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icskwt

@icskwt

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

beautiful end for this lovely story...

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Rosmitha

@Rosmitha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

awesome story...

loved it...

u r a good writer 😊

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Amazing story.. Maan's 2nd chance was niot easy.. indeed.. it tests u till the point wich shows that u really deserves second chance n same happened with Maan Good.. one Adi.. Maneet marriage happene.. n Maneet bonded in sacred relation.. Loved this story..

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

AWESOME STORY👏👏

read it in one go😉

liked the way maan win his misty😃

adi is very caring😊

superb concept😃

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

oye when did u write this one 😆

sorry not evn able to follow others..
my life has become mess...
with one side offc n other side new stories bugging me 🤢

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

An Amazing Story
Geet has always loved Maan while he only looked at her as his best
friend but I guess been away fromhome and loved ones does make
one realize alot of things and so was in Maan's case
finally they got their happy ending by been together as husband
and wife

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

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😆

creating story around ur own story 😛

pehle hi maan guilt me half dead go gaya hai... and now adi ki punches
wah waah... geet ne bachay maan ko...
but i wud hav liked if geet punched maan 🤣
then kiss n make-up 😛
but only after making him pay for his all doings 😡😳
how could he...??
and y is he back now anyways 😡

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

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ye lo... unexpected..

maaan ko laga she is opportunist 😡
toh tum khud kya ho mr maan 😳

ghar ki murgi daal barabar...kyu maan

hehe... now i want more punishment for him... 😉

ps: dont look fir likes... i will press tgat latter... from mobile currently

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

3

uff ye geet kitni bholi hai... itni jaldi maan gayi..
but then... thats what is selfless un-conditional love ..

y are u hell bent on getting maan beaten up by adi 😛

tests by b-i-l starts... abb tera kya hoga maan 😉

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#130

4

thing getting better... with maan doing the tasks sincerely..
pinky and baby... they dont hav much role i think... anyway good that geets opening...

ye rishabh kon hai... is he baddy-baddy
or to just make maan J 😛

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