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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Taslima.i wud say.its better if take a leap in innocence.
I wud say . It really does not matter if ty point of view is given in undeniable
love me back has to get an end in two updates I guess

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

1.Yes once you mentioned New York. 2. It is your decision whether Geet should Work for Maan or not, but I think it would be nice if she will work for Maan because of the story demand otherwise how will Maan know about capabilities of Geet. 3. It is a good decision to complete it but start a new story. 4. After leap Geet will not remain as innocent as she is now so postpone it for a few more updates. 5. Tyler is such a big support to Geet that his point of view is really important. So add his views . Looking forward for updates.

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

I read only collide n falling for u.
so in collide u never mention where they live.
in falling for u it will b fun to see them working together. kaam sath mein karenge tabhi to ek dusre ko jaan payenge. There will b interaction nok jhok ruthna manana then they will get closer na.

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Collide: u hvnt mentioned the town bt it reminds me of one tree hill so I personally imagine that place while reading it...

FFY: I really want geet to work with maan to be comfortable with him...

Innocence: leap wud be good bt not very long one maybe 2 yrs bt plz don't end it soon...

Undeniable: as u say Tyler is imp. Character si u guess his POV is important n really want to know how her perceives his relationship with geet.

Love me back: I guess everything is covered although I do want geets father to recover n forgive maan bt u cam end it as well...

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fabiyamg

@fabiyamg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

di I'm innocence and ffy reader I think geet should work for maan and in innocence I think leap is must geet is still immature she should understand her relationship with maan with leap that happens

Edited by fabiyamg - 11 years ago

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nish285

@nish285

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

for innocenc! .,,a leap can be given. ...but i think even after d grow der immaturity childh behaviour and der silly figh be der...i wud like dem to see fallin in love wit innocence...
and for ffy yup geet shud be workin for maan. ..

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

hi tanya
in FFY i would like to geet work with maan...sorry i didn't remember where they live in colide
love me back...he revealed his past and she could understand his behaviour ..i think it's right time to end the story in next two three parts...
i want to read tyler POV in undeniable...

innocence...yeah it will be good if u take leap in this story so story can move ahead little bit...

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

FFY i would like to see maaneet working together
Innocence yes u can take leap
Undeniable i want to read taylor pov to
collide i dont think u ever mentioned their place name
Love me not whatever u like

Edited by sangeeta33 - 11 years ago

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

ffy i think she should work with him...it will be fun to watch both getting used to each other there😆😆

love me back - can you make her father forgive both of them...any chance of seeing him recovered

iinocence - yeah leap will be fun

ready for whatever you are planning to give

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neethu

@Kartikan91

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

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- Collide - in one of the threads you mentioned the main charecters with supporting leads with their pics ...but didn't mention their native or background
- FFY- I think geet should not working with Maan and I feel she should be more independent ...one more thing- interference of geet's mother in her personal life us too much...
- Love me back : I would like to read the epilogue also.
- For Innocence - I would like geet to be more mature with innocent in heart...and this time after leap I would like maan to approach(or run behind) geet's love.
- For Undeniable - I would like to know Tyler's pov

Edited by karna91 - 11 years ago