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minelove24

@minelove24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

innocence..u cn take leap to undestand reln pov of geet

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@---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

im very much in love wiyth ffv . and itd high time they start sharing a picture becose only one is not able for couple pose .both have to have on frame..i think than their are more chance of options to expand story for u.like how why ,jealousy factor to emberresment ,to first collide ,to their un known first argument.u can have it all . and about innocence ,go frr leap dear ,as not only geet need maturity but maan also need to satel down with his feelings towards her.only than,their action and unwanted reaction from them will be thrilling abd justified.

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ishrath parveen

@9290860623

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

hi taslima collide i still didnt start reading so i dont no anything. ffy geet ko maan ke sath kaam karna chahiye nahi ti uska dar kaise khatam hoga innoccence main leap chalega geet ko thoda maturly sochna chahiye maan ko kafi saza mil chuki hai and other undenaible main tyler ka past reaveal hona chahiye he is very imp person in geet life.other stories i stillhave to read.

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

- Still undecided for FFY. Should Geet be working with Maan? 😕-yes geet should work with maan it will give them time to understand each other

- Love me back : I'm thinking to end with one more part. Is there anything you'll like to see because I can't think of anything else to add. -yes streching doesn't sound good

- For Innocence I am thinking about to take a small leap or something. I would like your suggestions please. And suggestions on if you'd like to see anything.-yes take a leap because i really want to know did geet understand maan decision or not

- For Undeniable I have something in store for the next part, I would like to know if anyone wants Tyler's pov because he is quite an important person in Geet's life.-yes i want to know his pov

I've currently sat with them all including Love Unscripted but I've come to halt trying to figure out how to take the next update for them. Love Unscripted will be posted in a couple of hours, I'm still typing for that.

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Shivika23

@Shivika23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Okay I think that

For COLLIDE I'm not sure where

For FFY yes they should work together. That way their relationship can take a step forward because they will be infront one another more often.

For LOVE ME BACK pls don't end it just like that. I want geet to know about her father knowing the truth and also the father forgiving maan.

For INNOCENCE yes pls take a leap

For UNDENIABLE yes I would like Tyler's point of view. I would like to know what he is thinking about. What he feels and so on

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cuteeagle65

@cuteeagle65

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

sorry i did not read collide & 4 falling 4 you I want geet work with maan 2 they no each other better & 4 innocene I think u should take leap 2 they progress their relationship & geet will be meture & 4 undeniable we want tyler pvo 2 no what he think about geet we will be also clear what he think how close they r & love me back I loved it but don't end soon want 2 read more

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Collide:

no dear i dont think u ever mentioned the place or anything..

FFY:

wud love to see themwork together...this will bridge up their gaps...

Love me back:

i think giving more twists to this maan geet wud nt be fair,..they have been thru lot already...i just wish to see how geet helps him overcome his father's hate...and be with him always..and some scenes with nadiya...

Innocence:

ya a leap wud be a good idea...were geet understands bit about their emotional relationship too!!

Undeniable:

yup..ty's point of view wud be intersting to knw since geet has always mentioned that he is as broken as her...wud love to see how they end up together..

ps: i read all ur stories... and absolutely love and adore them

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

FFY pls make them work together..will love to see dem in office😳

Innocence : a leap would be good.

Love Me Back : no more twists plss

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luvmg

@luvmg

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Ffy-no because maan is professional geet is new.if she works outside she will learn to be professional n maan can help in her work too in this way.sometimes professional n personal relations cause more harm than good.in office they cant mix work with feelings.

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -Diamonds-
Need help with the following...Please do respond if you read any of those below.
- Did I mention where Collide characters were situated? Like in which place or town? I don't recall giving the name or anything.
not a Collide reader so wouldn't know 😳
- Still undecided for FFY. Should Geet be working with Maan? 😕
I think she should work with him . We can have some office moments , office party n all
- Love me back : I'm thinking to end with one more part. Is there anything you'll like to see because I can't think of anything else to add.
Aww I loved Love Me Back . Well after the truth is revealed we can see some updates of the changed feeling of Geet for Maan , Geet meeting up with her dad , you know tying the ends 😛
- For Innocence I am thinking about to take a small leap or something. I would like your suggestions please. And suggestions on if you'd like to see anything.
Leap ... total YES for Innocence . A little evolving of Geet's character will be good
- For Undeniable I have something in store for the next part, I would like to know if anyone wants Tyler's pov because he is quite an important person in Geet's life.
I love Tyler so 👍🏼
I've currently sat with them all including Love Unscripted but I've come to halt trying to figure out how to take the next update for them. Love Unscripted will be posted in a couple of hours, I'm still typing for that.