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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

For me Ty's pov is very imp coz he is vd her in every up and down...n I like him a lot too

Innocence the leap would be perfect...

But would go vd ur decision

Love unscripted and inevitable m waiting

Edited by maanmeet1 - 11 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Collide - dont remember dear...is it NY or London...
FFY - hmm cant wait for Maan to request and woo her to work with him...
Love me back - well Maan should get over the past and Geet too...
Innocence - cant wait for the updates...i love happy and naughty and cute waala updates and stories...
Undeniable - it will be helpful to know about Tyler too else in future Maan might get possessive and J...

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Collide - no u did not mention any name or place whee the other characters live.

FFY- yes u want geet to work with maan

Innocence - yes leap is necessary ..now geet should understand the importance of his marriage and her responsibility towards maan and maan'family.
I think u can show geet 18 years old taki maaneet ki story bhi thora aage bade.

Love me back ...I think ye story comlete ge ab isko jyada drag mat karo warna story apna charm kho degi..

undeniable - yes I also want to know Taylor's pov

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Piyu75

@Piyu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Collide - no you didn't the town they all live in.

FFY - yes this would be great if Geet worked with Maan. This way they can know each other.

Innocence - yes an leap is fine. Want Geet to understand the relationship a little better.

Love me back - want to how easily Geet forgive Masn. Is her dad going to say anything when he finds the truth.

Undeniable - want to how geet and Tyler meet and became so close.

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

dint read colide but i read all other i like them very much

you r a writer so u know how to shape it than reader so go as per your wish

waiting for updates

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Anny90

@Anny90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

FFY:

geet maan ke sath kaam karegi tabhi to kuchh ho payega..i mean ke agar wo maan ke sath time spend karegi tabhi to samaj payegi maan ko,usko nature ko,uske gusse ko,uske dadi ke liye jo pyar hai usko,uski aadato ko dekh payegi..or maan bhi samaj payega geet ko..

and these small things are required to make any relationship strong..waise bhi wo to ghar mein na ke barabar hi milte hai..matlab nahi milte aisa bhi bol sakte hai..

so i think it will be nice ki wo ek sath kaam kare..

Innocene:

haan..leap lena achha hoga..kyun ki abhi to maan ne out house mein shift hone ka soch liya hai..to na wo log sath mein honge na kuchh hoga..matlab their interaction will be very less..

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

hey tanya..

for ffy i think geet should work with maan ..so that they would get fair chance to understand each other..

innocence needs a leap..!!but dont end it it now...please ...!!

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vandy28

@vandy28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

collide...i dnt thnk u mentnd any plce specifically

Innocence...wld love leap...geet bit mature

FFY ...a big yes...yes geet shld wrk wd maan

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Did I mention where Collide characters were situated? Like in which place or town? I don't recall giving the name or anything. No you did not -would like to know

- Still undecided for FFY. Should Geet be working with Maan? 😕 Yes as this will bring them closer. They need to get 2 know each other
- Love me back : I'm thinking to end with one more part. Is there anything you'll like to see because I can't think of anything else to add. Please do not end it abruptly. Not sure atm, will let u know bt trust u.
- For Innocence I am thinking about to take a small leap or something. I would like your suggestions please. And suggestions on if you'd like to see anything. I have no problem with the leap.
- For Undeniable I have something in store for the next part, I would like to know if anyone wants Tyler's pov because he is quite an important person in Geet's life. Would Like this

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Thank you for all the responses.
Was so confused with Collide because I mentioned Glenwood springs in the last part. They live in a small town in USA - Glenwood Springs. 😳
FFY - I am still very undecided for that FF. If I let MG work together then it'd be like how many other writers have done it before and I'd really like to do something different. I've got a few things in mind and I'll see what I can come up with when the times comes in the FF.If I also have them not working together they won't be spending much time together and will barely learn about one another. So there's positives and negatives if I go either way.
Love me back - I'll be tying all loose ends, Geet's father will be shown and I will definitely show an epilogue of MG with their Nadira.
The Undeniable - Whether Tyler loves Geet more than a best friend you'll know when I will show a small pov of his.
A small leap of 2 yrs or something might be given soon in Innocence with flashbacks to see the small differences to Geet and Maan's relationship and what they'd done in the 2yrs.

Edited by -Diamonds- - 11 years ago