Maaneet Confession || OS Competition || Like and let the best win.. - Page 15

Well , it was a honour to read such beautiful works...it was a tough decision...I rated every os out of 10...So that I can state how I came to the conclusion that Vaada is the best story in the lot...😃...

VAADA-10 (winner)

Ever ours-9.6(1st runner up)

Vellai Pookal(White flowers)-9.6(1st runner up)

The finished hour-8.7(2nd runner up)

JIGSAW-8.6( special os close to my heart)

tere bin-8.5

KHUBSOORAT-8.4

Catch me if you can..-7.9

Khamoshiyaan " When Silence Speaks"..-7.8

Tu Hi Tu-7.6

Love has its own way-7.6

Nayi Umangein..-7.5

Avow to abide by you-7.4

Confession at first sight..-7.2

What's the Surprise-7

Manneet Pure love Confession-7

Vaada

WOW!! it was my first reaction after reading this beautiful piece of work...As if no words can be enough to describe how beautifully the whole plot was penned down...So a big applause to that writer...👏...Maan thought his fake promise will make him to win the bet , but it was not so...it was a start of his destruction...He lost his respect in front of his family...He lost the one who loved him the most...He lost his sanity & when at the end he understood that it was not mere words that he promised to geet...This words have deep meanings , he lost his life , but didn't go empty handed ...He got his lost love & committed to her "Zindagi ke har subah tum se shuru hogi aur har raat tum se khatam"...just beautiful...Also I would like to mention about the special character vicky ...He was there when geet needed him the most...He went against his brother & became a support system to geet...I would like to read this story as a short story where maaneet will reincarnate & vicky will be there to witness their epic love...😃

Ever ours

It's a story about love , pain of separation , wait with the harsh reality of war & their consequences on the people ...The best part was the letters...So beautiful...It was not OTT & very realistic...& the way geet reacted to adi at the end was superb...At the end when she ran after maan like a crazy as if her life is slipping from her hand every moment was beautifully written...But the fact that geet considered herself married to maan at the same day when they wanted to was the masterstroke...😃...Her love , her acceptance & her patience to everything was remarkable...At the same time maan's endurance to torture only to see his beloved geet was brilliantly written...A big applause to the writer...👏

Vellai Pookal(White flowers)

I just loved the progress of the story...No rush endings , no unrealistic happenings...very natural & I can relate to the story very easily...It's a story about two batchmates who were not even friends , but something clicked & they became friends...It started with studies , assignments & then slowly they became comfortable & became friends...I just loved maaneet interactions here...very interesting...I find it very cute when maaneet taught each other wrong sentences...Then their drifting apart , missing each others & realizing the depth of their relations...It is true that

"Love is when your gaze wavers without you knowing it, when that single person becomes your focal point even in a crowd..."

The finished hour

It was very heart wrenching...I found the style of writing very interesting...the past & the present was well synchronized...Also the theme of maaneet confession was justified very differently , very unique in all senses...The religious disputes & its ugly & horrified consequences were shown brilliantly...Not every love stories are meant to complete ...Not every love stories can bring a smile...The particular scene "But you had promised that my every morning will begin with you and every night will end with you. Main tumhari neki thi, ab kya ho gaya Maan?"

I wept on the phone.

"Main tumhara nahi raha" was fabulous...It send a chill to my bone...Its the harsh reality...Pata nahi kitni pyaar ki kahani aisi hi khatam hoti hai for the sake of religious riots...Maan didn't kill her physically , yet there was nothing left in her to live...sad indeed...

JIGSAW

I was beautiful & very special...this simple piece of writing shows the reality of married couple...Maan & geet ek dusre ke bina jitne adhoore hai , saath mein utne hi poore hai...loved their silly fights , their teasings...It showed that small small happiness can make life heavenly...I loved each & every small scenes in this story...just adorable...😳

tere bin

This story is painful...My heart cried for maan...😭.Geet could have been more brave ...i am not saying that eloping was a right decision , but suicide was also not a right decision...... Geet's one wrong decision ended in maan's lifelong pain ...He was a living dead...I personally think the ending could have been better...To portray a epic love story , the writer made the leads weak & submissive...She could have showed geet to lead a lonely life away from all in her own paradise with maan's loving memories & Maan to not bend in front of his families & wait for them to accept his love & then at the end their love to win...The marks I have given is only for maan & his love...

KHUBSOORAT

It was an amazing story...Maan is a charmer , but blunt...Dev is pathetic... just disgusting...He not only cheated geet but broke her self confidence...Then he came...Maan like a cool breeze changed everything...He made geet to respect herself & believe that she is beautiful...I loved the dialogue "it is but only because that night I got myself in you. You made me respect myself Maan, you gave me a reason to see myself in mirror and not to cringe, you made me beautiful that day. Mujhe Khubsoorti se milaya, mujhe khubsoorat mehsoos karwaya."...I loved the character of shalini who made dumbo maan to realize the reason behind geet's gloominess...😃