Manu meanwhile Geet packed her bags ,, only one dress was out for both nd Manu's baby bag .

At dinner Geet about her flight told nd all became sad ,, Geet too felt bad but she had to go ,, she told them that she wd come again nd they cd visit US to meet them ,, She requested Yash nd Rashi to come US , now they had their business there so it's quiet possible for them ,, Yash said that he wd deffo come ,, he was quiet relaxed now having Geet back in his family nd all treated her like a family member ,, they wr deeply attached to manu now ,, all spent time all together nd then went to take some rest ,, Geet called Prem& Heer nd talked to them for few min then set her alarm on phone ,, Maan in his nd lay down to catch some sleep .

Sleep was far away from their eyes ,, all d time they wr turning nd tossing in d bed ,, Geet was looking at manu with teary eyes nd thought that may be this was their last visit in this house ,, after passing time memories faded away nd ppl got busy in their lives ,, she cleared her all debts of this family even monetary too nd leaving from here with a happy note,, she closed her eyes nd prayed to Babaji to bless this family with all happiness .

Her alarm buzzed nd she got up to get ready ,, manu was sleeping peacefully ,, she went to take bath nd changed her dress ,, came out nd find Maan there ,, he was sitting on bed near Manu nd caressing his head lovingly ,, her eyes turned wet .

Geet: aap ready nahi hue ?

Maan looked at them ,, there was pain in his eyes , he got up nd came close to her ,, cupped her face nd pecked her forehead ,, Geet's whole body shivered like a leaf , felt burn in d corners of her eyes nd closed them tightly , gulped hardly ,, she was fighting with her emotions .

Maan: mujhe to etna haq bhi nahi ki kaha saku plzz matt jao ,, lekin ek request hei , plzzz don't close ur door ,, u both brought happiness in this house nd plzzz come again ,, it's ur house Geet , urs nd manu's ,, meri wajah se dad se apna rishta matt todo ,, after meeting manu I understood his love for u ,, i'm very sorry Geet nd thanks a lot for coming here .

Geet was chocked , unable to speak she only nodded her head with a faint smile .


Maan: all packed .

Geet: hum .

Maan: manu ko redy karo , mai bhi hota hun .

He went back ,, Geet changed Manu's dress in his sleep nd went down to prepare his milk nd packed his baby bag ,,Yash , Rashi nd Dadima too came in living room ,, Nakul nd Satish wr also working with hanged faces ,, Maan called nakul nd told him to kept Geet's bags in his car ,, Geet took her hand bags nd Maan took sleeping manu ,, all wr ready to leave ,, yash nd Rashi too wr going to airport ,, Geet met with all nd she touched Dadima's feet at last , she blessed her with wet eyes then she took out a gold chain nd put that in Manu's neck ,, Geet didn't deny nd kept mum ,, all settled in car nd drove off .

At airport Geet showed their ticket nd passports ,, Maan bought d passes for them nd all wr in ,, Geet took her boarding pass nd handed her luggage , now they have to go for security check ,, there was a long queue ,, manu was still sleeping ,, Maan tried to wake him ,, he opened his drowsy eyes nd hugged Maan back from his neck ,, Yash nd Rashi loved them nd kissed them with wet eyes even Maan too hugged Geet having manu in his arms ,, Geet eyes turned wet ,, she wanted to cried out loud but hold her biting her lips .

Maan kissed manu nd handed her,, his heart didn't want to send them away ,, Geet took manu nd went towards queue waving her hands for final goodbye,, she turned many times to look at them nd find them there wiping their wet eyes ,, tears rolled down from her eyes

she wiped them nd entered in d cabin , gave their passports for check .



Precap" Maan got a shock ... ..


Part - 36



sorry for mistakes ...




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆 pata nahi..
aaj res nahi kiya.. socha sab chale jaty hein ,, pahale baat ker lu..



haan aaj acha kaam kiya. issliye aaj sab milkar baat karpaye
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



😲 sab gaye kya..?


ab main jaane waali hoon.




goodnight babie, lakshu, dona and bachi
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Posted: 10 years ago

😆😆sab hein bas ek ke jawab ka intzaar hei..😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
mera bhi good night time

good night glas /.

sweet dreams

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