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Mansi

@mans22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I have read quite a few parts but not till date so will read and then let u know on that one di. Yes geet should work with maan n also some light changes in relation like geet opening up or maan trying to know n help.

Yup a leap would do where geet is a little more mature.

one of ur works that i love is love me back but I guess it has to end soon bcoz maan is revealing his past n as well geets father knows the truth if m not wrong.

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

ffy..when maneet work together only they will get 2 know each other

innocence..yup leap is needed so geet may get a lil mature

lmeb..thought it will hv some more maneet moments n geets talk with her dad

tylers pov

will like to read

collide..i dont rem ..

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Maangeetlove7

@Maangeetlove7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Geet should work with maan in FFY!

Innocence - I want geet to kind of be mad at maan for separating her from himself after the leap and slowly understanding the importance of their relationship!

Love me back! I love the ff maybe you could show geets dad knowing everything and getting mad at maan and tries to separate geet from him or something.

I actually want Ty's POV!

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Collide -- Nopes.You never mentioned the places. This thing did come in my mind when I saw the banner! LOL..but I then I thought you maybe going to describe in next parts!

FFY -- No! I dont want Geet working with Maan. Can this happen please?! as in most stories its like this,that MG come close becoz of Office! haha .. I hope you write something different 😳

Innocence -- A small leap would be fine. Geet will a lil bit mature to understand things.

Undeniable -- Definitely want Tyler's POV. I want to know his feelings about Geet, And how he thinks about Geet.

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

About collide... I also forgot ;)
Love me back...well it's main story is ended so u can if u wish as u r running tight schedule :|
Undeniable...ya I want his pov from a long time :D
Innocence
Well I'm loving it like this :(
If u wish take very small leap but don't chance the innocene n craziness ;)
N I'm waiting for mishty cat :P
But she's left alone in Maaneets home :( without her mumma ;P lolzz

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

FFY - geet should work with maan so that they get to know each other better
Innocence - a smalll leap will do
undeniable - woould like to know tylor's pov

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

FFY-yes i want geet to work with maan!!!

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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -Diamonds-
Need help with the following...Please do respond if you read any of those below.
- Did I mention where Collide characters were situated? Like in which place or town? I don't recall giving the name or anything.
- Still undecided for FFY. Should Geet be working with Maan? 😕
- Love me back : I'm thinking to end with one more part. Is there anything you'll like to see because I can't think of anything else to add.
- For Innocence I am thinking about to take a small leap or something. I would like your suggestions please. And suggestions on if you'd like to see anything.
- For Undeniable I have something in store for the next part, I would like to know if anyone wants Tyler's pov because he is quite an important person in Geet's life.

Collide: I need to catch up on that one but I don't recall where they are living.

FFY: Yes please. I do want Geet to work for Maan. I think they need to spend more time together. The time they spend at home is not one on one. And the coffee 'dates' are not working too well as Geet is still so quiet.

If they work together, it is a different atmosphere. Geet can learn to socialize with others and also learn about Maan the business person. And Maan can learn more about Geet and get closer.

Love me Back: I don't want this to end!!!! I think there is still one big issue that has not been dealt with and one you hinted at when Maan revealed the truth to Geet's father. I think there is a confrontation pending with Maan, Geet and her father.

And then maybe later, Maan's past comes back ... and with Geet's help and love he can fight his demons. Then maybe an ending ...

Innocence. A leap makes sense. Maybe Maan decides to pursue his studies in England or in the States?

Undeniable. Hmm i am conflicted. I really like Tyler. You have written him so well that there is a pull to want to know more about him. But at the same time, I do not want Tyler's story to over shadow Geet's story and more importantly (for me) Geet & Maan's story.

Maybe 2/3 chapters would be fine.

But also, I definitely do not want Tyler to be in love with Geet. Best friends, yes. One sided love? No pls. That would actually tear Geet apart, that the one person who has stood by her is the one she ends up hurting.

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annirogc

@annirogc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

hi dear,
for FFY, i want geet to work with maan..
for innocense, a small leap is better..
and for Love me back the story is incomplete.. u need to show geet father pov and how geet forgive this easily.
then undeniable u may add tyles pov also