MG SS: Kya Pyar Karoge Mujhse! Complete! Sequel Link is Up! - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful story. Read the prequels too. Fantastic. Maan and his image. The things he does. Sometimes it's so funny that it make me laugh out loud getting me stares from my family.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it
waiting for next part
contiue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
finally maan this plan worked
loved the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
wah re kya plan tha Maan ka... bonus mai kiss b le li.. maan toh chaloo hai,...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

haay mar jaawa.. Initial mai mai toh darr gayi thi ye kya hogaya.. Present aagaya.. Geet ka kya huwa.. Wo toh bht hurt huwi thi na last update mai end pe.. Bt thank god waps aagaye flashback mai.. Mannat is cute js lyk her mom n dad.. Maan ki trh intelligent nad Geet ki trh baatuni.. Hehehehehe..
Nice style Maan singh khurana maafi maangney ka.. Book likh dou bht hit hogi.. And atlast keh hi diya farq q padta hai.. Bt khud ka nahi kaha farq q padta hai agr Geet naraaz hai..
Regarding precap Jalan na.. Hehehehe update soon

You are second person who has told me to write a book!😆The first one was a reader of ZaYa version!
Thanks for the compliments and thanks for the review!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago


A SPECIAL UPDATE!

Hello folks,

This is not a new update! Amongst your responses to the last update, one of the responses was that a reader of MG Version, nakh5683 asked me to write the drunken scene from Maan's point of view! I thought why not write the whole update from his point of view and write it for all versions so that everyone gets to enjoy! Check out the below update and enjoy!

Maan frowned as he heard Geet pleading to his Daadima about her party while his Daadima staunchly refused. He looked up from his newspaper, but the glare Geet sent his way told him that he better go back to his newspaper and he did just that. Geet continued to plead with Daadima and Maan felt his heart cringe at the helplessness in Geet's voice. Finally, unable to bear the pleas of Geet, Maan opened his mouth before he realised, "Jaane deejiye na Daadima!"

The moment the words were out of his mouth, Maan knew he had done something out of character; the character he showed to the world. And this was proven when Geet gave him an incredulous look while Daadima looked at him in surprise. Maan realised that he had to cover up, or else his image was in danger of being damaged.

Maan backtracked right away and shrugged at his looks, "Jaayegi nahi toh poora mahina mooh latka ke ghar bhar ghoomti rahegi! Aur iski wajah se saare ghar waalon ka bhi mood off hoga aur Dev ke latakta chehra dekhke mera mood bhi kharaab hojaayega! So it is better that she goes! Upar se... yeh jaayegi toh ghar mein thodi der toh shanti hogi! Waise bhi bahut baat karti hai yeh!"

Maan felt a sigh of relief when Daadima's expression of surprise dissolved but then he mentally cringed as he took in Geet's shocked face. He realised that whatever brownie points he might have earned by siding with Geet few minutes back, he had lost them right away with his comments. Hey Babaji! What all things I have to do to save my reputation!

The argument between Daadima and Geet continued with Daadima reminding Geet of the send off party. Maan's heart filled with pain as he remembered what all had happened that night. When Geet got confused at Daadima's reference, Maan felt happiness because this meant Geet had forgotten that night and won't be affected by those memories ever. Very quietly and gently Maan reminded Geet of that night and was even more happy when instead of feeling sad or getting scared, Geet went on to convince Daadima that the situation now was different. Maan felt proud at how far Geet had come from the time when she refused to come out of her room the day after the incident. And that is why Maan decided to help Geet into going to the party. It was not right that the shadow of that night should ruin Geet's birthday!

"Daadima! Aap kisiko iske saath kyun nahi bhejte! She can party aur aapki bhi pareshaani khatam!", Maan was really happy when Geet looked at him in surprise and appreciation and then went back to her original task of convincing Daadima for the party.

Maan looked on as Daadima suggested NT and Dev to accompany Geet and grinned from behind his newspaper as he noticed Geet's happiness on her face. But soon her happiness dissolved when Dev came and told them that due to NT's ill health he would not be able to go and neither could NT! Both Daadima and Geet were disappointed at that.

Geet mumbled sadly, "Phir toh party cancel! Kyunki Daadima, Dev Jeej aur NT Didi toh nahi aa sakte mere saath!" and Maan narrowed his eyes at that. Hey! What about me? I am an option too, you know! He held his breath hoping that either of the ladies would suggest him or ask him but his hopes were all dashed when both continued to mope in sadness! Waah! Kya family paaya hai maine! Jis ladki se pyaar kiya, woh toh mujhe bhool hi gayi, lekin meri apni Daadima ne bhi mujhe as an option consider nahi kiya! Waah!

Before Maan could continue on his rant mentally about how unfair his family was, his brother happily reminded them that there was another person as an option. Maan grinned from behind the newspaper. God bless you Dev! You are simply fantastic! From today onwards, you are my favorite person in this family! Maan readied himself for his token protest. After all, he had an image to protect! And he was sure, that Daadima will wear his protest down in right manner. Right on cue, Dev spoke, "Bro! Woh jaa sakte hain!"

"Kya?", Maan roared right on time. Dev explained his point but Maan continued to refuse. Finally, just as Maan had predicted, Daadima barged in and argued with him till he agreed to take Geet to the party, acting as reluctant as possible, "Ab khade khade mera mooh kya dekh rahi ho? Jaao! Get ready! Chalte hain tumhaare party mein!"

Maan mentally gulped at the glare Geet sent his way.

Maan smiled as he watched Geet dance on the dance floor with her friends. It was just an hour after they had arrived and Geet's friends had dragged her to the dance floor. The dance continued to another hour before the cake was brought out and the girls sang Happy Birthday as Geet cut the cake. Maan remained by the corner as he did not want to interrupt Geet's enjoyment. After all, it was on this same day last month he had unknowingly hurt her and he did not want anything to remind her of that. Infact, he wished she would forgive him sooner than the later as he could not continue with his plans if she remained miffed at him.

Maan blinked as he noticed Geet send a girl towards him with cake piece. Right on cue, Maan rearranged his face from pleasantness to annoyance. He had an angry young man image to maintain, remember! And the girl, scared of him, handed the piece of cake and scampered off in fear. Maan laughed in his mind. Glaring at people is so much fun!

After few minutes, Maan went to restroom and just as he was coming out he heard the conversation between Geet and her friends which left him intrigued.

"Toh kyun na hum sab milke unhein sharaab pila dein?"

"KYA?"

"Haan! Kehte hain ki aadmi sharaab peene ke baad jhoot nahi bolta, sirf sach bolta hai! Toh kyun na Maan Sir ke mocktail mein sharaab daal dein aur phir unse sawaal poochein?"

Maan's eyes widened at their plan. They were going to get him drunk to get some truth out of him. What truth? He was intrigued by the plan and scuttled to take his seat near the bar. As he waited for the girls to come and spike his drink, his thoughts took a different turn.

Maan realised that he could act as if he was drinking but not drinking in reality. Hey Babaji! The things I could do without being out of character! I mean I could act like me and Geet would just think I am drunk! I could be sweet to her, romantic to her and she would still think I am drunk! Even Geet's friends who are also my employees would think the same thing and my image would be safe! Oh Geet! The things I want to do with you! He looked at the dance floor and smirked. I could dance with you Geet! He noticed a couple nearby where the girl was kissing the guy's cheek. I could kiss you on the cheek! Hell! I could even kiss you on the lips! He took a deep breath and grinned. If anyone had seen Maan Singh Khurana right then, they would run into the opposite direction because his grin was practically devilish and his eyes talked of nothing but mischief.

Soon one of the girls came to the bartender and told something to him. Rest of the girls along with Geet came and took a seat a bit closer to observe Maan's reactions. Soon his drinks were spiked and he acted as if he was drinking them but he threw them in a nearby plant when the girls were not looking.

After few drinks, the girls must have determined that Maan was drunk sufficiently, because next thing Maan knew, the girls had sneaked to take a seat by him with Geet sitting closest to him.

"Hello Maan!", Geet spoke to him with such a sexy smile and that Maan had to use all his control from stopping his jaw from dropping and maintaining his cover as a drunk person. He looked at her with narrowed eyes and then he smiled widely, "Geet! Meri sweet sweet Geet! How are you?"

Geet's shocked face told him that his flirting had pulled her out of her comfort zone. How does it feel, Geet, to be out of your zone? This is how I felt when you first started to make room in my heart. At that time, I was so out of my zone that I fought with you without knowing that I was getting attracted to you. Now lets see how my flirting makes you react! Do you feel out of your depth just as I felt when I met you?

Geet recovered quickly and asked him her question, "Maan! Kya aapko sach mein pachtaava ho raha hai ki aapne mera dil dukhaaya?"

Maan was disappointed. Here he was, hoping that Geet would atleast be flustered but Geet seemed to just push his words away and move on. Am I the only one so easily affected by you? Aren't you affected by me at all?

Maan pushed aside his disappointment and wondered how to answer her question. That is when he remembered his idea of dancing with her. He smirked inwardly but outwardly looked at Geet with as much innocence he could muster. Turning his finger into hook, he beckoned her closer. Geet bent forward and Maan whispered, "Why should I tell you? Main tumhein kyun bataaun?"

Maan pouted and Geet blinked in surprise. Maan had hard time holding his laugh. This was so much fun! Acting drunkard was the best game he could play, especially faced with an audience who seemed to have a face which showed every emotion they felt.

Geet took a deep breath and replied to his question, "Kyunki agar aapne jawaab diya toh shaayad main aapko maaf kardun!"

Geet bit her lip and Maan felt his heart beat faster. Oh God! Does she even know what she does to me when she bites her lip? To divert himself, he grinned at her widely, "You know what! Main tumhaare saare sawaalon ka jawaab dunga", Geet and her friends grinned at that, "LEKIN... lekin mujhe kya milega?", Geet and her friends' grin fell flat at that.

Geet was worried Maan could tell. She replied hesitantly, "Maafi?"

Maan shook his head, "That's it? Meri sachchai ki bas itni hi kimmat? Not fair!"

Maan wondered how Geet would reply to his comment but it seemed that his words had shocked Geet into speechlessness and she had no comment for him. Finally taking pity on her he spoke up, "Ek cheez hai jo agar tum mujhe dogi toh main tumhein tumhaare sawaal ka jawaab dunga!"

"Kya?"

"Ek dance!"

"KYA?"

Geet was shocked by his wish and Maan could see that at the way she stood up and how her friends had to pull her down to avoid attention.

Maan smiled at the gobsmacked expression on Geet's face and nodded, "Ek dance karo mere saath and I will give you my answer! Karogi mere saath dance?" Saying this, Maan stood up and grabbed Geet's hand.

Maan held Geet's hand waiting for her answer. But when he realised that she was not ready to dance with him, his patience went away and he dragged her to the dance floor.

The music started just as they reached the dance floor. Maan stopped right in the middle of the floor and turned to look at Geet who looked back at him with shock. Suddenly, Geet turned to walk off the dance floor and Maan grabbed her hand.

Tu

Mera Aasmaan Sa Lage

Kyun

He pulled her towards him and she slammed right into him.

Uda Uda Sa Phirun

In Hawaaon Mein Kyun

They stared into each other's eyes.

Oh... Tu

Mera Raasta Sa Lage

Kyun

Geet's tried to pull her hand away but Maan's grip was stronger.

Juda Juda Sa Phirun

Teri Raahon Mein Kyun

Maan stared at struggling Geet with smile on his face. His eyes tried to take in her every expression as Geet continued to struggle against him.

Sondhi Hai Dhaani Hai

Baarish Ka Paani Hai

Khwaahish Puraani Hai

Tu Hi Tu

He cupped her cheek with other hand making her still at his touch.

Jheeni Hai Bheeni Hai

Chai Mein Cheeni Hai

Pyaale Mein Peeni Hai

Tu Hi Tu

She looked back at her hand and started to struggle as he again stared at her with a tender and loving smile on his face.

Meethi Bhi Lage

Thodi Khaari Lage

Chatkhaari Jara

Par Pyaari Lage

Tu

From her cheek, his hand slipped to her waist as he pulled her close making her look at him in shock.

Mera Aasmaan Sa Lage

Kyun

Uda Uda Sa Phirun

In Hawaaon Mein Kyun

Slowly they started to sway to the music.

"Geet!", Maan muttered as he stared into her eyes, "I like you! Really like you! Do you like me too?"

Before Geet could answer he turned her around and swung her out and in making her slam right into him. Her hair fell on her face and he slowly pushed them, his heart urging him to kiss her. She looked away but he nudged her face making her look back at him.

Tera Iraada Karta Hoon

Din Raat Tujhpe Marta Hoon

Dil Mera Tera Aadha Hai

Simple Sa Vaada Karta Hoon

He started to sway in the place making her sway too. His arms around her waist itched to pull her closer.

Tera Intezaar Hai

Dil Taar Taar Hai

Aaja Keh De Zara

Ke Pyaar Pyaar Pyaar Pyaar Hai...

He kissed her cheek and she took a sharp breath making him realise that he affected her the same way she affected him.

Tu

His hands moved up from her waist to her neck and he felt her shiver.

Mera Aasmaan Sa Lage Kyun

He slowly cupped her cheek with one hand, his urge to kiss building up.

Uda Uda Sa Phirun

In Hawaaon Mein Kyun

He pushed her hair back with other hand.

Oh... Tu

He stepped closer and he noticed her eyes flicker to his lips and back to him.

Mera Raasta Sa Lage Kyun

He bent ahead and saw her close his eyes.

Juda Juda Sa Phirun

Teri Raahon Mein Kyun

Suddenly someone pushed Maan and Geet's eyes opened wide.

Tu

She pushed Maan away as he looked at her in confusion.

Tu

She ran off the dance floor while he continued to stand there.

Tu...

As Geet reached her table, Maan finally realised what he was about to do. He was going to kiss her! As he blinked, he had another realization. Maan would have their first kiss today if not for some idiot who pushed him out of the way. Maan slapped his forehead while cursing his bad luck. He stormed off the dance floor to his car in annoyance and anger. He sat in the driver's seat so that he could calm himself and lessen his annoyance. Maan did not know how long he sat there. He only got out of his car when his anger and annoyance left him. That is when his eyes fell on his car and he remembered that he was supposed to be drunk; which meant he cannot drive tonight. Maan sighed at that. Time to call the driver! As he dialed the driver's number, an errant thought entered his head. If he was drunk, that means he could sit in the back wanting to relax, right? If that meant he got to sit beside Geet, well, it cannot be avoided, right? Maan smiled mischievously. He had to thank Geet's friends in some way. It was their idea of getting him drunk that is giving him chance to get so close to Geet without using any of his usual tricks.

Soon driver arrived and Maan got into the car with drunken swaying establishing his drunk character in front of the driver and then keeping his mobile aside he acted as if he was passed out. Soon, Geet called and the driver thinking that Maan Sir was passed out, picked up the call and soon Geet was sitting beside him. Maan enacted his next phase of plan. Get Geet Handa to forgive him and while he was at it, take his chance and snuggle into her as much as possible!

Maan grasped her hand with his and placed his head on her shoulder. He ignored her startled expression as he tried to get himself comfortable. Geet did not push him off. He should act drunk more in future if that meant he get to snuggle with Geet without getting pushed off by her, Maan mused.

After enjoying few minutes of snuggling, Maan mumbled in a slow voice, "Geet! Geet please mujhe maaf kardo! I miss you! I miss talking to you! Baat na sahi, jhagda toh kar lo! I miss fighting with you!"

Geet replied his request with her own question, "Kya aapko sach mein pachtaava hai mera dil dukhaane ka?"

Maan nodded and looked at her with bleary eyes, "Please Geet! I am genuinely sorry!" Even though Maan was acting his apology and his pleas were genuine. He, Maan Singh Khurana, the guy who never bowed down to anyone, was pleading a girl to forgive him! Oh! How the high and mighty had fallen! Maan thought absentmindedly.

Geet sighed softly and then nodded, "Theek hai! Maine aapko maaf kiya!"

Maan smiled at her and was about to hug her and snuggle closer to her, when the car stopped. He looked around; they were home. Maan felt like throttling someone. Why did they have to reach home so soon? Next time, I will make sure that wherever we go would be so far from home that I get a lot of my snuggle time, Maan promised himself as Geet got down. He continued to act drunk and stumbled, making Geet hold him and help him into the house. Geet willingly taking his arms? Wow! This is a dream come true! Maan mused. I really should act drunk again; atleast once!

They reached the stairs and Maan and Geet had to separate to get to their room. Maan did not want to go! Not so soon! No! Maan could not stop himself from grasping Geet's hand, pulling her closer and then placing a kiss on her forehead. Knowing that if he did not walk away now, he won't be able to control his actions, he turned around and stormed off to his room. Thankfully, Geet was too lost in her thoughts to notice Maan walking normally instead of stumbling around like a drunkard!

SONG DETAILS:

Song is from the movie Ajab Gazabb Love (Year 2012) sung by Mohit Chauhan.

PRECAP:

Next update, Maan definitely goes shirtless!

Thanks for reading, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. Reviews will be replied very slowly (as in snail like slow) and PMs for update will be sent on Sunday!

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Posted: 10 years ago
damn man
she didnt see
well was too dazed to see that maan wasnt walking like a drunkard to his room
he did kiss her on the forehead
he never did that before
so thats two kisses in one day
okay not on the lips
but not totally waste
being drunk sure worked in his favour
am glad geet had forgotten about that incident which happened
but then geet doesnt dwell on such things for too long
so she was bound to get over it
not only did she get over it
she blanked it out
which means that moment didnt disturb her too much
of course how can maan forget that
someone dirt bag tried to get cosy and force himself on his geet
seeing how he loves her even then well he cannot forget it can he
nope anything to do with geet he will always remember
and am glad
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
so this whole update was thru maan's Pov. Nice...

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