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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

OS #6

Emotionally beautiful !

His sin became the reason for her life.

Maan was really blind ended up breaking her apart, leaving him to hunt with his own words every night.

Finally making his promise again, and leaving everything behind for their eternal journey.

I love Vicky's character in this OS.

Nicely written.

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nish285

@nish285

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Vellai Pookal(White flowers)
:-):-):-):-):-):-):-) the story made me smile so wide...!!!!!
"beautiful". .. ..!!! it was simply beautiful...
everthing from writing style to the story to the charterization was so good...
also i like the way the pace and flow was set in the story. ...meetin from strengers to bein friends to drivin close to one another to havin feelings to driftin apart to realizin der love...it was neat and clean wit proper order...!!!
no vagueness or loophole any where dat disrupts the story flow...
next i also noticed so many minute details to show der friendship..from things like sharin movies books and maan sharin his past. ..etc...and.wit so many oddr things like the part where it has shown dat divya knew bot the bond between maan and geet..and it s left for the readers to understand dat confrontation wud have happEned later on... yet the story did not seem dragged any where...all the transition from friendship to love conveyed very well...
geet s confession Was lovely and my favorite scne has to be...hmmm. ..two of them. ..one maan and geet teachin each oddr i love you in der own languages...and the oddr one where geet was punchin maan. ...also
i have a small suggestion to make i wanted the endin al little more elaborate...i mean sumthing like d wud meet in der graduation or sum thing like dat...!!!!
nevertheless it was pleasure readin the story nice piece of work...!!! good byeeezzz..
p.s. my like button not workin for me so plz count my vote..!
p.s.s. .as the story writer remains undisclosed i request the writer to send me a pm later on...i wud love to read more of your work...::-)):-)):-)):-)):-)).thankyou...!!!!!
good byeezzz:-):-)

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

OS # 7

hehe ... curiosity got the best out of him, making him J and finally confessing his love to his lady love.

It was simple sweet and cute story.

Enjoy reading every bit of it.

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

OS #8

It really stir the chord of my heart !

Beautifully written without any frills. Just the simple fact of everyone's life, where two different people bonded together for a life time, becoming the reason of their life, holding hands at each path of their lives.

Ending few lines awesomely describes one's life.

I don't know why the likes is less for such a beautiful story.