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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! superbly written! Geet telling Mannat wt happened! Maan overhears n cribs! Maan hurt her n had 2 manofy her! Bt he is MSK! Maan blames her! Maan eventually gets her 2 forgive him! update soon
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WOW!! awesome update...loved it dear...😃
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nyyyc update!
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awesommme one...hayeee...geet acting like that...sahi hai...but he has got such huuuge ego...
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Nice part...thanks for the PM
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hahahahahhaahaha lovely awesome update seriously ek sorry kehne ke liye 3 hafte laga diye god waiting for next part maan ka drunk honewala plan? 🤔
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Good question by Maan.
Why it affects her ?


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PART 7. PLAN No. 6. BEVDE WAALA PLAN!

Continued from last update

"... Aur is tarah teen hafte tumhaare papa mujhse aise aise tareeqe se maafi maange ki poocho mat!", Geet chattered on as her sleepy audience struggled to stay awake, "Par sab time inka plan fail! Phir aaya mera birthday! Asli waala! Aur phir jo hua... Hey Babaji!"

"Party? Woh bhi akele?", Daadima asked aghast, "No! Nahi! Hum iski ijaazat nahi denge!"

Daadima looked away as Geet looked at her pleadingly.

It was the day of Geet's real birthday and just an hour ago she had gotten a phone call from her friends who wanted to take her clubbing as a celebration for her birthday. For last few days, the plan was to call all of Geet's friends and have a party at home but when the idea came from her friends in the noon Geet could not say no. And now for the last hour Geet was trying her best to convince Daadima to let her go to the party.

"Par kyun? Kyun Daadima? Main kyun nahi jaa sakti?", Geet asked as she pouted.

Maan looked up from the newspaper he was reading and Geet gave him a glare, still miffed at him for giving a botched apology to her. Maan quickly went back to his newspaper. He was sitting on the one sofa while Daadima sat on the other and Geet stood in front of Daadima but far enough that she was able to look at Maan from her peripheral vision.

"Humne keh diya na? Toh bas! Keh diya! You are not going!", Daadima glared at Geet for the first time in Geet's life.

"Jaane dijiye na Daadima!", Maan piped up making Daadima look at him in surprise and Geet look at him incredulously.

Yeh khadus meri madat kar rahe hain? Yeh kaise ho gaya?, Geet wondered.

Maan shrugged at their looks, "Jaayegi nahi toh poora mahina mooh latka ke ghar bhar ghoomti rahegi! Aur iski wajah se saare ghar waalon ka bhi mood off hoga aur Dev ke latakta chehra dekhke mera mood bhi kharaab hojaayega! So it is better that she goes! Upar se... yeh jaayegi toh ghar mein thodi der toh shanti hogi! Waise bhi bahut baat karti hai yeh!"

Geet's jaw dropped open as she stared at him in shock. Wahi toh main sochun ki yeh khadus meri side kyun le rahe hain! Uff! Dekhlungi aapko Mr. Khadus Khurana!

Daadima shook her head as she spoke up, "Baat ko samajhne ki koshish keejiye Geet beta! Hum aapke khushiyon ke aage nahi aana chaahte hain! Lekin pichli baar jo hua uske baad..."

"Pichli baar?", Geet piped up as she looked at Daadima in confusion.

"Daadima tumhaari send off party ki baat kar rahi hai Geet!", Maan's quiet voice brought clarity to Geet's mind and her eyes widened as reaction.

Comprehension filled her eyes as she looked at Daadima with worry. She ran to Daadima and knelt in front of her. She grasped Daadima's hands tightly, "Daadima! Main samajh sakti hoon aapke darr ko! Lekin us baat ko hue arsa hogaya! Aur yeh college ke dost nahi hai jinhonein mujhe akele chod diya! Yeh toh mere saath kaam karne waale log hai! Yeh log peeke insaan ko bhoolne waala log nahi hai! Yeh sab toh meri care karne waale log hain! Aur main bhi toh samajhdaar ban gayi hoon! I will be careful! Please jaane do Daadima!"

Daadima stared at her for few minutes and then she shook her head, "Nahi beta! Humaara dil nahi maan raha aapko bhejne ka! Iss club waali party ko toh aap bhool hi jaao!"

Geet bit her lip in worry "Par Daadima? Please! Please mujhe jaane do!"

Daadima shook her head.

Again Maan's quiet voice piped in, "Daadima! Aap kisiko iske saath kyun nahi bhejte! She can party aur aapki bhi pareshaani khatam!"

Geet looked at Maan, surprised that he actually wanted to solve her problem and then looked at Daadima with hope.

Daadima thought for a moment and then nodded, "Theek hai! Par tumhaare saath jaayega kaun? Hum iss umar mein toh club nahi aa sakte na?"

Geet bit her lip as Daadima thought for a moment and then smiled, "Haan! Hum Dev aur NT ko keh dete hain ki tumhare saath chale jaayein! Unki bhi outing ho jaayegi aur humein bhi tumhaare tension nahi hogi!"

"Sorry Saali dear! Sorry Daadima! I cannot go and neither can NT!", came Dev's voice and all turned to see Dev coming down the stairs.

"Kyun beta? Kya hogaya?", Daadima asked as she stood up.

Dev sighed, "NT ki tabiyat kharaab hai Daadima! And I am taking her to Doctor! Aate aate time lag jaayega!"

Geet sighed too, "Phir toh party cancel! Kyunki Daadima, Dev Jeej aur NT Didi toh nahi aa sakte mere saath!"

She pouted sadly as she sat in a nearby chair.

"Ek minute! Hum sab kisiko bhool rahe hain!", Dev piped up making Geet and Daadima look at him with hope.

Dev grinned, "Bro! Woh jaa sakte hain!"

"Kya?", came a roar as Maan Singh Khurana stood while glaring at his younger brother.

Geet looked at him worriedly while Dev continued to smile, "Haan bro! Why don't you go to this party? Geet is safest with you and you would also get a break from your work. And the best part, Daadima will be assured that Geet is safe! Sab khush!"

"NO!", Maan growled as he looked at his brother.

"But bro...", Dev tried to explain but Maan refused to listen, "No!"

"Maan!", finally Daadima shouted, "Dev ka idea perfect hai! Aap jaa rahe hain! Aur yeh humaara aakhri faisla hai! Samjhe aap?"

"But Daadima...", Maan was cut off by Daadima, "Humein aur kuch nahi sunna!"

Maan huffed in annoyance and then glared at Geet, "Ab khade khade mera mooh kya dekh rahi ho? Jaao! Get ready! Chalte hain tumhaare party mein!"

Maan spoke with so much venom in his voice that Geet gave him her sharpest glare. And if Geet's glare had the power to burn, Maan would have turned into ashes.

Geet grinned as she hugged her office friends happily. Geet and Maan had just reached the club where Geet and her friends had planned to celebrate her birthday and the moment she entered the club, Maan walked off to brood in a corner while Geet went to find her friends. And now her friends dragged her off to the dance floor where they joined the dancing in full swing. After half hour of dancing, one of Geet's friends called for the pre-ordered cake and soon Geet was cutting the cake while everyone clapped and sang birthday song. She fed the pieces to her friends but when it came to giving cake piece to Maan, she handed the piece to her friend and asked her to hand it over to him. Poor friend! She was Maan's employee and well versed with his anger and hence, shivering in her boots the girl went to hand over the cake. And when Maan took the piece while glaring at her, she squeaked and ran off.

"Mujhe samajh mein nahi aata ki tu boss se itni naaraaz kyun hai? Woh toh tere achche dost haina?", a friend asked after an hour passed and they took a break from dancing. All the girls surrounding Geet nodded wanting to know the story behind the tension brewing between Maan and Geet. Geet sighed as she explained the story from her fake birthday till Maan's last attempt at asking forgiveness. After hearing the story, all her friends made appropriate noises and shook their head except one. She simply questioned Geet, "Why don't you forgive him?" Geet huffed, "Kyun maaf karun? Ek toh dhang se maafi nahi maangte aur upar se mujhe ghussa dilaate hain! Aur kya bharosa ki woh kuch dino baad phir se apni baaton se mera dil na dukhaayein? No! I am not forgiving that fellow!"

"But agar tujhe pata chale that he is really sorry toh kya tu MK Sir ko maaf karegi?", another friend questioned. Geet nodded, "Haan! Maaf karungi kyunki I miss my friend and I miss our fights but how will I know sach bol rahe hain ki jhoot?"

All pondered at the puzzle for a while when finally a friend piped in, "Alcohol! Kya Maan Sir drink karte hain?" "What?", Geet was aghast, "Nahi nahi! Maan kabhi drink ko haath nahi lagaate unless koi corporate party ho aur tabhi bhi ek hi glass lete hain! Abhi bhi mocktail pee rahe hain! Sharaab nahi!"

"Toh kyun na hum sab milke unhein sharaab pila dein?", the same friend piped up making everyone's eyes wide, "KYA?" "Haan!", the friend uttered, "Kehte hain ki aadmi sharaab peene ke baad jhoot nahi bolta, sirf sach bolta hai! Toh kyun na Maan Sir ke mocktail mein sharaab daal dein aur phir unse sawaal poochein?" All girls were in shock.

"Pata hai uske baad kya hua Mannat? Uske baad jo hua uff... Maan ne sharaab peeke jo mere dil ki haalat ki... Hey Babaji!", Geet reminisced while Maan outside the room smirked. Tumhein lagta hai ki tumhaari uss plan ki wajah se maine sharaab pi aur woh sab hungama kiya lekin sach toh yeh hai ki...

Maan was walking from the restroom which was very close to where the girls were sitting when he heard one of Geet's friend say, "Toh kyun na hum sab milke unhein sharaab pila dein?" He stopped in the tracks in worry. Sharaab? What are these girls planning? Aur aisi ladkiyon ke saath Geet ghoomti hai? He continued to hear the further discussion and his eyes widened at their plan. They were going to get him drunk to get some truth out of him. What truth? He was intrigued by the plan and scuttled to take his seat near the bar just as one of the girls came to the bartender and told something to him. Rest of the girls along with Geet came and took a seat a bit closer to observe his reactions. Soon his drinks were spiked and he acted as if he was drinking them but he threw them in a nearby plant when the girls were not looking.

Aur is tarah maine tumhein ullu banaaya Mrs. Khurana! Maan mused as he heard Geet continuing with her tale, "Aur phir tumhaare papa sharaab se milaayi hui drink peete gaye aur peete gaye aur phir..."

Once the girls were sure that Maan was drunk enough, they sneaked to take a seat by him with Geet sitting closest to him, "Hello Maan!", Geet spoke with a smile. Maan, who was drunk by now (we are listening from Geet's point of view, remember! And according to Geet, Maan is fully drunk by now!), looked at her with narrowed eyes and then he smiled widely, "Geet! Meri sweet sweet Geet! How are you?" His voice was slurred and he swayed in his place. Geet looked at her friends with wide eyes and then nodded at her, informing her that it was time to ask the question.

"Maan! Kya aapko sach mein pachtaava ho raha hai ki aapne mera dil dukhaaya?", Geet asked softly. Her friends held their breath as they waited for Maan's answer. Maan looked at her innocently and then turning his finger into hook, he beckoned her closer. Geet bent forward and Maan whispered, "Why should I tell you? Main tumhein kyun bataaun?" He gave her a pout as he pulled back. Geet blinked in surprise. What was she supposed to reply to that? Hey Babaji! Geet took a deep breath, "Kyunki agar aapne jawaab diya toh shaayad main aapko maaf kardun!" She bit her lip as she waited for Maan to reply.

Maan grinned at her widely, "You know what! Main tumhaare saare sawaalon ka jawaab dunga", Geet and her friends grinned at that, "LEKIN... lekin mujhe kya milega?", Geet and her friends' grin fell flat at that. Geet looked at her friends in worry as Maan waited for her answer. After few minutes, Geet hesitantly replied, "Maafi?" Maan shook his head as he continued to sway drunkenly. He looked at her with drooping eyes, "That's it? Meri sachchai ki bas itni hi kimmat? Not fair!"

Geet huffed in worry. Now what to do? She looked at all her friends in worry and they all looked back at her in same way. Finally Maan spoke up, "Ek cheez hai jo agar tum mujhe dogi toh main tumhein tumhaare sawaal ka jawaab dunga!" Geet looked at him with wide eyes, "Kya?" Maan pouted, "Ek dance!"

"KYA?", Geet stood up in shock and her friends had to yank her down to not attract any attention. Maan smiled at the gobsmacked expression on Geet's face and nodded, "Ek dance karo mere saath and I will give you my answer! Karogi mere saath dance?" Saying this, Maan stood up and grabbed Geet's hand. Geet again gave her friends a glance and they all nodded. Geet still looked unsure and remain seated. She looked at the dance floor which was dark with dim lights flashing around and back at Maan. That is when Maan frowned and tightening his hold on her, he walked off to the dance floor dragging a reluctant Geet with him.

The music started just as they reached the dance floor. Maan stopped right in the middle of the floor and turned to look at Geet who looked back at him with shock. Suddenly, realizing where they were standing, Geet turned to walk off to the tables only for Maan to grab her hand.

Tu

Mera Aasmaan Sa Lage

Kyun

He pulled her towards him and she slammed right into him.

Uda Uda Sa Phirun

In Hawaaon Mein Kyun

They stared into each other's eyes.

Oh... Tu

Mera Raasta Sa Lage

Kyun

Geet's tried to pull her hand away but Maan's grip was stronger.

Juda Juda Sa Phirun

Teri Raahon Mein Kyun

Maan stared at struggling Geet with smile on his face. His eyes tried to take in her every expression as Geet continued to struggle against him.

Sondhi Hai Dhaani Hai

Baarish Ka Paani Hai

Khwaahish Puraani Hai

Tu Hi Tu

He cupped her cheek with other hand making her still at his touch.

Jheeni Hai Bheeni Hai

Chai Mein Cheeni Hai

Pyaale Mein Peeni Hai

Tu Hi Tu

She looked back at her hand and started to struggle as he again stared at her with a tender and loving smile on his face.

Meethi Bhi Lage

Thodi Khaari Lage

Chatkhaari Jara

Par Pyaari Lage

Tu

From her cheek, his hand slipped to her waist as he pulled her close making her look at him in shock.

Mera Aasmaan Sa Lage

Kyun

Uda Uda Sa Phirun

In Hawaaon Mein Kyun

Slowly they started to sway to the music.

"Geet!", Maan muttered, "I like you! Really like you! Do you like me too?" Geet was beyond shock now.

Before Geet could answer he turned her around and swung her out and in making her slam right into him. Her hair fell on her face and he slowly pushed them making her feel her heart beat up faster. She looked away but he nudged her face making her look back at him.

Tera Iraada Karta Hoon

Din Raat Tujhpe Marta Hoon

Dil Mera Tera Aadha Hai

Simple Sa Vaada Karta Hoon

He started to sway in the place making her sway too. His arms around her waist made her feel as if her whole body was on fire.

Tera Intezaar Hai

Dil Taar Taar Hai

Aaja Keh De Zara

Ke Pyaar Pyaar Pyaar Pyaar Hai...

He kissed her cheek and she took a sharp breath as an array of feelings hit her and made her knees feel weak. She looked at him in shock.

Tu

His hands moved up from her waist to her neck making her shiver at his touch.

Mera Aasmaan Sa Lage Kyun

He slowly cupped her cheek with one hand making her heart beat faster.

Uda Uda Sa Phirun

In Hawaaon Mein Kyun

He pushed her hair back with other hand.

Oh... Tu

He stepped closer and her eyes flicker to his lips and back to him.

Mera Raasta Sa Lage Kyun

He bent ahead and she closed her eyes in anticipation.

Juda Juda Sa Phirun

Teri Raahon Mein Kyun

Suddenly someone pushed Maan and Geet came out of her trance.

Tu

She pushed Maan away as he looked at her in confusion.

Tu

She ran off the dance floor while he continued to stand there.

Tu...

Geet finally reached her table where her friends were chatting with each other. No one had noticed her and Maan's last interaction due to dim lights and Geet was thankful for that. She looked back at where Maan must have been standing but he had vanished from the middle of the dance floor. She looked ahead and heaved a sigh of relief. Geet and her friends remained in the party till midnight as Geet tried to forget what had happened on the dance floor. When her friends finally decided to call it a night, Geet felt her heart beat faster. How was she supposed to face Maan again?

As one by one, Geet's friends started to go, Geet realised that she had to face Maan if she wanted to go home. She looked around for him but he was nowhere. Hey Babaji! Maan kahaan hai? She called his phone only for the driver to pick it up and tell her that as Maan was drunk he had called for the driver and he came here to pick them up. Geet asked about Maan and was told that Maan was already in the car.

Soon Geet came to the parking lot and got into the car. As the car started, she looked at Maan sitting beside her with his eyes closed. Suddenly, his hand grasped hers and he placed his head on her shoulder. Her eyes widened at his move and she looked at him. In a slow voice, he mumbled, "Geet! Geet please mujhe maaf kardo! I miss you! I miss talking to you! Baat na sahi, jhagda toh kar lo! I miss fighting with you!"

Geet realised that Maan was still drunk and she remembered her friend's idea. Taking her chance, she asked, "Kya aapko sach mein pachtaava hai mera dil dukhaane ka?" Maan nodded and looked at her with bleary eyes, "Please Geet! I am genuinely sorry!" Geet sighed softly as she realised if he asked forgiveness when drunk means he was really sorry. She nodded, "Theek hai! Maine aapko maaf kiya!" Maan smiled at her just as the car reached their home. As Geet got out of the car, she helped Maan get out too and soon both entered the house. They walked towards the stairs and just as they were to go to their rooms, Maan grasped Geet's hand and pulled her towards him. He placed a kiss on her forehead and walked off leaving a shocked Geet behind.

In her room, Geet sat as she wondered what had happened in the dance floor and what happened in the hall too? Why Maan kissed her on cheek on the dance floor and why he kissed her on her forehead right now? And was he really going to kiss her on her lips? Geet did not understand anything. Finally, Geet gave up thinking and decided that Maan was drunk and hence, he was doing such things. Ignoring her beating heart and butterflies in her stomach, Geet hit the bed.

"Aur uss din ke baad se tumhaare papa aur main phir se friends ban gaye!", Geet announced to Mannat.

Outside Maan smirked. Mere drunkard plan ne humaari phir se dosti bhi karwaayi Geet aur mujhe bonus mein do kiss dene bhi mil gaye! Kaash dance floor pe kisi ne dhakka nahi diya hota! Or else on your every birthday we could have celebrated our first kiss day!

SONG DETAILS:

Song is from the movie Ajab Gazabb Love (Year 2012) sung by Mohit Chauhan.

PRECAP:

Maan goes shirtless! Do I need to say more?

Thanks for reading, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. Have you seen the Maaneet Banner of Kya Pyar story? That banner was the inspiration for this update! Maan drunk and danced with Geet in GHSP and that pic in the banner is a pic from that dance sequence.

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
did dev say she is safest with maan
really mate
thats cause he doesnt know
waise toh she is safe
but only physically
kyunki jo inhone inke dil ke saath kiya not safe
her heart and mind were in turmoil
should have known he pretended to be drunk
maukke ka fiayda uthana koi maan se seekhe
hadh hai yaar
inhe ullu banaya
and geet agreed for it
woh toh acha hua he didnt drink
had he really gotten drunk
phir socho babaji kya hota inka
kya kya nahin inke muh se nikal jaata
he could have told her all about his plan to make her fall in love
and that he has been fighting with her on purpose
warna toh he loves her like crazy
and that would have ruined everything right
haila kya dance tha
sizzling chemistry
enough to burn all
and it did shame no one saw them
actually good they didnt
am sure maneet wouldnt like to be target of rumours and speculations then
after all these girls are crazy
course they are
hello they did try to get their boss drunk
is that wise
had he not another reason to pretend to be drunk then they could have been in big trouble
with of course maan
and yeh ladkiyan toh bahut khatarnak ideas deti hain
arrey kahin geet ki drinks bhi spiked karr di hotti toh
geet would never know right
i agree with maan
yeh babaji i cant believe i said that
but he is right what kind of friends are these
and she asked dadi to let her go
thinking same wont happen again
more like worse could have happened
haiyye maan got a hot hot dance with geet
he got her apology
and he managed to kiss her twice
isnt that just peachy
this plan sure didnt fail
waise dadi was right not to send her
kya kya hota hai geet ke saath
maan being such DD
saying to let her go
or she will be making others miserable too
hawww meanie
but course he didnt mean that
more like he was happy he got to spend more time with her
thanx dev mate
and NT too unknowingly of course
for letting maneet party man
ad what a party it was
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

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