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happydays30

@happydays30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Ever ours
awesome n heart touching os
loved the ending

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Alisha0023

@Alisha0023

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

all the stories are so good..i cnt select a particular...thank you all the writers to give us the chance to read these ossum stories and relive our maaneet romance..may the best win..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Ever Ours

beautiful...the love, separation, the pain, uncertainty, wait, hope..

the initial confession, her little complaint that he never said it before..the use of locking the love, the vows that actually meant 'Zindagi ki har..', and

the letters depicting their emotional state..one showing the cruelty of wars, longing to get back to her, but held there for the duty and humanity, and the other one broken, waiting and hoping for his come back...was brilliant.

'live Dr Geet', just few words, which Maan meant her to live on and fulfill her dreams and Geet took it to strengthen her hope..and when it came true, the crippled hand did not matter.

beautifully written...started and ended with confession and the promise they lived throughout.

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nimu

@vishu10

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

"Khubsoorat"

Geet gone to party when their she find dev true colours.

later Maan geet spend night . this night show that geet trust maan.

maan explain her how beautiful she r.

maan hope that 1 half year she accepted him.

and last maan win her. love faith. trust.

"Love has it own way"
Geet is want love in her life. But scare to believe in. Maaneet r friends.
Maan so much love in with her.
Maan accident happen. Geet realised that she cant live without. Him.
She confess.
Also like yash meera character here.
They support geet.
Love it.

"Whats the Surprise"
Its just a wow surprise.
Any mom & dad happy . That their son give their a beautiful surprise.
And last Maaneet maan propose her. Love.it

"A vow to abied by you "
Maan first sight in love with geet.
He stalked her. Geet also sees him chupke chupke.
Maan family islovely.
When they confess eatchother.
Maan Dad told him that he want to...
Here maan without liesten. Told everything. Dad tease maan.
Such a lovely OS. Di .
Every Parents r happy for their children. I like it. When his dad say they r going to married each other.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Vellai Pookal (White Flowers)

from mere batch-mates to life partners..it is commendable for the natural progression that was depicted in such a short OS with words, scenes and feelings.

two people of different thoughts becoming friends and a lovely friendship they had, where they could tease each other, argue, fight and share personal thoughts, comfort each other...

Geet who once used to tease him by associating him with Divya, never knew the same would create an unpleasant feeling in her heart..and then both drifted away a little understanding the reason behind it..so many unspoken feelings they conveyed at the moment of parting away..

the last confession, Geet spoke about all the romantic things she once felt unrealistic..

and 'mi tuzya mulachi aai honar aahe' that was adorable, innocent and humorous at the same time..loved it.

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

OS #1

Very beautiful one !

It was an OS, it would have looked best if it ended with their confession and proposal. Locking themselves with their Ever ours promise. It would have been best with it simple and sweetness.

The further parts were really wonderful, She waiting for his return, her wait to embrace him in her arms again.

But I liked the first half part of the OS.