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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Tere Bin

sad ending..but there are people like Geet in real who are very much impulsive about certain things and hasty in taking decisions without measuring the impact.

she chose to embrace death than having him away from her..and just for her he kept the promise to live a lifetime without her..

it's painful to see Maan in such lifeless condition, where he is searching her everywhere but nothing comforts his heart..

Geet's helplessness, fear, weakness, and Maan's pain was portrayed very well..loved the use of shayari too.

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#192

White flowers...

Really loved the way the story was portrayed...

From frnds to soulmates...

Her fears, his support...

Her teasing, his ignoring..

Her realistic, his romanticism...

Loved it...

And those lines the taught eachother...haha

Surly wanna read more from this writer as well as if catch me if u can writer...

Well done

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Manneet Pure love Confession

Maan n Geet meeting in different way.. Opps Geet got kidnapped. But our Maan is there.
Both love each other but suppress cause of situations.

Feeling sad for Geet. She suffered so much. Had a bad marriage experience, her dad had an accident.

Maan coming into her life again this time as a boss. Love is filled again in their lives. This time wen Maan proposes Geet get too much shocked. But Maan manages to convince her..

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

coming to the comment now-

ever ours-i loved this os.just loved it from the core of my heart.

tere bin-it was good but geet was very much weak in this os.there was no need to reveal the truth to entire family.geet did not fight at all for her love.

khamoshiyan-though i wanted geet to punish maan at least for a little time but i liked this os.it was really good.

catch me if you can-this was too good.i loved this os very much.

vaada-dramatic but good.

tu hi tu-this os really good.i loved it.i loved jealous maan.just loved it.

jigsaw-such a cute os.i just loved this geet.

nayi umangein-nice os.liked it but i don't think so there's any need to hide marriage now-a-days in industry.

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

I love almost all the One Shots, but some became my favorites !
All did a fab job by writing these OS's on One Single Dialogue 👏 👏
My votes go to..

Ever Ours-
Beautiful Story of an Air force Officer n his love ! Loved it totally
The Finished Hour-
Loved this OS, but I thought that was really unfinished in the end
Maan 'a muslim guy' Geet 'a hindu girl'
Amazing writing 👏
Catch me If You Can-
Lovely Story of a sweet, innocent yet bold girl n her crush 😳
Tu Hi Tu-
Awesome OS of Angry Young Ma(a)n n his secretory ! Loved it ❤️
Jigsaw-
Wonderful Story of a married couple n their journey with each other ! Super Liked it 😉
Nayi Umangen[\B]-
Superb Story of an Actor Geet n Her secret Actor Hubby Maan
One of the Beautiful OS I loved it here 👏
And Last but not the least,
[B]Vellai Pookal-
Superb Story of Two strangers then Two Friends then Two Lovers 😳
Loved it ! 👏

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BikewithGirl

@MG_Love

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Loved reading khamoshiyaan..when silence speaks
Beautifully written😳

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Ever Ours is my favourite...loved this story of an air-force officer and love..

Tere bin was sad at the end...I didn't like Geet ending her life...she should have fought for her love...

Khamoshiyan was nice..

The finished hour...I really liked this one...It touched the reality of people losing their love due to communal differences...

Catch Me if you can...It was a very nice light hearted OS...kept me hooked and interested...a nice happy one...

Vaada was too dramatic for me in the end...

Tu Hi Tu loved the story of angry Maan and his secretary...

Jigsaw...another awesome one with cute nok jokh and journey of a couple...

Khoobsurat...lovely OS...loved how Maan helped Geet in gaining her self confidence with his love...

Vellai Pookal... loved the journey of two strangers becoming friends

and then lovers...

Confession at first night...nice lovely cute confessions of Maaneet's meetings to their engagement...

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#198

I loved...Avow to abide by you..

superbly written in a so simple way..te bbest aspect of the story is that Maan is so shy here and Geet is so outspoken girl

She narrated her Haal-E-Dil in such a cute way

Thank God Geet ne stage par apni story dikhaayi warna ye Maan to bas sochta hi rah jata ki kaise Geet se I LOVE YOU kahe

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#199

amazing os tere bin..!! just gone through it..!! i literally cried alot after reading it..!! it directly touch my heart..!! as if i felt a strong connection with it..!! the writer has so perfectly described each and every emotion it has..!! It was heart wrenching...but nothing better ending can a writer had given it..!! Loved it..!! Hats off..!! Indeed it is true...not everytime there is a happy ending..but..ahh..well it was one of the best os i have read till date..!!

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Jigsaw

beautiful journey of Maaneet's married life..

first I loved the way the story was divided into Maan and Geet's perspective, that started in the night with his view and transitioned into her's the next morning.

and second, that they both remembered and cherished the beautiful & lively moments of fun, love, care, arguing, annoying, wanting to get annoyed and supporting each other, it actually felt like a confession...true, they do not need those lines.

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