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Read all of them Good job everyone! Personal fav is ever ours.

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A vow to abide you.

tere bin

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JIGSAW

simply awesome...
Loved it

the way maaneet povs were shown was awesome. .
They completed 18 years of teir marriage...
Both lived together with each other faults...

Loved it




NAYI UMANGEIIN...

both maaneet met on the set of nayi umangein..
As the story proceed both gratually fall in love and got married..
But kept it hidden for the trp reasons...

After marriage maan protectiveness towards geet increased..
Seeing dev romancing geet in front of his eyes made him boil..

He used to climb through pips to go ti geet rooms..

Loved it...
Awesome story...

Ever ours

Beautiful story. Loved its full of every emotions. How she lived on a single hope that he will come back one day. Loved how she kept going with the help of writing for him. She relied on info given by adi. He was the only source of info for her. He was the only person to support her when she totally lost her hope. But maan misunderstood her seeing both together that she moved on. I liked how she recited every vow of them to clear his misunderstanding

Tere Bin

So sad and emotional os. Just one truth they forced be apart. His mother never accepted that she was not real daughter of mohindar & rano. But glad that maan never fussed over such things that he truly loved her. She refused elope with him and go against his family wish. Finally she ended her life knowing he getting proposal for his marriage. I liked that he kept his promise to her. Loved the poems specially last one by maan.

Khamoshiyaan

Lovely os. Geet doing all her wifely work even after knowing he was unhappy with being married to her. He was used to her so much that he started missing her when she went to her cousin's marriage. He then understood her place in his life. Loved how he made up and they were together at the end.

The finished hour

Emional and painful OS. I ended as happens in evey hindu-muslim lovestroy. Sad that they never ended up together. Beautifully written.